My Players Week 2

Occupying absolute advantages, occupying technological advantages, and possessing absolute power. He actually managed to get into a fight with Blue Star officials on an equal footing and reached an agreement that he was not very satisfied with. What the opponent wants is technology. As long as the protagonist restricts the players' access to technology, it's not just the Blue Star official. If you ask me, just give me some outdated technology to deal with the Blue Star official. You really give me the latest general technology. The protagonist has no shortage of means to counter Blue Star. The plot clearly states that Blue Star people cannot prevent game login. Blue Star has an opinion. The protagonist first pulls the souls of 100,000 high-level people, adjusts the pain to 10,000%, and enters the fantasy world to torture for a month. Let's see if the remaining people dare to have any opinions. It's not without its benefits. Who doesn't want technology that has led the world for decades? Big stick + sweet dates, the classic method. Other articles on the fourth natural disaster are quite good in this regard. "The Game of World Tree" solves everything with one word of divine power, and it's done. "This Game Is Too Real" directly pretends to be a higher civilization (actually it is) and provides some backward technology. The Blue Star people are not just rushing to get it, but they also want to be grateful. How unlike this book, a Blue Star person who came to negotiate actually dared to show off to the protagonist.

A very high-quality mirror story about the Fourth Natural Disaster, with a grand worldview and online IQs of the supporting characters. Except for the protagonist and the saint who meets the protagonist, each character has its own unique charm. Each character also has its own growth path. The only shortcoming is the protagonist and related emotional lines. The author is begging you, please, stop writing the protagonist. This protagonist is just like Ding Zhen. Any supporting character will be better than the protagonist. The protagonist's emotional line is also written in a mess. If you really can't, let's change the protagonist.

I've tried it for you. The author has no problems in every aspect. It's just that there is too little description of the world traveled through, making it less like the fourth natural disaster and more like an online game novel.

The most comfortable fourth natural disaster novel I have read so far. The setting in the first three chapters is a bit confusing, but the follow-up is much better But the reason why this book is so satisfying is that the setting is reasonable. The player's IQ is basically online, not too mentally retarded, the protagonist will not disappear too deeply, and the balance between the two is good (so far) The main line is clear, and the advancement is not purely based on fooling the players. I hope the author can maintain his style and will support all orders when it is put on the shelves.

Inexplicably, I have no desires or desires. I'm not saying you have to have a harem, but can you not be disgusting? Holy Mother mod, why did you write this two-dimensional pull-up? Okay, let's just use it as a background setting. What's the point of trying so hard to describe the saint? It's not even as good as a stock trading article, and it's worse than an ambiguous article. When you write a protagonist who has no desires or demands, just write it. It has to be like studying Buddhist scriptures with his mother Tang Monk. It has to be about how you still stand firm despite the charm of a bunch of fairies, right? Tang Monk is here to test him. Why did you write this? Disgusting us? Or to satisfy your own evil taste?

The protagonist is written as a pure little virgin with an empty soul, and then he sleeps with a saint who appears out of nowhere. It is really powerful. I have always thought that Al would be good as a female lead. The feeling is that Al did not take off her clothes to seduce the protagonist into bed. The emotional lines behind the scenes are really poisonous. Thank you to the author for teaching me a lesson. Oh, not much more (applause)

The protagonist Li Li changed her gender to Lilith in Chapter 182, I hope everyone knows 🙂

? Didn't it mean that your latest plot was poorly written, as if someone had changed, so you just deleted the post? Talking about the sore point?

The operation across the ocean has gathered so much manpower and material resources, and there are dozens of aboriginal people on a boat. Everything was going well before departure, and there were also dedicated people watching over it. Now that we have finally reached the shore, you are inexplicably coming to force the plot to kill us? Not only that, you actually created a mentally retarded player to randomly attack the boss and trick other players into killing him. Finally, you mocked the boss and caused him to throw the entire ship and dozens of aboriginal people on it into the whirlpool and turn it into a pulp? Then why do you need to describe the plot?

The world is good, the founding god is good, but the mastermind behind the scenes is bad

The protagonist tries to tell the player that this is the real world. The reason is that the player should be responsible for the killings caused by the player, so he has to tell the player the real situation But the fourth natural disaster article is about the player (player mentality) bravely venturing into a different world At the same time, killing is the responsibility of the protagonist. The protagonist has the authority to regulate players not to kill indiscriminately and regulate players to become teachers of justice. Because without the protagonist, the player will never be able to come to another world in this life, so the protagonist has to be responsible, not the player. This is also the author's task, either you arrange that the enemies are evil creatures, and the players are here to save the world. Either you say that the player is just, the enemy is an evil noble, and he takes the initiative to attack In the end, the author is unwilling to take responsibility, and the protagonist is also unwilling to take responsibility, so he finally chooses to tell the player the truth. When the player has an accident, the protagonist can easily cut him off, right?

1. In the early chapters, the game time flow rate is faster than that in the real world. The unavoidable problem of game live broadcast is how to match the two flow rates with different flow rates. Obviously the author directly ignored this point. At the beginning, some book friends suggested that they might also use the helmet to watch at the same flow rate. However, in Chapter 142, the author himself overturned this point. The chapter mentioned the plot of watching the live broadcast on a mobile phone. Apparently the time mismatch was ignored by the author. The time mismatch cannot be solved by doubling the video speed, and the so-called slow-down viewing cannot solve the problem of real-time interaction. Therefore, the live broadcast part is currently an unavoidable poisonous point.

The protagonist looks like a holy mother. If you ask me, just recruit some players and start plotting. As a god, your first step is to protect the people who don't believe in God. It's better to accumulate strength, kill monsters, recruit people, preach, and then start plotting. Although it will be painful, it is better than having a group of pig teammates who are holding you back. Now you can pretend to be unfaithful because there are only a few people, but you will still have to face it when it becomes a large scale. When the time comes, we will resist external corruption and internal resistance to the land of untrustworthiness.

It's time to make your own vest to integrate into the player group... I really don't know what the point is. Player upgrade tasks and other tasks require the protagonist to improve. The protagonist can even have the vision of every player. What is the number of words if making a vest is not pure water? If you really want to obtain faith resources, can't a level 91 red panda girl make money faster than a weakling like the protagonist?

It's boring, in short, it's boring. It's the setting of the world's number one player guild, and it's the setting of PVP players. It's too cliche. Is there such a player guild now that can monopolize resources in major games? Once a version of the game passes, the resources in your hand will be turned into waste paper. There are also various non-tradable props, how to circulate them, and even direct server closure like World of Warcraft. Every time I see this kind of guild setting, I feel awkward. The game types are different. How can there be a guild that monopolizes all games? One game is enough. Like the overwhelming number of studios and merchants in DNF, this does not take into account the server problem. Like Shanxi District 1 and Shandong District 1, the prices in each district are different. Players focus on games. Mastering one game will inevitably occupy the playing time of other games. The same is true for game guilds. And the description in the article seems to be like a big company like Samsung. In fact, the guild is a group of players' clubs. It is also somewhat organized like the one in Soltu Beach that focuses on guild battles, but that kind of game is different from the game that takes the player's perspective. Like LOL, King of Kings is a team with a company behind it. Unlike the game company in this article, the game types are also different. The setting of monopolizing various game companies really cannot withstand scrutiny. If you have the strength to do something else, it is better to monopolize game resources. It is better to engage in virtual currency. Anyway, the degree of value preservation of the two is about the same, and they will collapse at any time.

The writing doesn't sound like a creator god, it's so frustrating

The level of the protagonist and those saints is too low. The protagonist and those saints suffer there and have their hearts broken, but the players enjoy all kinds of blessings, and get the most benefits. Is this what the God of Creation and the saints should do? Learn from Chu Guang, and form your own formation. Which player would not respect the core NPCs of the camp when they meet them? As for you, the God of Creation and the Saint are just like the servants of these players. The player carries the Saint back and then the Saint gives her two 50,000 experience points. Are you still not happy? Why do you have so much face? You helped them farm monsters and upgrades along the way. You worked so hard, and now you ask them to carry it back. Even if you pay them, they still think it's not enough. Why do you have such a big face? You also know that NPCs only have one life, and you still ask your saint to work for the players. All the benefits are taken by the players, and all the damage is dealt with by the saint. The status of the core NPC is too low, not even a lowly servant.

The latest chapter: This new player deserves to die. If you weren't a buddy, you wouldn't write such a mentally retarded character. Is it acceptable for players to be stupid and harm themselves, kill NPCs and be buried with them on a boat? ?

The author of Dian is not good at writing books now, right? Really quitting Internet addiction depends entirely on the author of the Internet article

The few I have raised recently, the ghost talker has determined that there is something wrong with tj and the undead. After half a year of cutting, finally the second game of this game is gone. It's pleasing to the eye, interesting, and thoughtful, so I'll die if I keep it 😭

The point is, the author has probably been replaced. I read the comments and many of them criticized the author. I like to write emotional lines, but I don't know how to arrange normal emotions. The author seems to have read too many books and ruined the good ideas. Setting up the saint and other characters in this way makes people think that the book writer and the characters are weak. He wants to treat the readers as weak. It is better to finish it as soon as possible and write a good book. The rest of this book is like it was rushed out. The writing style is completely different from the period before and after it was released. It is full of violence and the emotional lines are pulpy. If I want to read the emperor's uncle, I might as well read the historical records. It seems like I am reading the urban cool novels from a few years ago. If the author does not have a basic concept of character creation, I can tell you: a positive character must meet the moral requirements of the reader. Look at how other authors arrange it. Even if they have to write, they have to deal with it in a special way. They just mention it in one stroke. But here they deliberately write for the sake of hydrology and attracting special readers. Hasn't the author reflected on the loss of so many readers? It's best to settle the matter completely.

I was dazzled, thinking that the badge was floating one star. The subsequent plot turned out to be very strange. First, the protagonist creates the world, knowing that the generation of the world is a game, and then invites the countries of Blue Star to come in and play. Afterwards, it was said that Blue Star was the place where the protagonist lived before. But no one knew about this Genesis simulator twenty years later, and it created a new game. And Blue Star Expedition is a game that appeared ten years after the death of the protagonist. During this period, no one knew that it was a genesis simulator. No one knows about Genesis Simulator in the past ten years, and the protagonist has added hundreds of mods on the market. Follow-up, it would be okay to separate the two worlds. I didn't expect that the two worlds were the same. The protagonist was unboxed and his relatives were taken advantage of. Is this the creation flow? This is the first time I saw the unboxed God of Creation.

The content of the game is still very good, which is why I am reluctant to give up the book, but the real-life plot is a complete torture for me to read. I have figured it out. I read novels for enjoyment, not to be tortured. I will not subscribe to real-life plots in the future. However, now I still want to summarize the reasons why I feel uncomfortable watching the real-life plot, and I hope the author can make corrections. 1. The characters in the book lack scientific literacy, or the author lacks scientific literacy: In the plot about reality, there is a section where a female player is visited by the government in reality, and she is trembling with fear and worried about being sliced ​​into pieces. I know that many people nowadays lack medical common sense, so they think that slicing may happen on precious research samples. But people now don't have this kind of medical common sense, and people in the future won't have this kind of medical common sense either? Is this the scientific literacy of the people in the future in the setting? 2. Logical problems. There are no top experts officially, which is acceptable. But the official doesn't even have a top-notch expert! This is very unreasonable. Moreover, among the more than 30 named players who have discovered abnormalities, only one chose to call the police. This probability is relatively low. I think it is a reasonable probability that 1/10 players choose to report the situation proactively. If the government in the book usually does a good job, this probability should be higher. 3. Government waste. To be honest, the government in this book is considered relatively good among many online novels. At least it has not made any big mistakes and has never had a confrontation with the protagonist, but it is still a waste. If you don't consider the slightest bit of extraordinary power when making a plan, there probably won't be any room left in the plan. Author, when it comes to such major events as the other world, the country and the village government are not comparable! Don't take the level of village and city governments you know as the level of the country when it encounters such a major event! The real-life plot made it so uncomfortable for me to watch. There must be some other factors, but I can't tell. The author may be intentionally weakening the government, but I really don't see why this is necessary - the protagonist is not living in reality, so a stronger government would be beneficial to the protagonist! The author was afraid that other books would weaken the government, so he habitually weakened the government when writing his own books. Or is the author simply anti-establishment?

A simple summary is that the author encountered a bottleneck, couldn't write anymore and cared too much about the readers' opinions, constantly changing the plot within himself. In the end, the inspiration ran out and the story was unfinished. Actually, it's not necessary. There are also platinum writers whose skills have declined and become eunuchs. Isn't it normal to encounter these problems on the way of writing? Especially if the author is still a newbie, the most important thing is to finish writing a novel, don't always think of it being perfect. Question? At worst, I'll change it slowly. It's enough to earn living expenses if I have additional subscriptions. Authors don't have to belittle themselves and have more confidence in themselves and their works.

This book is okay in the beginning, but in the middle it starts to get confusing, but the author is decisive...

Beautiful, love watching. Worth a look.

Is there any PY who knows more about why?

I want to be more refined

Is there any behind-the-scenes story about recruiting gamers who will die in reality?

I originally wanted to support it to the end. As a result, the updates are still unstable and updated every three days. It seems I have to give it up.