Who Is Anxious? Are You in a Hurry? It Seems I Was Right

The writing is clear and fluent, and there is nothing that I can't stand. There seems to be a harem tendency. The female characters have somewhat overlapping personality traits, and sometimes it's hard to tell who is who when watching them. Overall it's pretty good, looking forward to the follow-up

As we all know, the first posts about new books are from the author.

I read a similar book called "The more they object, the more it means I'm doing the right thing" They all traveled back to the original NPCs and passed the level through various evil ways I feel that the writing here is a little greener, and the overall work and rhythm can be better. Come on

As title. I don't know if it's because everyone is reading books. Although the collection data is okay, and the comment section and paragraph comments are gradually increasing, the reading is still a mess. After chatting with the editor, he suggested that I move the update time to a later time and try to catch up after reading it. In order to be recommended, Xiaopoujie can only try to postpone it until almost midnight on Wednesday to post a new chapter. Readers can wait until the update comes out on Wednesday afternoon to read a four-chapter series. Of course, if the big readers are willing to reward me and read it as soon as it is updated, I will be happier [I don't mean to force it]. But on this day, other times it will be updated at 5pm. Xiao Pujie is also kowtowing here. I beg you readers to follow it up. This is really important to me. ps: If you have any comments or questions, you can leave a message below this article. I will read it and answer those who can answer [24-hour high-intensity brushing of the comment area. Jpg].

There are so many characters, are you good at writing them? Don't do this with food

After seeing the latest chapter, the plot processing and characterization of the characters are very good. The writing style and plot are quite interesting. There are no poisonous points so far. The dialogue at the end of the first volume made my eyes shine. I highly recommend watching it.

I've read almost 10 chapters. The writing and plot are okay, there's nothing toxic about it, but there are too many characters and too many dialogues.

Let's take a look at the first three pictures 😎

The writing is very good, no major problems. Some details are not in place. For example, in the plot of Kyle's Trial, the protagonist's own magic was used in the end. The author used Leo to test it, which is good and shows that he has thought of it, but compared to the real serious trial, the sudden appearance of this magic is still a bit inconsistent. But this book is a light novel, so you don't need to pay so much attention to it. I would like to strongly praise the author. The "Let's go play" at the end of the first volume is very touching, beautiful and I love to read it. Writing a book is a process of growing up slowly. I hope the author will work hard and I will continue to follow the book.

The writing is quite good, why do I feel that the data is not ideal 🥺