Wanted: Paranormal Fugitive

I always felt something was off. The protagonist only survived because the author followed his own ideas; I didn't see anything particularly brilliant about him.

The biggest taboo in writing suspense/mystery is that the author's own plot is so flawed that it fails to lead to a unique conclusion. In such cases, the mystery reads like a story where four or five possibilities exist, but one always ends up in the protagonist's favor—it's like the author's words are law, whatever they say is what they get, and whatever the outcome is.

The first time the fog rolled in, the protagonist sacrificed his parents; the second time, the protagonist sacrificed the entire village; the third time, the protagonist sacrificed his grandfather; the protagonist remained unmoved. The fourth time the fog rolled in, it was his classmate, the prettiest girl in class, and the protagonist joined in without hesitation.

So, I haven't seen any comments yet?

People who are frequently wanted by the police know that updates need to be fast.

How come this is so much worse than "This Is Not a Ghost Story"? Could the author put more effort into polishing the plot and logic? Can't you cut down on the female boss in stockings and the NPC stuff? The writing style has deteriorated so much here!

It's not scary at all, and the protagonist's reasoning seems strange from the reader's perspective. The reader can't see any other details; it's just the protagonist making conclusions however they want... And anyway, the result is correct...

I've read about twenty chapters. How to put it? It's slightly better than *Ten Days to Die*. I'm not praising this book. *Ten Days to Die* is garbage in my eyes. I only read a few dozen chapters of *Ten Days to Die*, up to the point where they escaped the first instance. I couldn't continue reading after that. So, this book is better than garbage. But to say it's amazing... Maybe I haven't read enough to see it. I'm even a little dissatisfied.

The book talks about intellectual battles, but many of its logics are inconsistent. Both the character descriptions and the plot are very simplistic, and many plot points feel forced. For example, the protagonist passes through a dungeon and the official team discovers it immediately and even guesses the protagonist among so many people. There's also the forced appearance of a disgusting little boss. You don't normally encounter such a person, yet they're included in the official team's scheme?

The first story was alright; the combination of horror and mystery was decent, and there was even a ghost hidden within the team. The "teammate is a ghost" trope was a key element in creating a terrifying atmosphere, similar to #NightmareStrike#. However, the second beginner-level dungeon made me wonder if it was even the same novel anymore. It turned into a fantasy story, not scary at all, and the mystery wasn't very complex. It even included some fighting. I dropped it.