One Piece: Mechanical Goddess

Three Female Admirals of the Navy

Battle of the Four Emperors

Robin's Redemption

The author started screening readers on the first page. It's okay that he didn't succeed in killing Blackbeard. If he really killed him, according to the rules on Whitebeard's ship, he would definitely have to fight the protagonist to death and be chased to death by the Whitebeard Pirates.

Can you block my punch?

The taste of fast food is too strong. It is set for the sake of setting. It is difficult to swallow.

Who can I be with? It's with Whitebeard...😅

The protagonist is a bit funny, and the plot at the beginning is also quite outrageous.

I was originally quite interested in this subject matter, but I didn't want to read it immediately after seeing the beginning.

Generally. Lack of imagination. I looked at it, but it seemed like I didn't look at it.

It can only be said to be the best dichlorvos in the bottle🤡

Give me face

I lost interest after seeing the ability to capture the fruit. It's so simple. Why is the Dark Fruit called the most evil fruit? The world of One Piece has been around for at least 800 years. Didn't anyone think of seawater seastones and the like? It's really that simple. The powerful fruits have long been collected by the world government.

Directly transform into countless nano-bugs to devour metal elements and minerals all over the world, re-create new nano-bugs, cycle endlessly, and become a natural disaster of nano-gray fog, as invincible as the little gray in the stars! Moreover, nanoworms can be combined into any metal object. As long as it is metal, anything can be combined. Mechanical technology can assemble it instantly. Nanoworms can do it all without the need for parts assembly in a processing factory! It can also be continuously iterated and upgraded, which can be said to be a very powerful natural disaster!

Your character card has already spoiled your next partners, Luo, Fanoka, and Lafitte! It stands to reason that if there is Rona, there must be Bebo! Peijin and Xia Qi, the two sea warriors, should be there too!

The original scientist who defected from the world government is a bit poisonous. There are only a few named pirates among the pirates. If the scientists are all original, there is no need to abide by the basic pirate law 😅

Mibu, you should just write about Conan honestly, you are not suitable to write about pirates...

Baki: The Yonko is nothing.

This book can really develop fruits as long as I want. Weapon fruits can be used for mechanical development, robots, nano liquids, virtual souls, and treatments. Oh my God, does this have anything to do with weapon fruits? Is it comparable to those great geniuses who use the timeline of line fruit development?

Fan Oka's ability should have been taken by Blackbeard after joining the black group, and it was not brought with him. You don't know much about the protagonist's setting and the plot, but it doesn't mean you don't understand it yourself. And you like to reverse the idiom, and platinum lead is deliberately written as lead platinum. If the record pointer is written as a compass, it is obvious that there are people who do not understand it. It is more like a supplement, but for those who have not read it carefully, it may even be written without reading a little explanation of the comic. Isn't the crotch-pulling number in the last book already sold?

Why are idioms upside down? I am happy to see the success of my writing. I am not just talking about one or two, but all the idioms in the book are upside down like this. Why must I write them upside down deliberately like this? It looks very uncomfortable

Another novel where more than half of the chapter is explanation. This kind of novel makes my brain hurt when I read it, just like a water hyacinth. The result of the squeaking is all water. After reading it, I found that there is nothing.

I think the content is fine. Time-travel stories don't necessarily have to keep all the powerful fruits in the original work for themselves and then beat up the villains or the protagonist group to start showing off. The content should be lighter and show the pirate world from the side.

What you eat is a weapon fruit instead of an illusory mechanical fruit. Since it is written like this, why not create your own mechanical fruit at the beginning? Even if you write the magnetic fruit so early in the timeline, it will be fine.

Weapon Fruit, Iron Man cuts with his sword😄😄

Always subscribed. As far as the story is concerned, this book is well written. I seldom subscribe to the complete One Piece fanfic. I never finish a chapter of this book. But I saw that the results seemed not to be ideal, and I was a little worried about TJ. However, if you think about it carefully, it shouldn't be the case. The author seems to intend to speed up the progress, but it is not obvious. The author has done this to a very high level.

The last few pictures are so real 😅😅😅 that I don't want to subscribe anymore.

Ella's eating of Tunton fruit matches her status as a researcher!

If the author has no other ideas for the subsequent plot of his novel, it should be almost finished. It's not easy, the results are indeed not good (I even ranked 22nd on the fans list of the work with all my high Vs), but it is finally finished, without TJ, it is not easy. In this regard, the author, you have surpassed at least 90% of the writers who started.