Hogwarts: My Galleons System

Aboriginal people plus plug-ins plus a self-created Lovegood heroine? It's not Luna. I created my own Vivian Lovegood (with a curse). It's unknown whether she is the heroine.

I really don't think the natives are good. System + natives are weird no matter how they look at it. For example, other cheats are OK. System + natives are really bad.

Although Westerners may be more mature than us, since they have chosen the Hogwarts worldview, age has become the biggest issue. Referring to the performance of the main and supporting characters in the first grade Aborigines, children, eager to become wizards, with parents, all these buffs are stacked up. I really can't imagine how the protagonist can do it without exposing the system. Moreover, although it is feasible to make money by growing vegetables, choosing varieties and negotiating in the early stage are not something that a child can do well.

Emmm, first graders are taking Magical Creatures class? If you want a second set, please don't be so outrageous, okay?

The protagonist is so useless. He has been cheating for 12 years, but he is still a cannon fodder.

The author of this book has good writing skills. If you want to challenge yourself to choose an original female protagonist and an indigenous male protagonist, you are already half dead. You don't want any of the popularity bonus of the original heroine. Even if the stock market stirs up debate among readers, you don't want it. You are so confident👍Why 8 out of ten books have Hermione as the heroine? Because it is easy to write and has some popularity bonus. Kuroko is also a fan

This reminds me of a book that tells a story. The protagonist, a British native, copies a future Chinese Internet novel. He can also draw prizes for things in the book. He can predict things, but he doesn't know the plot.

Although I haven't read many chapters, here's a guide to avoid pitfalls 1. The protagonist is native + system, and the three little ones are of the same generation. 2. Original NPC, currently I don't know if it will be the female protagonist. 3. I can't read any more, welcome to add 😴

I only read Chapter 1, which was pretentious and boring.

At first, I thought it was the protagonist who traveled through time, and opened a plug-in in the LOL mall. After looking at it, I found out that he was an indigenous person. His father was an alchemy master. He gave the protagonist a lot of protective equipment and door keys that can be used repeatedly. I first bought the heart of nature in the mall, paired with the sachet given by my father. The space is said to be larger than Newt's. I have an 11-year-old body with eight-pack abs. I can accept these settings. In the first grade, in order to complete system tasks, the protagonist owned a dragon, bought stolen dragon eggs with the heroine, and the Weasley twins, and fought two battles with the original owner, the devil with the eyes. It turns out that the sachet can passively release an enhanced version of the iron armor spell, and can also be used as a door key. Then in Chapter 41, the troll accelerated and made a leaping slash. The passive iron armor spell of the sachet was not released. The protagonist blocked the blow with his arms crossed, but his clothes were torn and he felt a little painful. The troll's stick lost its durability... Hmm, I don't know what to say

Author, I would like to give you a suggestion. You must have an outline when writing a novel. You should write an outline of 10,000 to 20,000 words, and then write the novel. When you have written ten words, you should know whether your book is good or not. You should either abandon it or discard it. You should collect the problems and write the outline. Otherwise, you will not be able to write a novel. Unless you are generating electricity for love, how can you live on the one thousand and three dollars a month?

Wait a minute, this golden dragon must be obtained by the protagonist, that is, it can be exchanged for things, and it cannot be given by parents, right?

I can't stand the sight of the giant monster. The protagonist has a system but is so rubbish. What's the use of the system?

When did the protagonist kill that unpleasant Vivian?

Very warm writing, the author is a very loving person

Quirrell feels brought to life in this book, helpless and desperate

Don't use so many of your own words and sentences. Use what everyone is used to.

I can't understand the recent chapters 🙄

Check the information in detail. Don't use rigid online formulas. It will read very bluntly. Whether it is ancient blood or pure blood, let's lay the groundwork first. At least Weasley has been following the Order of the Phoenix for more than ten years before he can safely arrange his youngest son to be with the savior, including Hermione. You are savoring the routines and calculations, which are fully written in the ending.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

I thought it was buried food and fodder, with a relaxed and stress-free style, but I was immediately persuaded to quit in Chapter 41. The protagonist and Harry were treated differently, and he was extremely partial. This is the Dumbledore I hate the most. In a sense the author is successful. The system has been offline for a long time, and the added attributes are inexplicable and are not used at all. From the dialogue, Lao Deng seems to know about it, so it seems to be a fake system. There's something to be said for keeping the original style. After all, I've seen all the instruction-style novels, and yours isn't too bad. Unfortunately, I probably got tired of writing and started to work on it. The system became useless in a single thought, and the protagonist changed from a relaxed daily life to a stress-resistant savior.