Fu Daoxianxiu

The writing is good, with a sense of ordinary people's flow, the plot is well detailed, the development is more natural, and it is more comfortable to read. I really like to follow this kind of more distinctive fairy novels, such as talisman formations and so on. It is recommended to add some understanding of Fu Dao, such as what the principles of Fu Dao are. Just blindly emphasizing the improvement of the protagonist's understanding and the improvement of the success rate of drawing symbols will make the portrayal of the protagonist very pale. To explain the principles and analyze Fu Dao in depth, it is enough to have your own understanding and to be able to justify it. It would be better if you can do it from a novel perspective. For example, I once read a book about formations. The protagonist was a programmer who traveled through time. After learning the formations, he used a programmer's thinking to deconstruct the formations and compared the formations to codes and the formations to programs that implement functions. I thought it was quite interesting. Maybe the author of that book was also a programmer, and he gave up because he was too busy. I hope the author can continue to create.

Is the protagonist drifting? He bought the Foundation Establishment Pill to plan how to survive safely. He also went fishing. Forget about fishing, he also caught a Foundation Establishment. This is so stupid. It seems that the Enlightenment Pearl can only improve understanding, but not IQ.

Yao Lang's body is like a jade tripod, with medicinal fragrance. It can be used for cultivation and breakthroughs. It is a rare elixir in the world of cultivation. Sects often give it to female golden elixir cultivators from other sects as gifts to build connections. There are also a small amount of it circulating in the black market, which is very popular. The contribution points obtained by Yin Ji when completing sect tasks can be called "ticket fees" and are used to supplement fees. 😃

If you have cheats and opportunities, you should cherish your wretched development. In the end, you will always get involved in various things and become a mess. The problem is that you have no plan and no self-awareness. You always rely on luck and rely on others to let you go. How can a normal person be willing to trust his life in the hands of others? Compared with Han Li and Han Tianzun, the protagonist's IQ is not qualified to survive at all, and he would have died long ago under normal circumstances. Survive purely by unreasonable luck and the villain's forced intelligence.

This novel is a bit interesting in the free chapters, the protagonist and supporting characters have online IQs, and the plot is also interesting. But in the paid chapters, it feels like the author has no outline, as if someone else is writing it, and the writing is like an assembly line product. It is extremely boring and not recommended.

After building the foundation, there is nothing to see. It is obvious that the author lacks planning and writes wherever he thinks.

The plot is fragmented and has no coherence.

A top-grade elixir costs between three and four thousand, and the boss has to pay a premium to buy it. . . . After all, it is just an elixir for the first level of Qi training. Does it need to be so difficult? Then the elixirs used after foundation building will not be available in the market. In addition, the elixirs for first-level high-level cultivation are so expensive, and the foundation-building pills are even more precious. The previous price in the article was 10,000 spirit stones... Which is too low. It is a bit ridiculous to exchange 4 Jade Dew Pills for the foundation-building pills. . . In addition, the protagonist, as a first-level high-grade talisman master, can earn 10,000 spirit stones in a year. This is unreasonable. Is it ten years to draw talismans? The article describes how difficult it is to build a foundation, but the price system is very easy to twist. I didn't pay much attention to prices when reading articles before, but the price of this book really affected my reading experience, Qianjian.

I have been following the book since it was first published. To be honest, I really like books about Fu Dao, especially the one in Jian Lai that describes Fu Dao, which also overlaps with Chen Ping'an's. This book is really good to read at the beginning, even if it is updated once a day, it is not a big problem. Later, the content is a bit boring, and it feels like switching back and forth between three places. Later, I have to start practicing all the messy exercises, but the qualifications themselves are not good, and plug-ins cannot speed up the practice, especially the content of Fu Dao is even less, hey!

Beautiful, love watching. I like this genre that develops smoothly without exaggerating golden fingers.

This male-female drama is more awkward than primary school students falling in love.

I suddenly remembered that I have been reading books for so many years, but there is no book that says that if you beat someone with a lower cultivation level than yourself, you will pay a heavy price or you can't beat the mortal stream. Then it is really the mortal stream. There are low and high, failure and helplessness. It's a pity that Xuanchen's path is almost eunuch.

Since cultivating immortality, let's go classical. Don't make modern jokes all the time. Women will only affect the speed of the sword.

Goldfinger has so little sense of existence that he has forgotten about his grandfather?

If it weren't for the thin spiritual energy in that place and the inability to support a large number of spiritual ants, the queen would directly explode into an army, and it would be difficult for the protagonist to catch the queen. There should be inheritance of insect masters or insect cultivators, as well as treasures for storing spirit insects. Ordinary beast master bags cannot hold a large number of spirit insects. At least one queen ant and insect breeding space must be guaranteed, plus hundreds of mature spirit ants. Treasures that can carry a large number of spiritual insects, such as gourd rings or bracelets, the space should not be too small. Conjecture about the treasures stored in Soul-Eating Ants The gourd, I think, is a relatively moderate design, and it can be divided into two areas. The upper layer is the nest where adult Soul-eating ants are stored, and the lower layer is a separate area for the reproduction of queen ants and insect eggs (including larvae). The advantage of the ring is that it is concealed enough, but the small space, including the nest space of the queen ant brood and a large number of adult insects, is a bit too outrageous after thinking about it. What level of magic weapon does it have to be? It is a bit too powerful. A bracelet is similar to a ring, although not as exaggerated.

I think the most important function of the Enlightenment Bead is enlightenment. After all, it is not the Enlightenment Bead. Enlightenment is just a small branch of application. Therefore, the protagonist does not need to be like the protagonists in other books, who get half of the exercises and practice them halfway. Without the second half, there is no way to practice. The cultivation methods of immortal cultivators should be divided into "Sutra", "Dian", "Dharma" and "Jue", which are advanced from simple to complex. All four can directly point to the great road. The Dao is as simple as it gets. Even the simplest exercises can be practiced. The only reason is that personal predisposition and ability to realize the Tao are different. Practice is like crossing a river and a sea from one bank to the other. The exercises are like a big boat or a small boat, or crossing a river with a reed. The "things" used are different, but their uses are the same. Of course, the latter is often more difficult and cannot be done by non-mighty people. Kung Fu is not static, nor is it a profound classic. It is not a one-time achievement. It often starts from humble beginnings (just like biological evolution and codes, from simple to complex.) Or a casual practice, using the methods of hundreds of schools to eliminate the unnecessary and retain the essential, cutting out the complex and simplifying it, or it is easier to achieve the magic method over several generations. After a long evolution, it is gradually perfected. Among them, there are families, individuals and sects, little by little changes, and slowly iterative evolution. (You can write about a particularly awesome power, starting from the lowest level of casual cultivators, practicing the most common techniques, just like the monks and practitioners in ancient times, wearing hundreds of robes and eating hundreds of meals, but they have achieved profound achievements. The most primitive version of a skill passed down by a certain sect or family is extremely ordinary) Any advanced skill is composed of the simplest elements, just like the matter in the universe and life on earth. The most common technique in the world of cultivating immortals is the "Jue" level technique. The improvement of the level of the technique is not a simple superposition and splicing. This is like cooking. You combine flour, water, meat, salt and seasonings to make meat buns, pizza, or other delicacies. But if you mix these ingredients together simply and roughly, what you get is dark cuisine.

I just wanted to say that we can't put the cart before the horse, and that cultivation is the most important. After all, the main purpose of cultivating immortality is to achieve immortality, and everything else is supplementary, but I changed it later. The writing is indeed very good, but the updates are a bit slow and not enough to read.

I hope the protagonist doesn't practice everything, it's best to focus on the Tao of Talisman. Now the attributes of the Talisman are getting weaker and weaker.

The simplest and most direct is the explosion flow. You can use the adult Soul-Eating Ants as consumables. It doesn't matter if some of them die. As long as there is a queen ant, you can continue to breed and breed new Soul-Eating Ants as a supplement. As the Queen's realm improves, the strength of the new Soul-Eating Ants will also become stronger. Can't the protagonist draw symbols? You can draw some talismans on the soul-eating ants, and you can draw talisman on the human body. Demonic beasts and spiritual objects are the best materials for drawing talisman. The body strength of the soul-devouring ants is stronger than that of ordinary monsters, and the protagonist's magic weapon is not as good as it. There is no reason why it can't be drawn. (Art is explosion. Fire explosion, thunderstorm, ice explosion, water explosion. Designed to be timed, cultivating immortal terror and terrorism.) As a Taoist formation, it is also stronger than ordinary monsters. The most important thing is that it can be replenished at any time. You can also apply some toxins on the body of the spirit-eating ants. If it makes them feel sick, apply some Yoneda Kyo to make them feel sick even if there is no harm. I thought of another idea, steal electricity, go to the neighbor's house and steal some electricity. Use the spirit-eating ants to devour the spiritual energy, and then prepare a hundred and eighty jade bottles. The spiritual liquid produced by the spirit-eating ants' refined spiritual energy can be wholesaled for 0 yuan. (Like little bees, we don't produce nectar, we are nature's porters.)

1. What is the protagonist's current main skill? (Will there be powerful skills arranged later?) 2. In addition to talismans, does the protagonist have other means behind him? (Such as spells, flying swords, formations, secret magic powers.) 3. Is the comprehension of the Enlightenment Pearl a one-time temporary improvement, or can it be superimposed? (Whether it is equally effective in other aspects, such as formations, alchemy, weapon training, magic powers.) 4. Does this book have a single female protagonist, multiple female protagonists, or no female protagonist?