Death: My Attribute Life

I knew at first glance that trouble was about to come. It would have been fine if the protagonist had been confident enough to take over and fight directly. He also forcibly arranged for Ge Kuang to come in. At first glance, it was a conflict deliberately arranged to get in touch with the characters in the plot. It would be better to revise it now that there is not much written, and make it more natural.

Attribute life? Living a life of abuse, Rangiku's weaknesses are so obvious that she really doesn't know how she can be so arrogant. I have seen that after that, all kinds of anger broke out, and my mouth hurt when I was so angry.

Apart from the name, it basically has nothing to do with the God of Death. The second set has too many private activities.

Check everything and just start writing. The soul has passed through Soul Society and still takes over the body? There are all souls there. If you seize the body, you will be investigated for swallowing other souls. It is better for the soul to travel to the present world, be buried by the soul of the Shinigami who was left behind, and then go to the Soul Society directly. Because there is a large corridor to monitor, if you have a little strength, you will be investigated. What do you think of this setting? Do you treat people as fools? That place is hundreds of years old at every turn. Who can hide it?

How many chapters has Mia been drunk on? Wearing the skin of the God of Death and doing something else? The most important thing is to learn from the martial arts movies of thirty years ago, and you can fight in three chapters! There are a few people who want to see your martial arts instruction. It's not animation with special effects, and the dry text is extremely boring! Gone

It's so unreasonable. It's just like you learn one plus one and suddenly know the linear equation of two variables. Then you develop your own unique skills. There are still several unique skills. Even if the unique skills given by the system have a source, the protagonist is self-taught without any teacher. . .

This Bleach anime has too many personal settings, and it's not good to watch.

Hanging sheep's heads, selling dog meat, and abusing the master's hydrology.

There are a lot of second features. The front is fine, but the back is really unbearable. Maybe it's not suitable for me.

It only took a few chapters from the first kiss to Rangiku to another one, right? It was too fast.

Is there a part of the Soul King in Pu Yuan? How could he have the ability to affect the senses of those around him? This is a private design, I can't stand it anymore...

Dude, are you crazy? Are you writing conspiracy theories? I can accept it up to Chapter 95. What is Chapter 96?

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Do I have to start writing from the time when I traveled back in time? I just came here after reading Chapter 6. This is a fanfic, and the plot can be explained in one chapter with more than a dozen pictures.

No sense? Compromise in the end? What a fart!

Rangiku, the only character who made Ichigo blush and get a little lustful

Why should we tear down other people's playgrounds? You went to someone's house and smashed their computer?

My wife

No, buddy, you are writing too fast. Can you write a million words?