Mystery Revival: Starting at S-Rank, I Measure the Mortal Realm

I've read Chapter 30 and it's all written in a mess. I have no idea what it's about. There are a lot of good reviews in the comment section, and they also say that the rest of it is good. I don't know where to start.

Mo Yu (Mo Yu's version of Tears of the Ghost Mother, Cowherd in the Rain, Incomplete State) [Rule 1]: Through the rain curtain, the supernatural strength can be superimposed, and a permanent layer of rain curtain has an extraordinary physique; The second layer of rain curtain: can see through the less terrifying supernatural beings, such as the ghost realm that knocks on the door (ordinary ghost eyes can break free); The third layer of rain curtain: opens the gray rain ghost realm; The fourth layer of rain curtain: the deep ghost realm, manifested as a gray lake (equal to the third to fourth layers of the ghost eye ghost realm, because the four layers of ghost eyes have no obvious effect, and each layer of rain curtain here has a role); The fifth layer of rain curtain: opens the deep ghost realm with no height and bottom, and superimposes supernatural powers, which can reversely invade some supernatural places; The sixth layer of rain curtain: with the help of black umbrellas, unlimited invasion can be achieved. Seventh layer of rain curtain: dismember time, split supernatural beings Eighth layer of rain curtain:... Ninth layer of rain curtain:... [Rule 2]: Every drop of rain has suppression. The suppression is extremely weak but can be superimposed if there is an attachment. Rule 3: A sound curse can erase the sound and can be perceived through the sound. Ordinary people will go insane. [Rule 4]: Supernatural melting, rain can melt buildings, and weak supernatural powers [Rule 5]: Infinite puzzles, each puzzle can superimpose the ghost realm of the Ghost Mother's Tears and produce new supernatural beings. Man at the window (window without fan, ghost painting frame, ghost window) [Rule 1]: The state of the man at the window without a body, immune to most physical attacks. [Rule 2]: You can appear through any window in your field of vision and the complete unbroken window in your memory (even any window with the concept of a window), and use your field of vision to descend at a very fast speed [Rule 3]: There is no limit to the formation and creation of windows within the Mo Yu Ghost Domain. Household, perform unlimited flashes [Rule 4]: Suppress and imprison a regional picture (frame), block the window to trigger detention, ordinary people will die [Rule 5]: Lead to a supernatural place, connect to the supernatural being controlled by yourself to produce unknown changes Strange Crow·Twilight Church (the consciousness starves to death, but does not eat the power of the crow) [Rule 1]: The ghost that seizes the consciousness grows infinitely, the strange crow can eat the consciousness level and eat supernatural food, and expands the human form on the prayer bench in the church (has Louis XVI guillotine, evil swamp, death Hotel of the Dead, Ghostly Painted Woman, Venus Broken Arm, Cemetery of the Undead, etc., Dozens of Chinese and Western consciousness-level supernatural beings, including various consciousness-level methods such as stealing memory and controlling the humanoid Gundam) [Rule 2]: Supernatural blockade, twilight ghost realm, the effect is better when combined with a Western chessboard. Lazy Ghost (Moyu Jigsaw Puzzle) [Law 1]: Delay the occurrence of events, such as the resurrection of the evil ghost and arrow shooting [Law 2]: Normally too lazy to revive Frozen Ghost (Mo Yu Puzzle) [Law 1]: Extremely Cold Ghost Realm, the second floor of the hospital [Rule 2]: Concept freeze, false time Black Umbrella (Moyu Jigsaw Puzzle) [Rule 1]: Open the sixth floor of rain curtain unlimited invasion [Rule 2]: The real sixth floor will never return, one of the trump cards will be destroyed together. Gui Yu (Mo Yu Jigsaw Puzzle) [Law 1]: Gui Yun (Mo Yu Puzzle) [Law 1]: Has a black cloud and mist ghost realm that can shield the detection and perception of supernatural abilities [Law 2]: Being in a ghost realm will assimilate people into clouds Ghosts thunder (it doesn't necessarily thunder when it rains) [Law 1]: Purple-black thunder and lightning, capable of attacking very quickly [Law 2]: Lightning scars Cold Ghost Blood (the product of the confrontation between Mo Yu, Ghost Mother, and Ghost Blood, Silence) [Rule 1]: Silence has not been opened Ghost Story (Development-Climax Superposition State) [Rule 1]: Repair The ability to change cannot be detected by myself unless it enters a new stage of ghost stories [Rule 2]: After entering the development stage, you will gain the ability to restart. If you die, the current story will be recognized as a branch line, and you will rewind to the point in time when the branch occurred and continue the main line (stealing supernatural powers will increase) Controllable) [Rule 3]: Will not kill people directly, but will kill people indirectly in large quantities through the end of the story stage (such as natural disasters and man-made disasters) Ghost Ring (Unknown Promise) [Rule 1]: The promise will definitely happen, no matter It is reversible and belongs to the supernatural level of cause and effect. If there is a time agreement, even if it is restricted by gold, it will modify the causal facts restricted by gold before the restriction, indirectly avoiding gold [Rule 2]: Breach of contract will be attacked by cause and effect, strong violation The date is met by an irresistible female ghost screaming at the level of consciousness [Rule 3]: Ghost Bride Puzzle Ship without Sail (Ghost Ship) [Rule 1]: Marks have been left River without Banks (Ghost of Huangquan) River) [Law 1]: Re-reflecting history, re-enacting evil ghosts [Law 2]: Unable to suppress, crushing in the ghost realm Death without a burial place (incomplete state) [Law 1]: "Besides humans and ghosts"

Why do indigenous protagonists lose points? Because you can't write better than the original work, readers will subconsciously compare it with the original work to see whether the character creation is in place, whether the plot makes up for the shortcomings of the original work, and whether there are any interesting points. Any flaws will be infinitely magnified, so this is why people write about time-travelers who are foresighted, because this is an exciting point in itself. Unless the character plot you create can make up for the above loopholes, the end is destined to be a failure.

I don't understand why you are so resistant to the indigenous people? Or do most people just want to read cool stories about mysterious recovery settings?

The writing will not be based on time travel. Although the protagonist's identity is relatively special/ordinary, even if you want it, you can't get it. You can just think of yourself as aboriginals, because from the beginning, you want to describe the terror and despair of the original work as much as possible. If you travel through time, most of the horror will be reduced in terms of memory, not to mention a bunch of golden fingers. At this time, the narrow road may not lead to the smooth road to the other side.

Blanch, go, ignore!

The black umbrella written by the author is too weak. Later Yang Jian commented that if you don't drive the ghost bus, you can only die in the black umbrella. Even if you can drive the ghost bus, you can only gamble your life in front of the black umbrella. But now that the protagonist has completely controlled the black umbrella, the four kings can compete with the six-story ghost realm of the black umbrella, and they can also stop the protagonist who has completely controlled the black umbrella.

Xiao Yang's answers in the original novel are obviously all there, but a bunch of fan protagonists are all time-travelers who have foresighted it, and I really can't stand it when they have to work as a dog for the headquarters. On the contrary, it is Zhou Yi who has the right attitude. He is as crazy as the native Yang Jian. The original work has made it very clear: as long as you are strong enough, the headquarters will lick you. A group of fans who control four or five ghosts will not be happy even if they want to! Zhou Yi and Yang Jian have only managed three ghosts at this stage, let alone those who start with a deadlock and have strange starts. It's so beautiful. Although it is lacking in writing, there will be no very objectionable plots. (I just want to say, since you can't imagine things you haven't seen, then why not write in a direction that is beneficial to you and not aggrieved!)

The plot of entering No. 7 Middle School poisoned me to death, and the choice to control the person next to the window was decided at the first glance. How could a fierce ghost that you have never seen or interacted with become the only choice? The character creation is really outrageous. Is this the harshness of the original character? The protagonist wanted to cooperate with Yang Jian to kill Zhao Kaiming, but when they disagreed, Yang Jian took action. As a result, the protagonist also sent supernatural items and rainwater derived from his own supernatural powers to Yang Jian. The nanny was not so considerate, right? The protagonist gave me a very strange feeling. Her personality is good and bad, and she is decisive in killing and becomes a loser in the back The same goes for the shaping of female characters. A female anchor who sells her position will actually pity the protagonist after being saved by the protagonist? I fantasized that the protagonist was my younger brother. I was drugged and fainted several times here I read it back and forth seven or eight times, but every time I couldn't get through the previous plot.

I have seen the only fandom that controls animals. The ideas and imagination are really strong. The restart of the Wang family's ancient house, Yang Xiao's foreshadowing, Li Qingzhi's foreshadowing, crow instinct, the black umbrella law... A bunch of things are all connected together, hahaha, it's so cool, the most important thing It's still logical and fun, it's not a mindless confrontation with a terrifying level. It's really strong with over a million combat power and it's not broken. There are so many new ideas that I really love it. 😍 The focus of Gouzi's ghost dream is eating, but Yang Jian's control is normal. Control is the key here, it depends on the crow's magic.