Me, the Barbarian!

A good author who can fully implement his own ideas and marginalize those things that were forced in to sign a contract. Good books, good writing, and good authors.

I feel that the biggest flaw of this book is that the protagonist is a time traveler. It feels like you are forced to play a character with intellectual flaws in the setting, but the performer is very unwilling to do so. He insists on giving you some extravagant work from time to time, and insists on making some cultural exports that are not adapted to the local environment and are inappropriate for the time, so as to show that the protagonist is actually a wise and foolish image. For example, before departure, the military training was forced to implement a lot of modern moral, intellectual, physical, group and beauty standards that seemed unfortunate at first glance. Later, it was found that it couldn't be done, so it was all changed back to the right track with the help of the female knight. I think that instead of making the protagonist so awkward, it would be better to change him back to a native aboriginal who has been affected by the grandfather who travels with him for a long time, or a system similar to the character simulation. After redesigning the arrangement in this way, it seems that it can take care of both aspects 😐

It's okay, so far it's basically harmless. The characters don't look like those templates, especially the main characters. I think the author must have spent a long time thinking about it. The plot is good. As for the system, I have always hated it. The good thing here is that it is just a little more plot-oriented (so far). After all, it can be said from the beginning that the protagonist is unparalleled in power or other things. There are basically no tricks to reduce the mentally retarded and deliberately disgust people. It should be that the author did not want his work to be contaminated. Try chasing it, I like it anyway, I finished it in one sitting

1: The writing style is very good, the book is easy to read, and has strong ability to depict characters and interact with scenes. 2: Both logic and character intelligence are online, and the system plays a small role or has little effect. 3: This book really amazed me. There are not many new books like this available nowadays. The repeated appearance of an orange can make multiple pictures and scenes appear in the mind. The changes of the orange several times will turn several pictures from still to static, just like watching a video, and the sense of immersion is too strong; if you remove this orange, you will find that the scene where just a few people are talking is still, and there will only be pictures in the mind without animation, and the sense of immersion will be much worse. Most new books now do not have this kind of scene interaction, and they are all conversations in bala bala. The following characters are portrayed with small interactions and language (taking up the majority). It can also be seen that the logic and intelligence of each character are very normal, and each character and thought are different and easy for readers to guess. Finally, let's talk about some suggestions. The writing is really good. I suggest you write more about people's hearts and write less about the system or only use it as a key prop. The negative effect is also obvious that there will be a fragmentation in logic. (Now I personally don't accept the system's rescue, but I prefer the protagonist to do this. It's the right time, place and people, so it succeeds. I don't know if other people think so) The above is just my personal opinion, everyone can discuss it rationally.

It felt a bit awkward when I first watched it. I felt that the identities and backgrounds of the people around me and the foreshadowing of their actions did not match the identity and background of the protagonist. His identity was inexplicably elevated. First of all, the protagonist is a low-level laborer in Sanwu at the beginning (he is also a laborer even if he can be called identity). He has not obtained an identity that matches his strength. Secondly, the heroine can run away from home inexplicably for a ruthless reason. How can a little girl from the magical medieval period be so safe? If it was because of her identity, she should have been taken back long ago. And the female knight couldn't take the heroine back forcibly for a very lame reason (did she forget what she really wanted to do when she came out). Then the protagonist chose to be with a second-generation fat boy who had no money, no food, and no soldiers because of a worse mosquito-leg profit. The second-generation fat boy still trusted him inexplicably. They had never met them before. Go to a very dangerous place to expand your territory. The protagonist is not the expansion lord. How do you go from the local area to the center (this is not even your own fucking territory). The author's promotion of the plot and description of the characters' behavior are very poor and illogical. Everything the protagonist does belongs to a formal nobleman who pioneered the territory, but he is just a barbarian. It is written as if the protagonist is a cleaner who works in a hospital but is crazy about seeing patients and saving people in the hospital. This is not your job and has nothing to do with you.

Author, what are you doing? Is it nonsense that so many people are scolding you? Smiling, respecting and blessing

The thunder that should be stepped on is never missed, and in some respects, he is also a god.

The author's writing style is not bad, but he always wants to write about things he is not good at, such as politics, military, etc., And then when readers complain about it, he becomes upset. The quality of the following chapters feels far inferior to before. The author is good at writing about daily life. This kind of work with a large theme requires a lot of knowledge accumulation and is difficult to master. It is recommended to use strengths and avoid weaknesses.

Readers who want to ask questions or make suggestions can go here to save me the trouble of going through everything.

The author has decided to have a single female protagonist, and I have no objection to this However, the supporting female role does not mean that she must be given a supporting role It is also the kind of supporting female role that has a lot of plot scenes with the protagonist. It does not mean that if she does not accept it, she must be given to another supporting actor.

It won't last long. It was originally a medieval theme without magic. The two protagonists added a female pure poison point. You have emphasized the rights many times in this article. Originally, the protagonist used the fat man's platform to open up wasteland and expand the territory that even an emperor could not handle. In terms of strength and reputation, it is much higher than a fat man. It has developed so well in the future, and he did not find an accident to send the fat man away and become the king himself. So what's so cool about readers? Do you think you've been treating other people like a douchebag? Don't talk about aristocratic orthodoxy. In history, many people who won the throne just claimed that they were orthodox.

The writing is okay... It's just that the protagonist with a low IQ doesn't seem to be that likable, nor is he a lunatic. He just doesn't have any attractive features. The sense of immersion is really weak, and it's not very satisfying. I keep saying that the protagonist can fight, but the problem is that I haven't seen that he is really an enemy... Let's give the protagonist some awesome stepping stones...

I will read it after the author finishes this chapter. Everything else can be written. It just depends on how Andrew is dealt with in the chapters after this.                                                                      It's mainly with Andre that makes me feel uncomfortable. The protagonist basically brings his own food, no money, and pays to follow the big brother. At the beginning, the protagonist paid for Andrei's trust by himself, but it seems that Andrei hasn't returned the money to the protagonist? The protagonist helped Andre train the soldiers, the protagonist helped Andre fight the enemies, the territory was developed by Tiya and the protagonist helping Andre, and the conquered tribes were fought by the protagonist himself, but to a certain extent, they had to listen to Andre's words.                                                                                                        Andre is a waste, except for the big words in the first few pictures, he is of no use afterwards, it is a good thing that he is not a hindrance, and the only thing that is useful is his aristocratic status, in terms of charm, I can only see his charm towards the female knights, what other uses do you think he has?

This book is so retarded that it doesn't matter if I give it to a kunoichi. It's okay to play house with Tia. The description of the battlefield is just a piece of shit. It's a game of thrones. I couldn't bear to read it for a long time and didn't see anything outstanding. Author, you are so abstract. Why don't you learn from other big guys first?

After reading fast food articles for 5 years, I have become accustomed to it, and can only eat fast food. This is the first book that made me read slowly, carefully, and get into the character again. Almost every plot and character is very appropriate. It's just that everyone loves to read fast food articles these days, so this book may be a bit difficult to read in the early stages. Hope the author can stick with it.

Alas, I can't stand it anymore. There are too many poisonous points. I'm going to make a 33 system. It's not over yet. Here comes the Three Major Disciplines and Eight Points of Attention. I don't even want to complain about doing this in the Middle Ages. I can't bear it. There are too many poisonous points 😭

The main purpose of reading novels is to substitute the protagonist. The upright female protagonist you describe in your article does not need to be included in the protagonist's harem, but you should not use too much pen and ink to describe the emotions of the supporting characters, especially the image of a fat man like Andre. If you set up his image better, there will be less resistance in the comment area. A better way to deal with it is to leave her alone and bring in a passerby for the fat man. After all, it will be difficult for readers to substitute the protagonist and then substitute the male protagonist.

These people who talk about having sex, do they think every woman they see on the street must be their wife?

I just wanted to say, that one, but after thinking about it, if it is not in the novice book, it seems that it will not be allowed. I have said it before, I think the author has considered it a lot, and this book obviously has a single female protagonist. I think the description is quite good.

Well written. In addition, I voted for 13 monthly votes. Give me a boost.

It only took a year to write more than 100 chapters. The author couldn't have written it on the spur of the moment, right?

I say I am starting a new book, but in fact I am suggesting that you rewrite this book. It was really cool when I watched it for the first time and just watched the latest version.

You can learn from the advantages of Haiyi Xiaozhu. His book is very poisonous, but the good points are also very good. I am posting this just because I like to read similar books. You are welcome to recommend books to me.