Mortal: I, Zhang Tie, God Rewards Hard Work!

Sure enough, anyone who writes about Zhang Tie is a eunuch.

I think your technique will need to be revamped later. I believe you can get the top technique of the Ancient Sword Sect in the foundation building stage. It is unlikely that you can get it in the foundation building stage of the alchemy stage, especially the techniques in the Nascent Soul stage. There will be no time to do this technique in the Luan Xing Sea later. There are also few metallic techniques in the Luan Xing Sea. In the anime, Jin Kui should be metallic. In the novel, there seems to be no NPC metallic technique Yuan Ying. It feels like it still needs to be modified.

I really can't figure out why every fanfic has to go to the Mo Mansion to make it more difficult for the Nascent Soul Demon Tribulation, right?

Everyone probably knows how to follow up, but I still want to say thank you. Thank you👊👊👊

As of Chapter 32, there are no major problems. It looks good 👍. Update soon.

The author's writing style is okay, the narrative is smooth, and there are no obvious bugs. It is considered one of the better mortal fanfics in recent years. For now, it's excellent. I hope the author will keep writing it and don't want to be a eunuch. I think it will be popular.

I've read a few books about Zhang Tie and they all looked like eunuchs. I hope you can finish them.

I don't understand why some sentences that don't have strong emotional color at all have to use exclamation points. In one chapter, there are more exclamation points than periods and commas. It seems surprising and very dramatic.

Write it well. All other mortals will be embarrassed, and you are the only one who can read it.

Brother, please update ten more chapters. I'm dying. Please, brother. I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like my whole body is shaking. I can't breathe. Please, brother, please update ten more chapters. Just ten chapters. , I will never touch it again, please brother, really, it's only ten chapters, I swear I will never touch this thing again, I really can't bear it anymore😭😭, I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep, brother, I beg you, please update ten chapters

Why haven't you updated yet😆

There are many settings in "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality" that may not seem worth mentioning, but once you accept them, you will become less and less able to read the novel. For example: 1. When encountering an enemy that is too strong, you should run away instead of exploding into a small universe, awakening the mysterious power, having epiphanies and breakthroughs in battle. 2. When being chased by the enemy, you should remain anonymous and act in a low-key manner instead of continuing to take high-profile murderous risks. 3. Killing people, seizing treasures, mutilating corpses, and eradicating traces to avoid enemies coming to your door, or even harming relatives and friends, should be the protagonist's basic IQ. 4. Make good use of your own talents/cheats/plug-ins, which should be the protagonist's basic IQ. 5. Hide your cheats/plug-ins to avoid being discovered Killing people and grabbing treasures should be the basic IQ of the protagonist. 6. Do not ridicule others in person for no reason, including the protagonist. It should be the basic IQ of the villain, supporting characters and passers-by. 7. When working for others, including women, the reward should be negotiated in advance 8. Talking in a battle will make both sides look stupid. The more words there are, the more stupid they will be. 9. Taking risks requires sufficient reasons. 10. Realm division is the cornerstone of the combat power system. If you casually cross large realms to kill enemies, the combat power system will soon collapse. 11. Being able to take care of oneself without the need for the protagonist to save lives frequently should be the basic IQ of the protagonist's relatives and friends.

It's broken, right🙂

Come on more

Come on 💪 The writing is pretty good

The author can plan carefully and build a teleportation array under the Lingshi Mine to cover Xin Ruyin, Tiannan Continent and Chaotic Star Sea. Moving supplies back and forth, prices vary greatly

I think this book is pretty good, I would like to point out that it is not too over the top, nor is it deliberately overwhelming, and the plot is relatively smooth, but it feels a bit bland. I look forward to the follow-up.

I would like to give some suggestions on how to change the skill to a certain level. The skill settings for beginners and proficient people will not match those of ordinary people. So weird. Isn't it possible to break through the upper limit of proficiency? How do you describe the breakthrough level after the practice is completed? Superb? Make up a few more?

Why are there no books by the author on the monthly ticket list for newcomers?

Can the author ask, what is the male protagonist's natal magic weapon?

This is not like a time traveler, but more like a rebirth, without any modern knowledge or behavior.