It All Began After I Died

I really like the author's style. There are few books by the author that I can't jump to read. I just feel a little regretful that I didn't read it. I hope the male protagonist can have a romantic relationship with Xiangxiang 🤭.

Come on, author, how many words are you planning to write in this book?

Regardless of whether I cut it or not, this book is really not that good and I don't really want to follow it.

Why don't you open a new book, puppy? I will always support you. Weird, I only read what you and Buddha wrote.

The author might as well change the plot of the first part and continue writing it with a different protagonist. After reading the beginning of this one, I felt it was too middle-of-the-road, so I didn't continue reading it.

This function of swallowing is too buggy, and I have lost the sense of terror and tension when reading the book.

I feel like the part about the funeral home is weird. Isn't there tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands of special events every year? Why do you feel like ordinary people don't know anything about it? Even if the official doesn't say anything, it's impossible for the people to know everything. But the children of the old lady just feel that others are playing pranks or transforming into corpses.

It makes no difference whether or not the prophet's identity is revealed. Instead, it creates a lot of black holes in the plot. For example, if the police station knows its abilities, why not ask the protagonist about the scope of his abilities and whether he can anticipate major events in the future. And the protagonist is reborn and doesn't leave anything behind. Does he really think he is immortal? If you really die, humanity's last hope will be over. If you don't reveal future matters (forbidden object information, time of major events, human targeted weapon development, etc.) To the above, I can understand that it is because of some kind of eye surveillance, or that the above has been infiltrated by forbidden objects. But it's really unjustifiable that you don't even store information electronically or on paper, or even on prohibited items. You really think you are the protagonist. Also, you wear a prophet vest, and then you always do things like take off your pants and fart. For example, the story about Ya has been going on for a long time to no avail. Can you just tell your colleagues that the prophecy thing should be useful to you? To be honest, this problem has been with me since the beginning. The imagination is great, the horror atmosphere is also very good, and the plot design is also good, but as long as it involves the communication of characters, it starts to have a great sense of tearing, and it seriously delays the whole book. I thought your problem was much better with the last short story, but who would have thought that a new book has started again. Fortunately, it is much better than writing and wood carving, but I still hope to continue to improve my writing skills in this area. Above, some personal suggestions.

I feel this one is better than the wood carving one.

Do all investigators work alone now? Are you planning to send them one by one?