Swallowed Star: Grotto Insight

Everything about this book is good, except for the heroine. The heroine is the orphan of the protagonist's captain. When the protagonist was still confused and had a missing soul, she stole the protagonist's cell tissue for research. Later, she used these tissues to give birth to the protagonist's child. After the protagonist's soul is complete, he knows about the child and goes to see the heroine. As a result, they ended up having sex as soon as they met. Where is the logic? The protagonist, the invincible God of War, can't find a girlfriend on earth? Are you having sex with such a morally deficient person, or someone who is a junior? Female channels don't even dare to write like this! You said that the protagonist loves her, but you want to write that the protagonist is devoted to cultivation and has no heroine in his heart. Then they switch to the universe. The two are in two universe countries. They start to write about the heroine being independent and self-reliant and starting her own business. She borrows money from the protagonist to draw a line. I thought the two of them were going to separate and settle down. Who knows?! After the protagonist returned to Qianwu Universe Kingdom, he got together with this woman again. You can say that the heroine loves the protagonist. The protagonist is semi-demented at the beginning, and the heroine steals cells so that she can be promoted in a scientific research organization. You can say she doesn't love her, but she went to the battle to give birth to a child herself. If she wanted to cling to the protagonist, the sheets would have rolled over her later. The protagonist went to explore the universe, and she wanted to draw a clear line with the protagonist. It would be inexplicable if she knew that the protagonist didn't love her so she gave up, but then the protagonist came back to develop a relationship with her. That Long Yue is stronger than her, and she has no idea what kind of heroine she wants to create. Obviously the protagonist is very good and the plot is very good, but it turns out that it is matched with such a female protagonist. If you don't know how to write emotional lines, don't write it. Just create a background heroine (such as Xu Xin), but you have to create such a disgusting thing.

The plot after entering the secret realm is so disgusting🤢🤢. You know that the background of the story is disgusting, why do you continue to go on for so long? Are you a great god? They also forcefully arranged for the protagonist to reveal his understanding and talent. Until now, he is still a piece of pork on the chopping board, waiting to be enslaved by his soul. If the dungeon ends with the protagonist escaping due to an accidental fall from the sky, then delete the book directly.

It would be better if the protagonist's enemy is changed to a feudal prince, or to a soul slave of the feudal king faction. A king who is good at souls, and his methods are so ruthless. It is impossible for the protagonist's father, a realm lord who is comparable to immortality, to hold him back, let alone let a realm lord escape. Just put any soul slave and it will be solved.

It's terrible. The latest update is terrible. It's not like it was written with a lot of thought. It just happened to happen. It was forced to come together. There was no reason and no result. Because I didn't want to change Luo Feng's chance, but it also disrupted Luo Feng. Feng's trajectory, I almost missed the opportunity to write about Luo Feng, but I managed to piece it together in this way. I can only say that this piece of writing is just like when I was in school, my teacher said that I didn't have the heart to write randomly. This chapter feels like a piece of porridge dropped into a pot of good porridge.

The writing is very good, don't write it next time.

The heroine is so disgusting. The protagonist is on earth and in the universe. He can't find any girl. He keeps pushing and pulling, breaking the connection and drawing a clear line. Come on, the female channel is still a piece of shit. Really, the Devouring Stars fandom either has no heroine or has a harem. The rest has a single heroine. It's so funny.

It has its own content, but I just don't understand why the protagonist is so licking when he is with the Earth Gang. Not giving coordinates when leaving the Earth can be understood as plot advancement. What happened on the Earth before the secret realm came out has been forgotten. Others treat you as an outsider and guard you. You are in a relationship with the people on Earth as a philanthropist, and I don't have any resentment in my heart. There's no need to be so awkward. It's good to have the status of an outsider. If you force yourself into the circle and others don't want to see you, you have to arrange for your son to have the status of an alien brother.

It's a waste of my money. It's a rubbish novel. The Lord of Huang Jian is so forced. After becoming the Lord of the Universe, he should be taught a lesson.

Is it inappropriate to use a pig's trotters to fight against a genius in Pre-War 3? Then, wouldn't it be better to become a master of at least the Venerable Master than to practice on your own? You also have an immortal enemy who has been crowned the king. The result is that Pig's Feet is working hard on its own, lifeless, unmotivated, and uninteresting. Finally, it can't hold on any longer.

Not hanging up, disturbing Luo Feng's opportunity, just waiting to die