Immortals Invade? No, I Invade the Immortal World!

Group travel is something that can subvert the entire world and social structure. An "official" organization can have villains, but it cannot be stupid and incompetent. Personally, I think this aspect is overdone. Regarding the corpse of the Aries God General, it was seen that it was penetrated by a punch, and it was burned without careful investigation. No organization in the village can reach this level. And it doesn't matter who killed him, just to show off a humanoid weapon to the boss and not investigate? Have you ever thought carefully about the concept of this behavior? It's roughly equivalent to "There is a nuclear weapon hidden in the city, but I think he is a good person, so I won't investigate." This woman has so much power without any restraint from the organization, she is still stupid. Really, brother, this paragraph of your writing is unbearable to watch.

I think this character is well written and reminds me of the two female leaders I have encountered. I don't understand that many people criticize the author for this character. Shouldn't it be because the author is awesome when he writes a villain that draws hatred? How can you say that the shaping is not done well? If you want to treat a villain as a heroine, then of course it's not good, but it's obvious that this is a pure villain.

For now, the portrayal of the female character Zheng Wanqiu is a failure.

Not bad, very good... I would like to say that you have the qualifications to become a god

A finance major solves a criminal case. That's nonsense. You are very proficient in how to commit economic crimes, but complex criminal cases involve all parties and countries, and you are a time traveler who knows nothing about it. You are completely missing all five senses and limbs. It is lucky that your identity is not discovered. Solving the case is whimsical, and the author must have some logic to write a cool and divine article. It is too ridiculous for a beggar to turn into an emperor in an instant.

Ever since you wrote about the first powerful official, I thought your writing was very good and your writing style was also humorous. I was waiting for the new book with great hope, but I didn't expect it. After I missed the last book, I also lost interest in your new book. I guess I still wanted to read it, but I didn't expect it to be right. At the rate you are going, all the popularity accumulated by powerful officials will be defeated. Think about it carefully before writing it. No reader wants to read a novel without an ending.

The original world is written in a bad way, like shit, and is very different from Xia Gaoyang's book. I don't understand what Zheng Wanqiu's role is. I originally thought you wanted to write about her realizing her mistakes and returning to the wrong path. After all, she didn't do anything. She is even very consistent with a normal person, but she has no vision of people. But now the comments from netizens disgust me, making readers feel disgusted with her. It's a bit stupid to shape the character through netizens' comments. I hope it can be changed. Finally, I would like to say that the first three pictures are really not good-looking, and I would be very dissatisfied. It's disgusting to forcefully pretend to be cool when you have nothing. The following ones are pretty good, but the first three pictures are very dissatisfying. If I hadn't seen Xia Gaoyang, I would have left immediately.

Xianxia? All I saw was a mortal rolling in the mud

The new book is very interesting, please keep writing it. There are really no regular readers anymore, so I have to change my account and start again. . .

Yo! What a coincidence, isn't this! I saw it when you opened a new book