I Set Off a Mythic Revival in Tokyo

I suggest you just disappear from China; no matter how you write it, it's wrong, and there's a high chance it will be banned.

Before, when the Eight-Foot Bird didn't reveal its identity, those extraordinary individuals could tolerate its constant chatter. But now that it has, the Fengcheng hero still dares to whine—that just shows a lack of prestige among mythological figures! Author, do you even know what "divine might is like a prison" means? Also, Greek mythological figures are rather capricious, or to put it more bluntly, petty. Once they get angry, an entire city is gone. For details, please see the Trojan War.

Behind-the-scenes stories should avoid losing control, but the protagonist's final act of ruthlessly cutting off his disguise to break free from control made me think he was incredibly stupid. He suffered for himself and created a whole bunch of enemies for himself.

Don't make the sassiness the main focus; it's best to use it only as a embellishment when the protagonist transforms and leaves the scene. For this kind of behind-the-scenes story, it's recommended to focus more on supporting characters, creating an ensemble cast to facilitate future development. Finally, you can refer to NetEase's Onmyoji mobile game for the abilities of various supporting characters; the monsters in it all have different abilities, and it's also based on Japanese legends.

I know you like Napoleon, but please tone it down a bit; he's not your protagonist. As a behind-the-scenes ensemble piece, the war story you're currently writing is already quite lengthy, the protagonist isn't doing anything, and the plot keeps reinforcing Napoleon's role, making it a really bad read. If you don't change this, I'll have to wait until you finish this section so I can skip it.

The protagonist's role as the cause of all effects is truly inadequate. All the clones he created become his adversaries, somewhat like Brahma in Hindu mythology. As the creator god, he's constantly ignored by the guardian and destroyer gods, having virtually no presence in Hindu mythology, merely watching Vishnu and Shiva perform. In the end, he even loses his status as the creator god.

The main characters in the recent episodes have become increasingly less impressive, and even the mastermind behind the scenes has lost all prestige. It's truly unbelievable that someone who "outwits" the puppets they created can still end up being outmaneuvered.

The writing is getting further and further off-topic. It's gone from a behind-the-scenes story to a regular spiritual revival story. This low-level mastermind is truly one of a kind 😅. When the protagonist cut off a part of his character's soul to go out, he should have completely overthrown those gods. The plot could have been salvaged, but he still didn't learn his lesson and continued to play house with them. He's like an old general on a stage with flags stuck all over his back.

Later on, it felt like a completely different book, and the protagonist's actions made him seem incredibly stupid.

The author is essentially filtering readers; those who can mindlessly indulge in the author's self-indulgent escapades can continue...