My Engagement Partners Are All Troubled Girls

The following contains spoilers, read with caution. 🤓☝First of all, it is worth saying that the author can really present the complete introduction content in less than 100 chapters, which is very rare. Many light novels only use the introduction and hang on the first dozens of chapters to find out this person. At the same time, the world view is not a daily light novel, but also mixed with monsters and supernatural beings as a spice. The protagonist himself has a golden finger to advance the plot. So far, it feels good. Of course, the twisted plot conflict between the heroine and the hero is also worthy of bonus points. Weiyang disguises herself as a man and meets the gay friend of the male protagonist, and then experiences the twists and turns of living with the male protagonist in a female body. There is also the story of Yongzishe, who is afraid of the outside world, and then takes the initiative to overcome her fear and interact with the male protagonist with the help of the male protagonist. It is really delicious🤤🤤🤤. As for Chihaya, she suffered the disadvantage of appearing too early, with too few plot conflicts and insufficient memory points. She looks forward to subsequent growth. However, the biggest problem and some advantages of reading the book at present are that the plot is too flat, that is to say, there is nothing explosive, but it is also an advantage. It does not seem tiring and is quite relaxing. All in all, a good light novel and worth reading👍🏻

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The first is the plot arrangement. The plot so far is very comfortable to watch. The plot is not bloody and the male protagonist is not stupid. These two points are really good. But I always feel very bland while reading. Why? After re-reading the work, I discovered, oh, it turns out that the heroine is not "attractive" enough My current feeling about the characters in the work is that there is not enough space to describe specific characters, and there are not enough details, resulting in a thin image of the character, which feels a bit like establishing a character for the sake of establishing a character. Take the characters in the work as an example, such as Eiko. My overall impression of her is social fear + free money. In fact, I quite like the character design of social horror, but why do I have no feelings for Eiko? I once wondered if my xp had changed? Later, I thought about it, the plot about Eiko progressed too fast, and it was the kind of story that was told in a straightforward way, soaring to the sky (forgive me for the adjective of the third grade of elementary school ) I thought about why I like the character of social fear, I may just like the sense of accomplishment that slowly tames social fear step by step, and allows the socially fearful girl to accept herself, rely on herself, and trust herself I thought about the emotional warming process of the socially fearful girl in my heart for a long time (I am an elementary school graduate, and my thoughts are just from the perspective of a reader. It is really naive, please be gentle ) When they meet for the first time, they will bury their faces in the quilt out of fear. They will talk to the male protagonist in a low voice and communicate about their works. When they get excited, they will suddenly be shy and shrink into the quilt. , Secretly opened the door to peek at the male protagonist, and then retreated after discovering it. He wanted to have a good relationship with the male protagonist, but was unable to take a step because of his own social fear; after many days of communicating through the door, he gradually got used to the male protagonist, and from time to time he would use all his courage to invite the male protagonist. Play the game straight away (your body is shaking slightly, your eyes are closed, as if you are waiting for judgment), if you accept it, you will be as happy as if there is a tail behind you; you have a bad taste in playing games, you often choose rubbish games, and then when you play with the male protagonist, you will be complained by the male protagonist. Every time you are complained about She will blush and whisper about how unique her taste is... In short, she will start to show some of her little personality, like being a little tsundere... After being able to communicate face to face with the male protagonist normally for many days, she will propose to go out for a walk. Maybe this will make the article richer in details? Can the emotional heating be more natural? I don't know. I'm just a reader and can't give any opinions on writing. But I still hope that the author can add more details to the emotional heating and use more space to describe the heroines in detail.

I personally feel that I may not be able to grasp the newly written character of Ghost Blade. Today is different from the past. In previous dramas, similar killer female characters attacked the protagonist without legitimate reasons, and they could use funny comics and complaints to reduce the discomfort of the plot. However, in today's version, the immunity of beautiful female characters has gradually disappeared, and some over-the-top and tsundere plots in ancient times are red flags now. What's more, this is a novel, and the pictures can only be imagined. If this kind of plot comes out, it will be very embarrassing to deal with this character in the future. I feel that since you have spent some pen and ink on this character, there is a high probability that it will continue to appear in the future. How the protagonist treats this character in the future will greatly affect the protagonist's own personality and perception. After all, according to the author's portrayal, this character can kill even if he wants to. Even with patches, for example, he has never killed anyone. This is the first time that the protagonist "happens" to have countermeasures and has a similar contrasting cute setting with bad luck. However, the starting point of this character is somewhat too strong. I hope the author can grasp it.

It's really good so far. It doesn't have as many bloody plots as other Japanese light novels. Everything is good so far. I've invested in it. However, I suggest you change the title of your book. Your title is not attractive at all. At least it should attract the Japanese light group.

Well, after reading the latest chapter, I remembered that I should ask whether the tone of this book will be a true harem that includes all the harems, or a party-fighting type where only one can be chosen?

Brother, give me one more chapter. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. Brother, I beg you. Please give me one more chapter. I'm dying. Please, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give me one more chapter. Just give me one more chapter. Just one chapter, I will never touch it again, please, brother, it's really just one chapter, I swear I will never touch this thing again, I really can't bear it anymore, brother, I kneel down and beg you 😭😭😭😭😭

Can the author give an estimate of whether he plans to have a harem or stock trading?

Kayoko, what color is your inner treasury? Although it may sound abrupt or even disrespectful, please allow me to explain. Human beings are always full of curiosity about beautiful things. After being captured by you physically and mentally, they are still willing to understand you more deeply. It is hard not to praise this character. So, I have to ask this question again: What color is your inner library? Unfortunately, due to the limitation of cognitive level, we can only stay in imagination. Is it purple? It is as fragrant as the lavender flowers blooming in Provence. Is it red? As pure and fragrant as the long river irrigated by Romanee red wine. Is it white? Just like the iris blooming holyly on the French royal flag. ... Oh, the color of your inner treasury. What can be more melancholy than you holding me back? You are like the aurora of Lapland, rippling like a dream. You are like the edge of Halley's Comet, shining brightly. You are like the appearance of the hazy morning light, dazzling and bright.

The first thing I thought of was the Monkey King🤓

Why did you become the Riddler and didn't tell Shinohara that you had multiple engagements? Was it necessary for the harem plot?

Having read all the chapters so far, let me share my personal views. Spoiler-proof column. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… The author's imagination is worthy of recognition. I didn't expect that the brother at the beginning was Morimoto Mio in disguise. Of course, this may also be the reason why I read less light novels. There are hints in the text, but I didn't understand it. From this point of view, I still didn't read carefully enough. Sakurai Chihaya awakened her M attribute, which was also unexpected. There are also things worth complaining about, and many places feel like the author got too excited and wrote them. I hope the author can polish the characters. After all, light novels cannot attract readers without portraying excellent characters. The protagonist Yuuto seems to have no sexual desire. This is not right. It seems that the character is created for the sake of character design. However, there has been a change in the recent chapter, which is good. I hope the author can develop better characters in the future. From the perspective of novel type and plot, there will definitely be Shura Field and the like in the future. I just hope the author can grasp it well and not make it too bloody. Also, can I ask about the additional updates? Will it be updated after it is put on the shelves? I originally came to Qidian to catch up with Gu Zhenren's new book, but I accidentally came across the author's book and clicked in. I have read too many traditional fairy tales and fantasy, so it would be nice to change my taste. I originally planned to give it to Master Gu, but then I thought about it. There are so many people who reward great authors, so it's better to use it to support small authors. Come on, author, I will update to chapter 50 first and see how it goes. I hope the author thrives!

It's pretty good, but the new author doesn't have much traffic.

It was well written before! After putting it on the bookshelf for a while, it actually got cut.

The author's writing is very good, and the characters are vividly portrayed. He is very strong in shaping the characters, which is very powerful for a novice writer. The author's plot as a harem novel is not the kind that must be immediately included in the harem. What he writes is also reality, which is slowly integrated and understood. Although it is not a pure daily life, it has supernatural parts, but this part makes the article richer. In fact, I personally hope that there will not be too many supernatural things, but let's look at the author's plan. After all, it will be especially supernatural in the future. There's nothing wrong with it at the moment. Come on author, I believe in you. From the reader's point of view, I particularly hope that you can update ten or eight times a day, but as for the author, four thousand words per day is enough (other authors have told me before, and I don't know the reason. If the author sees it and knows the reason, let me know). I will continue to subscribe and look forward to the author's growth. It's just that as a student party, I can't follow it every day and watch the author's growth.

Good guy, it's not really about stock trading, is it?

Is there a group, the original version or a small extra 😍

I don't dare touch the new book of an author who hasn't finished this work😅

I have cast 4 recommendation votes and two monthly votes. I would like to ask if there is a readership?

I feel that the writing is pretty good and the logic is clear. Good luck to the author😙

As for the author, I think Chihaya Sakurai's role is a bit lacking {"NickName":"","UserId":448380146}

I watched some of Chihaya's scenes, but they were too little.

Although you told me to cut it off first, I still gave you the monthly ticket. There are two tickets in total. Although it is a bit small, it shows my appreciation.

I haven't read the book yet, so I'm introducing the poison every day. I saw that the author posted Kayoko, then I have to read the book written by ba players. In short, put a 100 here first, save it and then deduct it after reading

I really like this book, why doesn't it have a readership?