Battle of Two Cities: Welcome to Zaun

I took a look at the chapters that were updated in August. The Battle of Two Cities 2 has not yet been released, and the author has already thought of "mud between fingernails". Needless to say, it is great

After reading the first few chapters, I can't see any excitement. After traveling through 10 years, I am still a street gangster. I don't know the heroes and have no strong subordinates. I am just messing around; My memory is fuzzy. Write a diary. Only by reading the diary can you remember clearly; No cheats, no learning talent, no magic talent; I don't know what's good about it?

The overall style is quite in line with my taste. I have to admit that the author's writing is sparse, and he even posted background sources and joints to explain some characters and plots. But it is good to reduce it appropriately and leave some suspense. There is no need to explain everything so clearly. I personally prefer to see the background of League of Legends and the relationship between different characters. Looking at the latest chapter, there are actually not many black and deep residuals. Even the darkness and despair expressed are not as deep as in the anime.

I only want a single female lead 😭

In Twin Cities 2, I have eaten books. Alchemy is the clockwork dad. How can it be rounded now?

Generally speaking, the plot is okay, but the in-game lines inserted in many places are very blunt. Mondo was okay at first. After all, his brain was not working well, so it would not be strange to say anything at any time. When the male gunman cleans up the gangsters, his lines are a bit stiff and barely acceptable. When Zeli appeared on the stage, her line was completely illogical. It is better to insert this line in other dialogues instead of saying "I just need a little spark" when they first met, when no one had any interaction with words or actions. When Qinggangying became a heavyweight, he was originally a cold-blooded killer, but he started to attack after finishing his lines, which caused Qinggangying's force to drop. In fact, it might be better for Zeli and Qinggangying to delete their appearance lines in the plot, because these lines are placed there alone without any interaction.

Wang Jingwei capitulationism? Gandhi's Satyagraha? The protagonist's thoughts are very confused

There is no such thing as the Shell people anymore, Scorpion is now a demigod, the guardian of Ixtal. Now, neither the Twin Cities nor the Hex of the Alliance have anything to do with the Shell People. Hex of the Twin Cities was developed by Jace after he was saved by a mage when he was a child. He saw the mage's spellcasting process and teamed up with Victor.

1. Update aspect. You will find that the update time these days is not fixed as before, which is why I am adjusting the update time. New book issues are updated twice as normal and three times on Sunday. 2. Thank you all for your rewards and monthly votes. For me, it's really flattering. In fact, I hope everyone can just "follow up". I think the new book issue is a two-way choice stage. I am lucky if you can click on it. I dare not make a promise. The harm caused by broken promises is even greater. 3. Content. I've read everyone's comments on the content, and the one that got the biggest reaction was the handling of House of Hope. Maybe I was preconceived when I wrote this paragraph, thinking that "external influences outweigh internal resistance", which caused Ron's counterattack to be anticlimactic. Between the excitement and the logic, I chose to follow the constraints of the current environment more and ignore the rhythm control. This is my problem. Like one reviewer's "chocolate with shit", this metaphor is very vivid. 4. Comment. I will not delete any comments. What I wrote didn't reach the picture in your mind, and that's my problem. Just like a cook who fails to cook a dish well, it is also appropriate for the guests to complain. Your comments can at least help me understand whether the quality of my current writing is in line with some people's perceptions or most people's. Compared with deleting books directly, comments can provide more constructive suggestions. (If the comment involves insults, I will still deal with it.) Finally, there are many contradictions in the lol background. The simplest one is the Hex Crystal. No matter how you deal with it, it doesn't matter who researched it first. I have made personal analysis and dismantling, but it has not appeared yet. For example, does the Hex Crystal need to be engraved with magic patterns? Authenticity ranked from highest to lowest: narration, character description, written and verbal information. I wrote this in a hurry while squeezing into the subway. Finally, thank you all for your likes.

What a useless protagonist, he was beaten throughout the whole process

I have been struggling with writing for a long time. It is impossible to write about a person's growth without excellent writing. Moreover, it is still a place like Runeterra. If you want to write about an uprising, you don't need an outstanding iron fist, sacrifice and determination. If you want to write a story without cheating, you can arrange the protagonist to do nothing for ten years, and then suddenly a blessing comes, and in the end misfortune comes singly. You want to write a growth-oriented protagonist, and growth-oriented protagonists also have their own characteristics, so you say that you have strong spiritual energy, but you haven't seen any use for it so far. The Ionian around you can't communicate spiritual understanding, and it ended up being very awkward. Not to mention anything else, but I think your setting is taken from the animation,

It seems like,,, it's a torture article, that's right. I'm a little unsure. The protagonist didn't die, and then struggled hard in Zaun with his family in the orphanage on his back, and was pushed away by threats. . Then he got beaten and injured or something.

The comment section is much better than the book, and the polarization is a bit serious 🤭

I don't understand why the protagonist is set as a minor, and then the heroes he encounters are also minors, and then several minors plan to unify Zaun and change Zaun. Do you think these children are suitable for this? You have to at least talk to heroes who were fifteen or sixteen years old before they understand, right? After all, none of them have read a book and have not experienced much. Besides, how can other adults believe that they are children? No matter how much talent and ability you show, prejudice will be as hard to change as a mountain.

I really can't stand it. The protagonist's cheating came after more than 50 chapters. I don't know what he was doing before. As a time traveler, I didn't do anything. I just kept following the plot of the anime. I'm a waste of money.

I'm more curious about how the author handles the relationship between Piltover and Zaun. It can be seen that the author wants to compromise between Fandel and Hilko. In the anime, Fandel's route was almost declared a failure due to his collapse, and Hilko's route was considered a success due to the explosion that detonated the parliament, but neither of them solved Zaun's real problem. However, the House of Hope where the protagonist currently grew up in the novel was massacred by Hilko, so it would be difficult for him to stick to his original idea. And in many places, the foreshadowings left cover almost all the heroes in Piltover and Zaun. I am also curious whether it will become a hodgepodge, which will fall into the cliché.

What did the author write? The writing is okay, but the characterization and plot are sparse. The protagonist's behavior-driven logic is very weird, more indigenous than indigenous.

I don't know what happens next, but the House of Hope incident makes people feel disgusted. I don't know what the author wants to do with the tragic death of orphans, but relying on the tragic death of others to force choices and changes, it just feels cliché and makes readers feel unhappy.

Score 5 out of 10 points. Nothing has changed so far, siblings 4 are worthless. Waste pig feet.

Ascension tells us that all love, love, hatred, and interests are all vain. If we don't cultivate immortality, we will eventually become ants.

The author is quite amazing. He is still writing. I admire him for persisting for so long.

It seems that there is no heroine anymore. Are you alone and constantly changing maps?

What went wrong? Why haven't 10,000 fans arrived? 🤔

The time traveler found a group of psychopaths to cooperate. What a bad start.

Whether there is no heroine or a harem, there is an audience, so it doesn't matter. But your book is not pleasant at all. The protagonist is completely suffering. In what age is he still abusing the protagonist?