Cultivation of Immortality for Hundreds of Generations: Starting from Death at the End of Life in the Ninth Life

Every time you are reborn, proficiency is not inherited? Restart them all?

. . . There is a big loophole in the logic. Why don't you save things in advance when you are just starting out in each life? Otherwise, if you die suddenly, your whole life will be in vain.

No, how can you be so stupid if you live ten lifetimes just by reading the introduction?

1. The sequence of story scenes is too blunt! It's not even taken over, you have to react to each scene to understand the connection! Somewhat blunt! Suggestion: Make a perfect transition and study the story connection! 2. The story development is not intuitive enough! There are enough conspiracies and tricks, but he seems petty! The protagonist's character seems cold enough, but not cold-blooded enough! He exploits his own sons and nephews without nurturing them, and always gives a wide berth to those with ulterior motives! Not like someone who reincarnated in the eleventh life, but more like a person with a withdrawn personality who first came to life! A bit twisted! Suggestion: After taking revenge, let the protagonist think about it. The protagonist is not striving for success in one life. Many people who write about hundreds of lives are just wandering around in one life! So boring! Reincarnation novels are suitable for foreshadowing and sitting behind the scenes! Write about Machiavellian battles! Not suitable for taking the initiative! After taking revenge, be bold and bravely die again for some goals, or research new skills and come up with new ideas! 3. The method of practice is not clear. It seems that you can practice multiple methods and integrate them (mentioned the Tongyouhuo that integrates the True Yang Sutra), but it seems that you can only practice a single method! Only when laws are abolished can new laws be enacted (revised by real branches)! It seems that the author intends to open a new system (qi training to open meridians and acupoints, which has not existed before), so does foundation building have a name (Xuanjian system) (subjective and personal opinion). In fact, I have always wondered, since spiritual roots have attributes, and the cultivation world has developed over the years, why are there no techniques that can perfectly utilize the attributes of each spiritual root! ? Suggestion: The author may consider writing about a system in which the main character creates a skill that perfectly brings out his own skills, such as wood belongs to vegetation, fire belongs to True Yang Sutra, water belongs to Penglai Jade Zhenjue, metal Shushan Sword Jue, etc.! Fusion of Several Lifetimes (Four Symbols Zhenyu [Prison] Gong) Personal point of view, not written by a gesticulating author! Please don't be influenced by me, come on, be good at it🌿

A hundred generations of cultivating immortals, your tenth life is too detailed. What will you do in the future if you do this? Or should you just pass it in this life? Oh, give up.

Since you have been cultivating immortality for a hundred generations, your tenth life is too detailed.

The first picture was too immersive, and I didn't want to see the second picture. If the author wants to make money, it's better to write a new book. I haven't even finished Chapter 1 and I don't want to read Chapter 2 anymore. You've got no use writing this.

Book friends who have received it can go to the red envelope square to receive it.

First, the title of the book is too similar to a novice novel or a studio fast-food novel, so it needs to be changed. This is a more important point. Some people will be dissuaded from reading the title. Second, I actually like the plot twist. I feel that it is quite like the Black Myth Wukong, where the chapters and chapters are connected and the plot is connected. Some blank spaces actually leave room for imagination. It would be even better if the catalog is made into a chapter and released. When will the third one be put on the shelves?

I'll reply when I have time, and I'll just listen to my advice.

The first few chapters of this novel are okay, but the latter part is a bit like a martial arts novel and makes me confused.

I read the title and translated it, Game Over

After reading the new title, I couldn't recall the old one.

The plot is very structured, which is not much better than Xiaobai's novel. Nowadays, many people use small accounts to complain, so the author does not need to pay too much attention to it.

It looks okay from the front, and the writing is okay I am speechless at this pace, too much is not enough, I started to set up the vision of saving the world during the Qi training period, how can I put it, it is so unnecessary, it is normal logic to eat as much food as you have the strength, you are only in the Qi training period. Alright, who knows if tomorrow will be the aftermath of the Jindan battle. It's like a three-year-old child with an IQ of 50,000 is asked to save the world when he grows up. Such a young child has no ability to survive and has poor resistance. Don't you think it's against you to tell him this? At least it is in line with most people's understanding that people have some physical ability and even power when they are teenagers. Don't be exposed to the world before you start practicing Qi every day. It is so fast that it makes people speechless. Even if you are reborn a trillion times, you may have been the overlord of the universe. Now just practice Qi. Don't go too far. Or just give him a plug-in. If you are invincible or no one can kill, just go out and become a super god Normal cultivation and improvement should follow the normal logic that conforms to most cognitions For example, in the early stage of Qi training, you should consider mid- to late-stage resources and so on, and in the later stage of Qi training, you should consider perfect foundation building and so on When you are practicing Qi, you should consider saving the Daoting world. Why do you want to do this in such a small pattern Simply save eternal time and space, countless parallel universes, or make the pattern bigger Do you think it is normal? Does it conform to common people's perception? The progress of Shuangwen is normal, don't be too outrageous, be more normal, speeding up the pace can increase the upgrade speed, but don't be too outrageous and seriously deviate from the current strength level of Pig's Feet

I am rambling here and there, trying to express the hierarchy... But I can't control it well and the writing is messy.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down, work hard and encourage each other 😁

Come on, it's a good write-up. I'll give you my monthly ticket.

When will the author and the whole group be able to talk about it together?

There are really not many authors that I can read. (I can't stand the books written by veteran authors. I have a keen eye and only select new books.)