I Spent a Lot of Money in the World of Immortality Seeking a Child

The subject matter is good and the writing is average. It feels like the economic system is about to collapse even before it's released, let alone the realm. Can be used as hay.

To be honest, if you are not an old fan of this name, most people will not click on it.

The title of this book is not an ordinary explosion 😰

He already has a portable space, but the various monsters and beasts he cultivated are just for the purpose of killing them and then transfer some of their abilities to themselves? It also specifically describes those little monster animals that were cultivated and treated the protagonist as their mother and then died wondering why their mother wanted to kill them? Author, are you okay?

Just run to another city, isn't it? Just pretend that all the people who appear now are enemies. Check for anything. In fact, the protagonist is still here thinking about whether he can inherit his father's resources.

It turned out to be a female video, forget it, let's do it. Don't tell me my name when you write it down

It's really well written. Change the name. There are many people who like beast control at Qidian. You change the name and profile to "beast control", so that you have the basic base. Later, if you want to write about educating people, you will forcefully say that humans are also beasts. Keep the basic base first.

Raised and raised. Raised to death. It really doesn't work. Authorize others to continue writing.

Alas, the main problem is the name. The name is not attractive at all. If I didn't read the author, I would have thought it was some flamboyant book. Be careful next time you choose a name

Otherwise, this author looks familiar to me after reading many of his works. From this book to this introduction, I feel that there is no need to read the white stallion's works and studio. .

Very good book. . . Why did you cut it?

All the books I ordered were for eunuchs. I won't order them anymore.

How can I put it this way? In one cave, one Fu Bo can write 24 pictures. It's not finished yet. I'm tired of aesthetics and the pace is too slow.

I just read a book that is similar to this book. I have read Chapter 66 of that book. The novice map has not ended yet, and the protagonist has not escaped the control of the old devil. My patience has been exhausted. Like this book, there are so many chapters and I still haven't escaped. I hope the blood sacrifice map will end soon.

Fragmentation is a magical skill. It can be directly used in conjunction with base production to make the Holy Grail. The Holy Grail of 100% physical sensation. Isn't this a direct hit?

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Gone again😭

It's a pity to cut it. I analyzed the author's question. I like his ideas very much. In fact, the early plot at the sacrificial site is very exciting. That kind of small scene is best for character building. It is suitable to create more impressive characters and write a first volume of several hundred thousand words. After the first volume is over, leave some reliable and impressive people for the protagonist to take away. To be honest, the author has a big weakness in characterization. Absolutely no understanding of human nature. The plot is a story composed of characters, and the collisions and confrontations between people are also the most expressive. Relying only on your imagination is like walking on one leg, even if that leg is exceptionally perfect. For example: Look at the character Fu Bo who has been with the protagonist the longest and has written the most words. It is as if he has been engraved with the thought of "loyalty" and is stronger than a robot. Only fairy tales have this kind of absolutely superficial characterization. An article with millions of words needs to be shaped like this... How do you get so many words together? Not only Fu Bo, but also the characters created by the author have a faint sense of "violation". Many people probably backed away after seeing this sense of violation. A family like the protagonist who makes black gloves for officials and can throw them away at any time (do you know the original meaning of "glove") has low authority, and the cultivation of die-hard loyal servants is not persuasive enough, and the persona is difficult to hold up. It's not even as convincing as the old-fashioned saying that you owe God a favor and repay it with your life. There is something hugely wrong with the protagonist and he is suddenly able to do so many things. Fu Bo also acts like an idiot and immediately admits it easily. In a cult situation, he does not even have the basic thinking ability and vigilance. It seems that when the protagonist says "Trust me", Fubo says "Okay" and executes it. Why? Are you big-faced? Seeing the protagonist's face being indifferent to the death of Fu Bo, Fu Bo was seriously injured and still had to help him detect dangers and help him try out the black market. Fu Bo also had a look of relief on his face, without feeling any sadness at all. (The protagonist knows that he will save Fu Bo, but Fu Bo doesn't know.) This kind of character collision has no sense of experience or story. Originally, in a closed environment of a cult, a place of life and death, if we write about the tension between Fu Bo's suspicion and loyalty, the tension between newcomers and old people in a desperate situation, and the tension between priests and men in black robes, we would create several impressive characters and let them die to serve the plot or escape with the protagonist. All are very well arranged. I feel like I could write hundreds of thousands of words. Let the author's golden finger penetrate people's hearts and build empathy for the characters. It's a pity that it ended so quickly. The author also wrote a few characters with names, but they just gave them names, and there was no writing or plot to serve them. Without a supporting plot, the character cannot be established. Character design is not just a list of sentences, it should serve their plot. In addition to Fu Bo, a very dramatic character, there are several serious drama characters in the back, the old prostitute named Sun, and the eldest brother named Ji. They are all portrayed as tools like Fu Bo, who believe whatever the protagonist says. It goes against human nature to sacrifice oneself and benefit others, without asking for anything in return, just to help the protagonist. The protagonist is as cold and selfish towards them as Fu Bo. The arrangement of "beauties saving heroes" is also terrible. It is simply an insult to people's IQ. What's the charm of this story about a bunch of silly pieces of paper complimenting a protagonist? Even if there are many ideas that make people's eyes sparkle. The author's imagination was definitely great at the starting point. I also read the last one with great enthusiasm, but then I was forced to give up writing it. In fact, I really want to see these ideas come into play, I think it will be very exciting. I hope the author can consciously enhance his ability to write characters during the period of decadence. It's like the author himself put a lot of thought into designing the ideas, so the ideas are really great. The time and attention an author invests in characterization can certainly make a big difference. First of all, you have to treat the supporting characters as individuals, that is, in addition to taking on the role of the protagonist, you also take on the role of the supporting role and think about whether it is reasonable or not. Because I want to see these interesting ideas turn into wonderful stories, I will say a few more words. If you think it is nonsense, you can ignore it.

My imagination is OK, I can escape from death in the front, but I can't watch it after I escape. I feel that the pig's trotters are not intelligent enough and the characters do not match. The pig's trotters are not cautious at all. A gentleman does not stand behind a dangerous wall. The attitude of the Yu family is wrong. It is better to run away immediately and change the city. How to recruit the subordinates to inquire about it later. The second point is that there is a problem with pig's feet but there is no long-term plan. Instead of finding a safe place to grow, they develop in cities within the enemy's sphere of influence.