Reborn: Starting by Saving a Treasure Girl

I just flipped through the comment sections of other books, and one comment reminded me of another point that attracted me to this book. It's just that the male protagonist is not SB. The male protagonist at least conveys the feeling of an old man. This is commendable. Unlike other novels, the male protagonist is like an NC who has not experienced society. The author is at least not weak in his ability to portray characters. At least the male protagonist's uncle, best friend, mother, aunt, Lin and her grandmother have relatively distinct character traits.

I just read it and I feel like the author's first order is not ideal. But I still advise the author not to give up. Personally, I think your book is very good. I feel like my results will improve later on. I personally still have a few suggestions, including stretching the career line, and adjusting the protagonist's learning and portrayal a little bit. Don't make people feel like a pure bastard. In other words, you can either choose between academics and career, and at least write down the point where the protagonist stands out from his peers. This will bring a feeling of pleasure.

The reality is cruel. It is impossible for girls like Lin Ruoxi to exist. Most readers have never heard of a girl like Gu. It is precisely because there is no such girl that they pursue it, hoping to find some solace and some hope in the world of books. Just like Shen Youchu's deeply rooted description, the author's writing skills and descriptions are very good, but I still hope that the author can write a more "beautiful" or even "fantasy" relationship transition, instead of superimposing too many contradictions and becoming a reality of separation or half at home and half abroad. It's been a long time since I updated, so I don't have many monthly tickets, so please forgive me.

The author's three views give people a childish and twisted feeling

The book club did not allow me to speak before... Emmm This little thing actually took me several days to deal with... Thank you all readers for your monthly votes and follow-up reading!

I still feel a little pitiful. Muxue was originally a lively and lovely childhood sweetheart, but now she has become neither good nor bad. It's okay to like Lin Ruoxi, after all, who can't like Xixi? But what should be highlighted more is the companionship between two people, the love in all the details of life. I feel that the current family of three seems stable on the surface, but there are too many problems. And it's very twisted…

Crazy pressure on Lin Ruoxi's line will only make the main characters in this book, including Gu Muxue, lose their character charm. The characters will not stand up and their faces will become emmm.

Why is it always portrayed as how powerful and wealthy Gu Muxue's family is? Everyone is saying that Gu Muxue's family has a lot of power, and she has the ability to use her power to suppress others, just like giving alms to Lin Ruoxi 😅 It was not as good as Lin Ruoxi's portrayal, and the perception becomes even worse as it goes on.

How does the author plan to arrange the emotional line? Are you going to keep eating Lin to death without daring to resist? The last few chapters have gotten weirder and weirder as I read them. Why should she continue to suffer if she can suffer?

Now that I have read more than 400 chapters, I have a feeling that the male protagonist feels that Lin Ruoxi is born with a lack of love and is sensitive, so he has been taking care of her. Gu Muxue has always believed that even if she was wronged, she would let her go. The behavior of being alone together, Li and I suspected, she did it on purpose. Even if there was a reason for her innate lack of love, she definitely did it intentionally in her heart, at least she didn't deliberately object to it. Obviously, she was not taking care of Gu Muxue's emotions, at least she didn't really take her seriously. If she really took her seriously, it would be impossible not to be aware of it. What's more, the two are related. His memory can be recited after the college entrance examination, but now he can't remember it? Do you just believe it? I really don't believe it, so it seems like it's definitely not what the author said, so I can't help myself. What I said is definitely a bit exaggerated, but I think you should understand what I mean. In the end, I feel that the male protagonist has been letting down Gu Muxue, and Lin Ruoxi has been morally kidnapping, so I want to know the author, what do you think? If you give me a person who usually reads pirated copies and spends money to read books on this, he wants to see if it is the original version. Did he make mistakes when he picked up the code? If it were real life, I feel that in the end the male protagonist would be haunted by Lin Ruoxi, and Gu Mu would be hurt again and again, and she would be completely heartbroken and run away.