There Are so Many Handsome Guys in Tokyo, Who Still Wants to Fall in Love?

When I look at the handsome guys in Tokyo, I think of Toru Watanabe, a naughty young lady.

To be honest, the characters and plot of this book are actually okay, and there is nothing poisonous about it. But I think there is one thing that is too fatal for this book, that is, it is written too much like a running account, with a flat and straight sequence, the climax is not prominent enough, and the description of details is also poor, with no ups and downs. It feels like I just want to write down the story. Because I keep describing the process, the pace develops very quickly. In fact, it can be said that the author's idea of ​​the story may be very good, but the writing style is indeed lacking a bit. As a result, when I read it, I felt that the character design was well-conceived, but at the same time, I felt that the book lacked emotional tension.

Very smooth and comfortable to read. This book needs to be of high quality.

Very good😃😃

Catching Cat Brewing's "After the Eldest Lady Falls in Love with Me", the heroine's setting is a little bit, Yuexia is most like the kendo club senior in that book

The details are not described well and the writing style needs to be improved.

I want to watch the classic plot 🙂

Don't stop updating, the author really writes well, come on!

The eunuch just said, don't let everyone have expectations and just think that there will be a climax. What's the result?

Not bad, all ordered, don't stop updating 🙂

Very good, come on, don't be a eunuch

Happy National Day! ! ! 🌹🌹🌹

It feels like... It's already a bit broken

The author writes well, but the results are too poor. Half of the reason is due to writing issues.