The Heart of Fantasy Begins with Devouring

What are you writing about? This is the worst fanfic I've ever read!

If the author is not good at writing, it is better not to do this. There is no foreshadowing at all, giving people the feeling of being forced to smooth things over. So how do readers understand the following content and reverse it? A fantasy within a fantasy? Are you here to play Inception?

I don't understand why it's written like this. This is the only time traveler with plug-ins. Even without plug-ins, as long as you have some talent, you can do better than this.

Devouring the so-called state of mind is of no use at least in the original universe! Just one sentence is enough for the giant ax to survive. I don't believe in my golden finger. I believe that the inheritance should still be blocked. This is written as if the ending of a book is a dream, and it is like starting over after writing it. This plot is not good.

It's really inexplicable that Wen Qing is seriously ill. If you want to write Devour, don't do these things, just do it. If you want to do this kind of literary and mysterious thing, don't write fan fiction.

What are you writing about? It's a mess, and with the main character, the final result actually gets worse. The main character is a pure waste and a drag, which makes me sick.

It is strongly recommended to have a blacklist function, it will delay the book shopping too much.

Although I haven't read this book much, I admire my brother's perseverance and passion for love. There are many good-achieving devourers. The author can't stand it if he is criticized for a few words, so he will stop updating.

The first 40 or so chapters are both fantasy and past and future. Becoming the Lord of the Universe, then willing the True God, becoming the True God of the Void, and becoming the Eternal True God. Then, for more than 50 chapters, it becomes a fantasy dream. Then, when the lifespan is up, I will still be the Realm Lord. Then I will not break through and become immortal, but become the realm in the Snow Eagle Lord. I will start to worry about the past and the future??? What the hell, it looks like Wen Qing is sick~ I can't stand it anymore.

You'd better write other articles. You're not suitable for writing online novels. Of course, if you insist on writing, you can also write suspense, mystery and horror. It's really hard to read your fan novels!