You Can Rest Assured and Cultivate Immortality, I Will Take Care of Them

What I wrote at the beginning was in line with the title of the book and it was interesting. But later on I didn't know what to write. It became more and more cliché. It started to be sentimental and self-deprecating and hypocritical. Then I started to be a saint and a saint. I also always mentioned how handsome the protagonist is. I feel like I can talk about appearance a few times in one chapter. Maybe it's because of the word count, but I just don't like it personally. The plot is perfunctory and fast-paced, maybe without an outline, and I only scratched the surface of writing about the emperor's uncle. Maybe the young author doesn't have the ability and is too frightened to write. It also always gives me the feeling that I wanted to write a story but my brain got online and stopped in time.

Yes, the writing is quite good. There are almost no poisonous points. The only weakness is that the plot arrangement is a little uncomfortable. Some plots jump very fast and are filled in later. It seems to be a foreshadowing but it looks a bit fragmented. Everything else is fine, and the protagonist is not too supervising, but I originally thought it would be a bit of a battle of wits at the end of the story. The current few chapters are half-satisfying, especially since the first two wives have developed quickly and the subsequent women have not made much progress. They may still be children, and of course they haven't written many chapters. Overall it's worth a read, cheers to the author.

The progress of the two girls at the beginning was so fast, it felt like a running story from a studio. After leaving the small town, it got better and better, the characters became more and more fleshed out, and the plot did not fall behind the rules. If you persevere, you will get good results!

Didn't you understand the latest plot? I hope Liu can be severely punished. For such a big thing, it is impossible for her to be ruthless and repent just because she said she was sorry. Moreover, this character's cleansing was too hasty. On the previous page, she was experimenting with her own daughter, and on the next page, she just remembered that she was still a mother?

Apart from anything else, I feel that your top-up system is a bit outrageous. I can't understand how this system allows the protagonist to continue. It is impossible to top-up all the people. Some people cannot top-up at the same time. This will test the author's character creation ability and keep the plot reasonable. But your system is top-notch, so it's hard to review. The name makes it hard to read.