I'm the Chosen Child of Fortune, Yet I Can't Beat Your Three Generations of Immortal Cultivation?

It is recommended not to read it. The number of words in Zhangzhang is very low. It is very rubbish. There are panels in Zhangzhang, even twice in one chapter. There is no writing, it's all panels. Of the two million words, half a million of them are panels.

The protagonist runs around all over the map. He can't stay on a map for more than a few chapters. He is like a disaster star. When he gets there, he will fight.

The author gave the protagonist an earth spiritual root but wrote that the protagonist can only cultivate immortality with a medium-grade spiritual root. I am really speechless. Others cannot cultivate immortality.

A little gangster can beat up ten adult men who have been working all year round, and a small boss can beat thirty or forty. Is this a martial arts sect or a local gang? Who with such strength will come to collect protection fees for a piece of trash like you? In a word, you are not allowed to carry sacks to pay taxes.

Author, have you misunderstood Hong Fu Qitian? You are obviously turning a bad situation into a good one! Hongfu Qitian is sitting at home and all opportunities will come to his door!

There is one point that is poorly written. Your handling of data is completely random. I just read Chapter 170. It has long been described that the ability to upgrade to a level has increased dozens of times. As a result, when writing specific data later, it was very awkward. It takes the protagonist a day to reach the hundreds of kilometers described in Chapter 169. Does the author have any common sense? A migrating bird can fly very far every day. The protagonist's foundation building can't fly as fast as a bird? Then how did your description of running out of afterimages during Qi training and using level 2 talismans to practice Qi go faster than the speed of sound? When the protagonist transferred Qi training, it was clearly stated that 3000 kilometers 7,8 days is very slow. Then in the middle dozens of chapters, the protagonist's speed is hundreds of times faster. In Chapter 169, is the protagonist a flying curve? The more I watch it, the less interesting it becomes. I can't help it anymore and I have to vent here.

What's better than the system? Originally, the cultivation progress was 0, but after taking the elixir, the progress was improved by more than half! The luck value consumed by getting married is only reduced by one-fifth! What's even more awesome is the distance of 3,000 kilometers. The protagonist said he could fly there in seven or eight days! OMG! 3,000 Kilometers! Fly for seven or eight days! The average speed is less than 20 kilometers per hour! It's not as fast as riding a bicycle!

This is to make the time traveler protagonist look like a real indigenous protagonist. It's boring.

Every time I see the protagonist's apprentice calling the protagonist master, I feel like the protagonist is a car mechanic. Is the author really confused about the fundamental difference between a master and a master?

There must be a sister and a child bride at the beginning... Without this setting, most writers probably wouldn't know how to develop the plot. Another "sister flow"