I Cultivated to Pure Yang Infinity, Only to Discover This Is a World of the Weird

By relying on the vision of cultivation, one can make powerful Weird people unbearable. He himself is also very powerful, and can easily light a fire, but in the first few chapters, on the way down the mountain, he encountered a steep road and had to climb down. It felt like he was just a normal person with a strong body, and the performance of the dragon fish was just like some novels about me being just a farmer but a top boss in the world of immortality, which were distorted and exaggerated. Also, if your clothes get wet when it rains, you can't use steam to dry them. This is too inconsistent.

Rt, the so-called Taoist heart of the protagonist is too abrupt, and your foreshadowing is not enough. Just seeing a picture makes me want to die, as if I have entered the state of a sage. Your turning point is too stiff. I could hold back this kind of blunt turning point in high school. It is very unsmooth. This is the biggest poisonous point I have seen so far. Lastly, I would like to say: The above is just my personal opinion, you are the one who criticizes me.

In the first picture, when others come to offer incense and pray for blessings, you ask them what happened at home. 😥😥😥

Tai Chi. Isn't Tai Chi Yin and Yang? Why did Tai Chi become Pure Yang?

The writing is good, it would be better if it was less pretentious.

I thought I would travel around the world and write stories about those people, adding some pure fairy feeling. The result is no, there is no such grand narrative and epic feeling. Well, I can watch it, but it's a pity that it doesn't have that carefree, natural sense of immortality and a popular story. It's a pity that it didn't go that way. There seems to be a book called Lan Ke Qi Yuan. The front part is quite good, but the back part lacks the ambiguity and story. I can see it, but it's not interesting. It's a pity. It would be better if I didn't become a mountain god but traveled down the mountain.

Every two chapters, the protagonist's actions must bring some fun, even if it's one or two saucy words or counter-routines, no matter how simple happiness is. Any plot that is divorced from the joy of development, showing off in front of others, or pretending to be a slap in the face will become a piece of writing and become unhappy.

By Chapter 78, the style of the novel changed, and it didn't feel like it was written by one person. It was quite a strange novel. I'll leave it for now, it looks pretty good in front.

I'm almost going to be a eunuch. I can't understand what's written more and more.

I'm a eunuch. I haven't followed you for so long and I won't explain why. My quality is extremely poor.