Directing the Revival of Mythology in Tokyo

The Japanese people are suffering, the Chinese netizens are happy

The following is a personal opinion. The extraordinary person appeared and killed someone. The official may have blocked it and claimed it was an accident. But the victims have families and interpersonal relationships. Even in small Japan, if multiple people die, and they are all official people, it will definitely cause the victim's family to search for the extraordinary, and then hate the extraordinary, causing conflicts, just like the mutants in Marvel. In addition, a large number of official people died in extraordinary events, and there will definitely be a shortage of manpower, because most of the official people are elites, and their training takes time, and they are not automatically refreshed NPCs. No matter how much the official blocks it, so many people died in extraordinary events, and other official people are not fools. They can't see any problems, and there are a few who are willing to work hard for the official. Power comes from violence. Extraordinary beings are themselves a challenge to the old power system. The official people must control the extraordinary at all costs, just like the industrial revolution. Whoever takes the lead will be the boss in the future. The destruction caused by extraordinary beings does not automatically refresh the city like in Ultraman. The economic losses caused by it have a lot of impact on the national economy, which in turn affects all aspects, leading to the decline of the national currency status. After all, there is no difference between a fight between high-level supernatural beings and an earthquake or volcanic eruption. The destructive influence caused by extraordinary beings should be reflected a little, so that the extraordinary power can be reflected. Otherwise, it will be like an NPC and there will be no real sense.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you watch the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the attitude of tolerance is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates. So how long has it been and you are still trying to catch fish without updating? Are you worthy of everyone?

I hope that there will be no such thing as kneeling down when you see a girl and trying to trick someone. Newbies can be tolerant in trying to trick a girl. Kneeling before a girl is too disgusting, so don't write it. There are also newcomers who don't know how to write emotional scenes, so don't force it. Behind-the-scenes writing without a female lead is the most popular, because those who like to watch behind-the-scenes don't like low-key characters, endings, weaknesses, and burdens. Come on, author

The impression of your book is even worse than that of Planting the Sacred Tree Next Door. The main reason is that other characters appear less and Ryuji Kosaka appears too much. This makes the book a bit like a biography of Ryuji Kosaka. People who know the character of Ryuji Kosaka will smile knowingly, but people who don't know feel that this person steals too many scenes. No, even if they know, they feel that this person appears too often and it is annoying. In the future, we need to reduce the appearance of old characters and increase the description and interaction of new characters. The conflict between new characters and old characters cannot be like that in the book Planting the Sacred Tree Next Door. This is because the villains are all done by the protagonist. As a result, except for the villain and protagonist's clone, other characters are doing their own things. After defeating the protagonist, they go back to their homes and find their own mothers. There is almost no interaction and the plot is fragmented. This book feels more and more like the one next door. Except for the protagonist doing things, the other characters all play their own roles. The most unpleasant thing is that the perspective is always fixed on Kousaka Ryuuji. The book next door does not at least describe one character in a fixed way, and you are too fixed in describing Kousaka Ryuuji. As a result, this book is just a personal monster-fighting and upgrading article by Kousaka Ryuuji. How about you stop writing behind-the-scenes stories and start a new book dedicated to personal biographies. I think you have a future in this area.

The choice of a male gun for offline No. 1 Is quite good. I have seen a lot of behind-the-scenes leaks and I don't understand why they don't choose a male gun.

Author, just follow the original outline and write about India, the United States, Northern Europe, and Europe, and then vote to decide which part should be more inked. It's a bit boring to be in Japan and Tokyo all the time, because I just want to see the protagonist dominate the world behind the scenes.

It sucks

The writing is okay and the logic is okay, but the early part of the plot is a bit disgusting. The mother who accidentally fell into a cult killed two children with her own hands, and there are more scenes. The other child's revenge is not complete, and he wants to commit suicide from time to time. His character is a bit weak, which indirectly leads to the death of his sister, and the hypocrisy. The good Officer Shiratori, can't he see that there is a cult, which is also an indirect factor that led to the death of his sister. For Officer Shiratori, if he is not wanted, although there is a problem, he will not take care of it, and if he is wanted, there is definitely something wrong. Is it hypocrisy or loyalty? No matter what, it is quite disgusting.

Things have been going so well lately. After more than 130 chapters, the first two-faced Su Nuo has not yet been revived. It has been foreshadowing for too long. There is no interesting plot so I can only keep reading. I am afraid that I will cut it if I keep reading.