I'm Really Not a Believer in an Evil God.

Looks good, hehe (*^▽^*)

The creativity is good, but the writing skills are not good. The villain is wise and even talks to himself to the protagonist. As for why the original one was still readable, it was probably because there was no villain. It has been pure poison since the Doctor's Secret Room. The protagonist went directly to a villain's secret room that looked wrong at first glance, without any investigation, any preparation, or any back-up. Just because the doctor colleague said he was not there, he did not investigate whether something was wrong in the hospital. When I first saw it, I thought it was the protagonist who needed to grow up, but it turned out that the ordinary protagonist hid and listened to the villain talking to himself and understood everything. The biggest poisonous point is the dialogue, which is awkward, abrupt and stupid.

Come on, it's better than some books on the bestseller list

Looks good, pure love or harem, or no heroine

Write well and I will give you monthly passes for other books

The writing is quite good, but the intelligence gap of the protagonist can be highlighted a little. Otherwise, wouldn't the identity of the designer be a bit redundant? At present, the protagonist is passive.

In light novels, you have to be a student and enter the academy to compete in competitions. Do you just hang around wherever you go?

One thing to say, Tolena's brother, if you don't take any action, you will fail a little bit... And with this mind-reading thing, I doubt whether you can control it well.

Fear me, mortals, for I am the Anointed One, the Chosen One of Chaos, the One who scourges the world. Behind me are the armies of gods and heavenly beings. According to my wishes and with my sword, your weak and small country will be destroyed. "I was born for the end. I stand on this mountain, I will sit on this throne. I will be the axis that changes the wheel of destiny, and the world will be annihilated in the light of the unborn star The end will soon come, and the Everchosen rises from his dark throne, preparing to destroy the world, and mortals will face the turbulent armies of the North or the rats emerging from below. Some heroes will stand up to fight, and they will Realizing that all hope is lost due to everyone's stubbornness and conservatism, the time to save the world has passed, and a new era of despair has begun. Perhaps I am also stupid, because I have no hope of victory. I only seek to weaken the dark gods and shake their grasp of the future. There is no other way to survive, mortal or divine. " To the mediocre, I am mysterious. Fallen. Decay. It's chilling. You cannot understand where we came from or why we are what we are... Until you realize that we have not fallen, but have ascended. " ——[Eternal Chosen] Archaon

I feel that the plot development is quite good so far, and the logic in all aspects is quite rigorous. I hope it won't break down later.

Create more cute and charming villains

Generally speaking, this is a novel about the rise of loser with a western fantasy background.

Keep it up and you will find it is over. . .

Compared to the same period, the book feels pretty good. Why are there so few people?