Reborn: Gambit to Save the Treasure Girl

The relationship between these three people is so awkward after reading more than 300 chapters. The first part of the book is okay, but the last two or three hundred chapters are not so good.

The writing in the front is quite good, with some advantages. The female protagonist Lin is imagined, but it is very uncomfortable to watch. The other disadvantage is that Gu is a tsundere. I feel that the author forced it. Although some behaviors are explained later, when I read it, there is an inconsistent feeling, much like a self-made fantasy. The author chose to force two female protagonists. I think it is unnecessary. Normally It's bland, that's fine. I've seen hundreds of stories. The heroine Lin is full of fantasies and expectations for the future. I don't have any expectations for the heroine Gu, and I think it's very ordinary. What's uncomfortable is that the male protagonist feels like he's treated differently. If you like two people, just do it honestly. Tell me, why do you have to miss two people? It's very uncomfortable to see the restaurant where the college entrance examination let Lin go to eat by himself. Maybe there are many unsaid points. It always makes me want to read it, but I feel uncomfortable after reading it. It feels like a pity to abandon it, and it feels tasteless to eat it. It's not very sensual to me, it's just my personal understanding. Many times I feel that what the protagonist does and what he says are very different, and it looks very disconnected. I feel the same way as the leader who forced me to be reborn. How can I put it, watching them play with people's emotions makes my heart feel better. Maybe this is also happening in reality, or there is something more outrageous. You can't blame me if you like it. What kind of mentality do I have, a glass heart? Amorous? It doesn't matter, I only worry about those people who don't care what they do. The first time I read the two heroines falling in love was in the book Kissing Pigs. The form and style of that book was completely different from this one. Maybe the purpose of writing it was different, and the feeling of reading it was also different. Personally, I think the male protagonist lacks sincerity. I don't know why I thought of this with so many words. Maybe it's because the male protagonist treats the awkward relationship between the two female protagonists. Maybe the author is right to write this, maybe he is wrong. Human nature is complicated. Can the relationship between three people really be stable? What comes with sincerity is also sincerity, right?

The author said that he is a newcomer making his debut, but I think it is more like Ma Jia, or is it a starting point for enlightenment from other sites? Many details are well written. Although there are shadows of another book, it also contains new ideas and is worth reading. However, in the process of reading the book, I always found that some book friends were dissatisfied with Gu's plot and threatened to abandon the book, saying that it was not as good as a single female protagonist. If later book friends have high requirements for the two heroines to be equally good, they'd better not click on this book, because it is true that Lin's character is much better than Gu's. Here I recommend another book to wash the eyes of these book friends, "Warm Monsoon", which also saves the heroine like this book, and the heroine is also a genius character. But the author of that book made sure from the beginning that it was about a single female protagonist. Although there are other excellent supporting actresses, they never pose a threat to the heroine. However, there is also a very interesting phenomenon in that book, that is, there are always some book clubs who hope to accept the female supporting role halfway through, otherwise they will not give such a good character. In short, if you can accept two female protagonists and one of the characters is excellent, this book is recommended. If not, there are so many books in Qidian, you can always find one that suits you.

The previous writing is all very good, but later on when it is revealed that the protagonist is in two different situations, the method given by the author to recover the heroine is to ask another heroine to have sex with her, and both heroines will kiss her on the mouth. I don't think it's useful to have a male protagonist.

The writing is very good, I hope the author will update it more

The writing is very good. Come on, the author will do more as long as he is not dead 🙂🙂🙂

I just flipped through the comment sections of other books, and one comment reminded me of another point that attracted me to this book. It's just that the male protagonist is not SB. The male protagonist at least conveys the feeling of an old man. This is commendable. Unlike other novels, the male protagonist is like an NC who has not experienced society. The author is at least not weak in his ability to portray characters. At least the male protagonist's uncle, best friend, mother, aunt, Lin and her grandmother have relatively distinct character traits.

I just read it and I feel like the author's first order is not ideal. But I still advise the author not to give up. Personally, I think your book is very good. I feel like my results will improve later on. I personally still have a few suggestions, including stretching the career line, and adjusting the protagonist's learning and portrayal a little bit. Don't make people feel like a pure bastard. In other words, you can either choose between academics and career, and at least write down the point where the protagonist stands out from his peers. This will bring a feeling of pleasure.

The reality is cruel. It is impossible for girls like Lin Ruoxi to exist. Most readers have never heard of a girl like Gu. It is precisely because there is no such girl that they pursue it, hoping to find some solace and some hope in the world of books. Just like Shen Youchu's deeply rooted description, the author's writing skills and descriptions are very good, but I still hope that the author can write a more "beautiful" or even "fantasy" relationship transition, instead of superimposing too many contradictions and becoming a reality of separation or half at home and half abroad. It's been a long time since I updated, so I don't have many monthly tickets, so please forgive me.

The author's three views give people a childish and twisted feeling

The book club did not allow me to speak before... Emmm This little thing actually took me several days to deal with... Thank you all readers for your monthly votes and follow-up reading!

I still feel a little pitiful. Muxue was originally a lively and lovely childhood sweetheart, but now she has become neither good nor bad. It's okay to like Lin Ruoxi, after all, who can't like Xixi? But what should be highlighted more is the companionship between two people, the love in all the details of life. I feel that the current family of three seems stable on the surface, but there are too many problems. And it's very twisted…

Crazy pressure on Lin Ruoxi's line will only make the main characters in this book, including Gu Muxue, lose their character charm. The characters will not stand up and their faces will become emmm.

Why is it always portrayed as how powerful and wealthy Gu Muxue's family is? Everyone is saying that Gu Muxue's family has a lot of power, and she has the ability to use her power to suppress others, just like giving alms to Lin Ruoxi 😅 It was not as good as Lin Ruoxi's portrayal, and the perception becomes even worse as it goes on.

How does the author plan to arrange the emotional line? Are you going to keep eating Lin to death without daring to resist? The last few chapters have gotten weirder and weirder as I read them. Why should she continue to suffer if she can suffer?

The two heroines are so good that I feel like the male protagonist is not worthy

I just ask the author not to write about knives in the future. Don't do this or that like Chen Gou did. The sooner the Shura Field is released, the better. I have written so much. Don't let any of the heroines suffer. The worst is to go abroad.

If you don't like the dormitory and hate other people smoking, why don't you move out? Like to be abused?

Now that I have read more than 400 chapters, I have a feeling that the male protagonist feels that Lin Ruoxi is born with a lack of love and is sensitive, so he has been taking care of her. Gu Muxue has always believed that even if she was wronged, she would let her go. The behavior of being alone together, Li and I suspected, she did it on purpose. Even if there was a reason for her innate lack of love, she definitely did it intentionally in her heart, at least she didn't deliberately object to it. Obviously, she was not taking care of Gu Muxue's emotions, at least she didn't really take her seriously. If she really took her seriously, it would be impossible not to be aware of it. What's more, the two are related. His memory can be recited after the college entrance examination, but now he can't remember it? Do you just believe it? I really don't believe it, so it seems like it's definitely not what the author said, so I can't help myself. What I said is definitely a bit exaggerated, but I think you should understand what I mean. In the end, I feel that the male protagonist has been letting down Gu Muxue, and Lin Ruoxi has been morally kidnapping, so I want to know the author, what do you think? If you give me a person who usually reads pirated copies and spends money to read books on this, he wants to see if it is the original version. Did he make mistakes when he picked up the code? If it were real life, I feel that in the end the male protagonist would be haunted by Lin Ruoxi, and Gu Mu would be hurt again and again, and she would be completely heartbroken and run away.

Kill Xue Gou and seize Ruoxi!

No, what the hell are these chapters? Gu is still not finished after dozens of chapters, you procrastinator, why don't you make up a sad story about a car accident to make Gu feel soft? I feel like my character is a bit broken. Can't I ask Gu to put in a few conditions? Keep putting it off, double heroine, don't really become a single heroine, and don't let Lin Ruoxi's character change here. Wasn't the original setting clingy, but now she is no longer clingy, obedient, and stupid as promised to the male lead? Looks boring

It's really hard to read one chapter a day. The results of this book should not be bad. Big brother, a small fire depends on luck, a big fire depends on fate. The time has come, and the current environment is not good. What can I do better than getting hundreds or thousands of subscriptions every day?

I've finished watching it and won't follow it for the time being. It's overall very good. I can rate it a 9 before going to Shen City. The part after Shen City is too watery and the quality has seriously declined. The protagonist's choice of college and his decision to look down on Qingbei is really embarrassing. Everything else is okay. The first time on the train is also very exciting.

Why should Lin Ruoxi, a talented girl who is ahead of her time in learning, be described as mentally retarded? Such a person shouldn't be so young, right? 😐

Twenty tickets, plus finessing

I have read novels for ten years, and there are countless harem stories about women. This is the only one that almost killed me. The early routines of this book are classic and dull. Unexpectedly, in the plot of Shura Field, the author started to exert his strength. The writing and emotional investment can be a god. I think it can surpass Chen Hansheng's book. Unfortunately, the first part is mediocre, and most people give up without seeing the second part.

Jia Jing, understand?

More finesse, you know? 🤫🤫

Brother, you are not alive yet

At first I thought it was a double heroine, but now it seems like it's more than that. One commenter is right. If Chen Tingting is also the heroine, mark it out. Otherwise, it will be very painful to write so much and not accept it in the end. The cute and clingy school girl doesn't seem to be annoying, although I feel that two female protagonists are enough. If Chen Tingting had to be added, it wouldn't be unacceptable. After all, the harems in the past were usually seven, eight, a dozen or more, but I just don't know how to write it. Now it is difficult to balance Mu Xue and Ruoxi, and if Chen Tingting is added to the harem, the harem will explode.