Zhutian: the System Wants Bao Zheng to Chop Me Down

The protagonist is not only a slave to the system, but also a consort, what the hell is that? Learn more about historical facts. This thing is worse than the crooked son-in-law of the Dragon King who likes to eat big mouths. Seeing the princess wife raising a male slave, you still can't resist. With this status, you are not as good as a beggar.

The subject matter is interesting, but it's a pity that the protagonist is a system slave

It's not what you think. Author, you can obviously write it very smoothly, but I have read it all, and I feel that you wrote it completely, and then deleted all the good parts, leaving the dross.

Listen to my brother's advice, stop writing and go make screws. You are not suitable for this industry.

Forget it if you pick a second edition of an unpopular work, I won't feel happy at all after reading the first volume. I still need to practice more on the plot structure.

It feels like the author is not writing a book seriously, but just watching some videos and writing to vent. Can this kind of plot not have a follow-up? That's not how the blank space is left.

Fortunately, Bao Zheng, the readers of the latter two worlds are not familiar with or even know about them. It seems inexplicable and unintelligible 🙄

The subject matter is good, but the writing power is not enough. If you continue to write the plot, it will collapse. I think it is not as good as The Eunuch and re-opening a new book.

This book really deserves its reputation, the time travel is just a process, it's baffling to read!

System slaves... How did the slaves of capital invent this term? Slaves discriminate against slaves. In modern times, slaves are also divided into three, six, and nine grades. Slaves of the system eat well, and slaves of capital use their mobile phones to criticize slaves of the system after having enough food and clothing. The manner is so noble, so refined, so sacred, it makes people feel revered.

Let's reopen the author. I traveled through the first world and didn't write anything about the follow-up. I don't know what world is behind it. It's inexplicable. It's good to travel through some classic worlds. I suggest restarting it.

After Chapter 12, Chapter 13... You should write about the follow-up of that world...

Author, have you seen Bao Qingtian? No matter how you say it, Chen Shimei is still an official, so you just arrange a guillotine for others! What's more, in traditional works, people are relatives of the emperor who are killed by the dragon head. You think that just because you abandoned your wife and children, your death would be news. It's not because of his status as the Prince Consort that his death is news.

This plot is hard to describe in one sentence 😒 The author should read a few more books before writing.

Nothing changed. The last knife cut off his head. Bao Zheng just said a word and it was over? What was the princess's reaction? Why don't you write the ending if it's too hot?

This novel made me feel as cold as eating ice cream and taking a cold bath on a cold winter day. It's like having a few big quilts in the house and lighting them up in the summer. It's like someone penetrated you from behind while you were defecating! What a strange book. It is recommended to take a look.

，        ？ The author should at least explain it, and the cut to the next world immediately is very abrupt. Korean Entertainment's Dark Glory and Taipei's world were even more baffling to me. They finished a world in a dozen chapters, and after finishing it, they didn't explain the previous world, and the protagonist only did tasks to complete the tasks. I think the creativity is there, but why does it feel weird? I was actually attracted by the introduction, but there is a big difference between the main text and the introduction, and it feels a bit like trying to sell someone else's meat. I originally thought that the author would take advantage of the loopholes in the system to cause trouble, but I found that he was just doing tasks for the sake of doing tasks.

The guillotine case is a bit interesting, but I'm not interested in the rest of it at all.

Author, you can check out All Heavens Without Taboos and Big Dream All Heavens, starting with Lin Pingzhi! The two books are roughly divided into volumes

I didn't do anything when I traveled back in time, so I could at least pretend to be cool.

Please be a eunuch earlier, there is no need to write it down

Restart it, author, stop writing, what a piece of shit, Dark Glory, except for the part about bonuses and beauty, I don't know what the rest of the world is.

No follow-up from Bao Zheng? Why don't you summarize the pitfalls after laying the foreshadowing?

What the hell is written... I can't understand it

If you have some ideas, and add a little framework and rhythm, it will be a good Zhutianliu novel. There are very few people who write about Joten-ryu, and even fewer who can express their own thoughts and emotions. If coupled with smooth writing, one can be called a great master of Joten-ryu. Human ideas are limited. I hope the author will not waste the ideas he has accumulated over the years. Come on.