That's Not How You Drive a Mecha Girl!

In this world view, both the driver and the driver are working hard on the field. The driver and the driver can say: "Why do you race if you are afraid of death?" The media can also promote the driver's fearless spirit. The protagonist, the driver, and the supporting driver, none of them are afraid of death, because they are working hard, and I want to focus on this point. But the race team, team manager, and technical director cannot say this, because if the rules encourage drivers to die, it is anti-human and anti-moral, and their duty is to ensure the safety and fairness of the competition. A game between old and dead people cannot be held. So the race team will have a series of invisible confrontations with the drivers. The drivers want to fight more aggressively, but the race team won't let them and use rules to limit them. Each one is a bloody lesson. The team managers are more neutral. If the results are not good, they will let it go and even force the drivers to work hard. If the results are good, they will choose to maintain points. These are some of my personal thoughts while writing, thank you for watching.

Personally, I think it's not as good as the Tomato book. Just comparing the front one, the latter Tomato book really feels worse.

I've been waiting for two days, and if it doesn't work, I'll run away. To be honest, this plot is a bit difficult. I don't think it can be avoided. People from a whole city come to catch the protagonist. How do you let the protagonist run away? There is a helicopter overhead, and there are so many racers and underground racers coming to get the protagonist. Are you going to arrange for the protagonist to use up favors to get out of trouble? I will not talk about this dilemma for the moment. Is it caused by the protagonist himself? It is difficult to end it simply by writing it like this. You are facing a state agency and a driver from a city, and after the game, the protagonist Jackdaw, the machine girl, must be the one. How do you explain that Jackdaw is the protagonist? And isn't there still a way to mess with your protagonist? It's not good and it's poisonous

What Zhou Yun got was a script for setting up his own racing team. I didn't want to write that there was a boss behind Zhou Yun. Zhou Yun himself was the boss. The plot of Linglu Club is just a warm-up, unfolding the world view and paving the way for grudges and grudges. Before entering the world championships, Zhou Yun will have his own team. Hope everyone supports it!

Being so resistant, I have already thought of 4 ways to increase my goodwill and synchronization rate. The question is where to get the machine girl.

This is the first time I've seen someone with the same subject matter as Tomato

Isn't this the copy from next door?

The subject matter is very attractive, racing, machines and girls, a combination of punches that men can't refuse. It clicked, and it didn't take long for me to click in. But the actual experience is not good. To be more specific, the max-level protagonist travels to a world where even though he has an organic girl, he is not good at driving. At the beginning, it feels like an invincible novel. It is not until chapter 45 that he has really run through it. The front is full of pressure, all pressure. After time travel, he is looked down upon without academic qualifications, even if he is a big boss. When applying for a job, he expresses his advanced ideas and is looked at as a fool. The car I modified was competing with the former retired champion driver's car. When I was about to win, the car blew up. Finally, the former champion was appreciated and pushed the protagonist to join the club directly. However, the owner of the club had no brains and felt that although the protagonist was appreciated by the former champion and almost won, he was just a car repairman and a noob. He could not drive a racing car, so he begged to sign a betting agreement before joining. It's useless to enter the club. The owner of the club has already gambled and lost all his money and has no resources. The two robot girls who train the protagonist are two gangsters. They don't use snacks to lure them into the car. The national football team was also sewn into the game. Rich people with connections wanted to bring money to join the game. The club owner immediately thought about how to kick the protagonist without paying the liquidated damages. It is also difficult for the protagonist to tame his own robot girl. It is impossible to buy it. He must find a robot girl who wanders on the street, suffers from mental illness and mental illness, is not mentally sound, cannot speak well, and runs away after eating and destroying food. Finally, the robot girl was recruited, and the club was founded with the money from the house and factory sold by the adoptive father. The competition was about to start, but pressure from peers came. They were not allowed to recruit employees and tried to install undercover agents. They arranged people to block the road and block the seats in the competition field, and even maliciously violated the rules to deduct points for the male protagonist. The expressiveness of the racing session is also not good, there is no sense of graphics, who uses what skills to have what impact and speed increase, the drift exceeds xx places. Why do we need skills such as acceleration and deceleration that cause negative effects? This kind of thing is only fun when the protagonist uses it. If not used, it is as disgusting as playing games and constantly disconnecting the network card. After reading more than 60 chapters, I am still not happy. Instead, this common method in reality comes one after another. We have seen too many national football teams in reality. Even the novel is not a story of pure love and racing. I can only give a first order to support it.

This book is undoubtedly well written. Although there is a lot of room for improvement, the basic skills are quite solid. I heard that the author will read the comment section, so I will say more. The author is probably new, and may have written a book before, but has not finished it, or it is very short. Although the handling of many parts is not so satisfactory, there are no mistakes, or there are no mistakes that affect the perception. The overall rhythm and writing style are also above the standard. It's really good-looking, and it's worth watching. It's just that the update is too slow, so I don't recommend reading it. The only problem at the moment is that the upgrade routine is a bit too repetitive. Although the plot is different every time, the overall structure is not very different. Get new equipment, improve your bonds, break through yourself, get a higher ranking on the field, and then your opponents will be moved, and they will break through themselves together, and finally start a live broadcast, and netizens will follow suit, and then express the shock of the riders on the larger stage, or the shock of the riders present, especially some high-ranking people must also be shocked. Of course, this high-ranking person is a person with greater power or level compared to the protagonist's current stage, and it is not the kind of person who is directly pulled to the top. I like this routine very much, but I doubt if I will feel tired if I continue to write more than 500 pictures with this routine? This is a small loop that is refreshing. Although it is repetitive, it is well done in structure and structure. The overall main line seems to be relatively clear now. I am also very curious about how the author plans to unfold it, but I have to say that it is just two old men fighting for the direction of a club for the sake of ideals. There is nothing wrong with this, but it can only be said to be quite satisfactory. And the protagonist's sense of participation in it is a bit weak. It has been a bit weak so far. I don't know how it will develop in the future, but for now it seems more like a group of NPCs pushing their own plot, and the protagonist playing his own role there. There is some interaction between the two sides, but not much. Although I know this book is about a group portrait, the group portrait aspect is a bit too weak. It's more like wherever the protagonist goes, a partner appears, and then after dealing with this partner, it enters the next stage of the story. Then when we start a group with the boss in the future, everyone lends their strength to me, and the partners I called before will come out to help fight together. I know this aspect will definitely change in the future when the game starts to get more exciting, but for now this is the state. The other is whether the author writes too much about racing? This is a point of view that I personally prefer. Many times I would rather see the protagonist think and grow, and be appropriately frustrated, whether it is failure or anything else. But what I see now is a protagonist with almost no growth curve. He has been winning since the beginning and has been rising in a straight line. The thing with the growth curve is his car, not the person himself, so until now my understanding of the protagonist is actually relatively vague. He said those words and did those things, but as for his inner tendencies and inner logic, I don't know anything except that he wants to win and race cars. In other words, the protagonist is the person who feels most unfamiliar to me in this whole book. Characters should be flesh and blood, not deified and conceptualized. In addition, the recent emotional scenes have been relatively weak. The emotional scenes between the protagonist and Jackdaw gave me the feeling that the author thought there should be an emotional scene here, and then put it in. The cause and effect were clearer and clearer, more like shooting an arrow first and then drawing a target. I may have thought of other questions, but I have forgotten them now. I talked too much just now, so I'll stop here. But overall, among all the new books that I have been impressed by in recent months, this book is the one I am most optimistic about. The author does not need to rush to improve himself quickly in this book. The most important thing is to complete the story first. There is no shortcut to writing a novel. It is all accumulated over time and simmered slowly. If we only look at the writing style and plot, if the author writes two or three more books like this and continues with this momentum, judging from the appetite of this old man with 15 years of reading experience, I think it will still be platinum.

The smuggling episode looked really shitty, dragging out and frustrating. It looks like the male protagonist is in the limelight, but in the end, only a few people are chasing such a big smuggling matter. The power of the smuggling group is much more powerful than the mounted police.