The Fantasy Journey of Half-Dragon

Author, you are writing a novel, not a game record. Some scenes, plots, and battles are simply skipped. Instead, you write a lot of data and introductions, including a chapter on the attributes of a kobold. You put the cart before the horse. There are also serious typos and omissions. I wonder if the author will check it after writing. The impression is very poor.

Is there really someone who used data to write DND novels? The village-killing rats sealed in the basement are ready to move. In the setting, Dragon King Ba, who overturns the three-rail sailboat with one blow, bursts into tears while holding his breath, which has a range of up to 90 feet.

Since many rules are not suitable for writing novels, I have added many house rules that I feel are suitable. If you think there is a problem, please leave a comment below this post! I will consider changing it. 1. Huge damage. Currently, as long as a living body is attacked by an attack exceeding 2/3 of its health, then it needs to pass a Fortitude test. If it fails, it will die 2. Movement speed. The basic movement speed is the movement speed to maintain caution and concentration in battle. Normal action is 2 times the basic movement speed, emergency action is 3 times, running is 4 times, and some people with special talents can reach 6 times. Taking into account the particularity of professionals, before reaching legend, a human warrior can be upgraded to 4 to 10 times. This does not include the increase in certain professional characteristics and abilities. The multiples that different creatures can increase are also different. Even in the same species, there are those with high talents and low talents. At the same time, this speed does not represent their instant explosive power!

Thumbs up, Western fantasy is now a niche novel

The game novel has completely ruined the Western fantasy novel and I can't stand it anymore.

The writing is a bit self-indulgent and incoherent when read. I suggest you check it after you finish writing.

I have tasted it for you, it is a huge poison. Those who don't know so far think that the author is writing about kobolds, or that Pig's Foot is a kobold. The whole text is written around a tribe of kobolds (Pig's Foot is the only family that can be subdued, just like there are only kobolds on this planet or only kobolds can subdue them) Regarding the plot, the whole text is written around kobolds. Do you think anything can be written about it? A good western fantasy world was written as a planet of kobolds. Personally, I feel terrible. (In addition to kobolds, there have also been hobgoblins and tauren. Trolls, etc., But the author may have lost his head because of falling in love with the kobolds, and ignored these groups that are more powerful than the kobolds. They just killed them without any thought of taking them as relatives. I don't know whether the author forgot or completely ignored them because of his true love with the kobolds. The most vicious thing is that he actually developed a love relationship with a kobold 😰. He is the most bizarre author I have ever seen. If you can't accept it, don't read it. It disgusts me anyway 😓

The imagination is OK, but the writing is so poor. There is a pile of data, which makes people feel that they are not reading online articles but complicated data reports.

Let me talk about the premise: I am a new author, and when I first wrote the book, I had no definite direction at all! Originally, I planned to simply write about the transition of the kobolds in the early stage, but I won't write about it later! The writing is becoming more and more like a farming style, but the main purpose of writing this novel is to introduce more of the fantasy world. However, if it is written from the perspective of a ruler, it is completely impossible to appreciate the fantasy world like ordinary adventures. I am very confused now! So do you think it's adventure or farming?

A protagonist who can have a relationship with a kobold

It can be seen that the author does know a lot about dnd, let's not talk about this. My question is, exclamation mark! Don't want money? ︕As soon as I saw three exclamation points stuffed into a paragraph, I felt like my brain was being stabbed︕I really want to know what the author's mentality was when he put the exclamation marks︕

The new version of the green dragon image is simply a flying serpent with no horns. Then there is the black dragon, whose face looks more like a skeleton. The most conservative Red Dragon has not changed much. Bronze dragon, like a big bird. Golden Dragon, returns to version 2 image. Straightened the dragon body and turned it into a sword.

The panel is too frequent, I will come out and show it once

As a giant dragon, will there be a plot to rob the treasure and the elf princess later 🙂🙂

Can the author speak more colloquially? It would be a headache to read a long paragraph of rules, and introduce the skills more concisely. There are a lot of introductions and it's a bit difficult to read.

Brother, I can still read the first part of the book, but in the last ten chapters I feel that I am greatly separated from the previous chapters.

You may not have any idea about the 30-foot cone shape, so I'll share it here.

Leaving a lot of settings in front of you is very annoying. Readers who can understand can understand it without you writing, and readers who can't understand it will immediately feel happy when they see your settings that fill the screen. Storytelling is the key point of online articles

Half-dragon... Can we change the term and call it "Dragonborn"?

Let me tell you something here. Everyone dislikes Aisen's situation. I also admit that my head was a little twitchy to write this kind of plot. But the plot can no longer be changed. All I can say is to be careful not to write this kind of plot in the future! But I still want to popularize a few misunderstandings. First of all, the reason why the race of kobolds is called kobolds is not because they have dog heads, but because there is a sound in dragon language that is similar to the barking of dogs. The kobolds themselves are closer to a special kind of small draconians. Aisen's race is dragon-forged kobold, and her race type is dragon. Like the protagonist, her race is not a real dragon, but their creature types are all dragons. Rather than humanoid creatures, not dragon blood creatures, and not dragon blood subspecies. In fact, the bloodlines of the protagonist and Aisen are closer. The gap between humans and the protagonist is even greater than the gap between kobolds and Aisen. If the protagonist was not a human in his previous life, their innate aesthetics would actually be closer to each other.

Why do you write two paragraphs with just one exclamation point? This is something a human can write?