Detective World Detective

Let's make a complaint. Many people saw that Kogoro Mouri's surname was Mouri and Kyogoku's real surname was Kyogoku, and they thought they were from very powerful aristocratic families. In fact, Kogoro Mouri was neither admitted to Tokyo University (Toto University in the anime) nor a police officer in the professional group. He is basically at the same level as Officer Megure (maybe even lower) in the police world, and will not be higher than the police officer at most (the non-professional police officer is a prerequisite for retirement, with a higher pension, or he has already gone to the police department to make up for it when he died in the line of duty. Japanese bureaucrats are specially promoted to two levels to show recognition for those who died in the line of duty), and even if he is really from a Chinese family, these two points can confirm that his family has completely declined and cannot be revived; Kyogoku Makoto is in a similar situation, and his family is directly shown in the anime. When Sonoko, Ran and Conan encountered the case of a serial killer when they went to Izu Beach, Kyogoku Makoto directly said that he was on vacation and was working in an ordinary restaurant owned by his family, let alone that he was of so-called Chinese descent.

The author should not forget that Akai Shuichi's mother, Akai Marie, and Miyano Akemi's mother, Miyano Elena, are sisters, and they are related by blood. I hope the author can inform them when they meet to avoid unnecessary misunderstandings.

This is a Qidian-style book. The author also researched a lot of information for this book. It can be seen that the author is really thoughtful in explaining the historical background of that era. The whole book is quite logical. The protagonist is not brainless, but an ordinary person with brains. It is relatively less readable, but the writing style and ideas are definitely very good. The heroine is not clear yet. I will blindly guess that there is no heroine, or it is my own original heroine, or it is some unpopular heroine. In the third part, I feel that Zhao Shui Nanatsuki is slightly more likely. (Don't pay attention to the nonsense of fake prophets) In short, this is a good Conan fanfic with some brains, and the author's update speed is also guaranteed. You will definitely not lose money if you follow the book.

I don't know why it feels so bland, and it's not related to the plot, but it must be the way it's written, right? It has a sense of déjà vu like a running account style diary, maybe it is also a matter of rhythm... Some places jump too fast, and there is no feeling of experiencing the case, more like "8:55, I had breakfast, I am so handsome after breakfast!" Also, I feel that most of the author's writing power is used to create the protagonist, which makes me feel a little impatient. Being too impatient does not make the protagonist's image three-dimensional, and makes other characters too thin... Some places are not clean enough in one stroke, and some places can be detailed and jump too fast. It feels like I just write wherever I fantasize, and describe more wherever I fantasize about happiness. How can I put it... I just didn't have enough passion when watching it_(:з∠)_ It may also be that I read too fast, read silently in my heart without emotion, or I didn't think about it enough... (๑ŏ _ ŏ๑)

I read the latest two chapters this morning and had some thoughts. For now, if I were a black organization, the protagonist, a criminal with a super sense of smell and almost exposed the organization, I would definitely assassinate him. After all, the organization's method is to rather kill by mistake than let go. Fortunately, it was Pisco who was killed in this assassination. If Chianti and Cole came, the protagonists would probably be GG. Without the ability to predict danger, it is very unsafe to rely solely on the plot. No one knows how many back-ups the organization has. So far, Rummy has not been exposed, and all three candidates are in the criminal justice system. It's better to add a life-saving skill like Spider Danger Sense to the protagonist as soon as possible. After all, the protagonist's combat ability is not that of Kyogoku.

Suddenly, I discovered that there were super bugs in two cases in Aoyama. One was the case where a diplomat was killed. Strictly speaking, the Metropolitan Police Department's investigation section had no authority to investigate and had to be handled by the Metropolitan Police. Because cases involving the diplomatic system are political cases that can only be handled by the political police, the Japanese police. The second one was in "The Assassin in the Pupil" because the police officer was killed and was suspected to be an insider. At this time, the Metropolitan Police Department must also hand over this case to the public security agents. According to regulations, only the public security has the power to investigate the police. The police must unconditionally obey the public security investigation. As a result, these two cases were all handled by the Metropolitan Police Department themselves, which is a violation of regulations.

I just saw that the protagonist wants to solve a case in a different place, let me talk about an unspoken rule of the Japanese police, that is, you must not handle cases across districts without permission. If you want to handle a case across districts, you must be invited by the other party. For example, if the protagonist wants to go to Osaka to handle a case, he must be invited by the Osaka Police Headquarters. The Metropolitan Police Department agrees and then informs the protagonist to go. Otherwise, it will break the unspoken rules of the Japanese police. Regardless of whether the case is solved or not (the reputation of the protagonist will be damaged if the case is not solved, and the Osaka police will lose face if the case is solved), he will be transferred to the "window department" (sitting on the bench) until his seniority reaches the police rank, and then he can drink tea and read the newspaper in peace until he retires.

When you post pictures, you all choose some handsome ones 😁

Don't know why? I feel very annoyed when I see Haiyuan Ai. Are there any friends who are the same as me?

This book is still good to read. The reason why I kept reading is that the author has no condescension or malice toward the original characters, especially Edogawa Conan, and it feels more real to me. It's not like the books next door, which have been praised to the heavens by book fans, but those protagonists always look down on the original protagonists, as if we who have read the original work by Aoyama Gosho have the right to despise every character in it. Also, the heroine is finally not Haihara Ai, which feels very fresh.

The free reading volume is average, especially the behavior of begging for food with a golden rice bowl. It is obvious that Dr. Agasa has also recruited Okamoto Rintaro and Makise Kurisu from Stone Gate, and then some small props given by the simple system are given to them to reverse-engineer and reproduce, and then they like to use system points. Redeem and redeem some consumables. Let me talk about how high-tech the micro-oxygen tank is, how high-tech the rubber bullets are, and what technical barriers there are to flash bombs and smoke grenades. What makes the author so distrustful of Ke Xuezhong's black technology level, and insists on consuming system points. Is it necessary to suppress the power in this way? Even if you use some daily skills to suppress your strength, why do you have to suppress it in such a rz-looking way? Don't say it's unsafe to trace the things you created to Dr. Agasa and the protagonist's company. First, you exchanged your rubber bullet manufacturing technology and asked your subordinate Rintaro Okabe and his assistant to make it. Second, how can consumables like smoke grenades and flash bombs be traced? Kidd has been caught long ago if it is so easy to trace. Moreover, the technical content of these things is not the world's top. Only a few people can make them, and then they will be traced.

The episode of the murder case of the bandaged man in the Villa

Why is the protagonist of your recent chapter getting weaker and weaker, his IQ is getting worse day by day, and his gift of super sense of smell is becoming less and less useful. He seems to be driving high and walking low. In the case of the bar, Takagi found the murder weapon nearby. Did the protagonist deliberately leave the clues to others? Is the protagonist's talent offline? And in the dessert case, the protagonist's talent is also offline. Is it useless without the blood stain talent? Since joining the science search and research, my dear, four or five people in one case took the polygraph test twice. Are you planning to let the protagonist leave the reasoning industry and transfer to a technical position? The bomb case in Yueshui Qiliang was even more ridiculous. After the person was caught, there was actually a plot of torture to extract a confession. Isn't the main character a calm one? High IQ? Where are the props? After I found it 💰, I was inadvertently burned by someone else because the protagonist didn't subdue the opponent immediately. I guess I learned this from Conan. I wanted to be a saint in front of others, but I was slapped in the face by others. Where is my talent? Just smell nothing? Should the protagonist compensate the protagonist for this money? The protagonist's skills are stronger but his performance seems to be getting weaker and weaker. Otherwise, since he is already the leader, he should not appear in any scene. Anyway, it is technology to solve crimes. It doesn't matter if he is there or not. If the author really doesn't want to write it, just stop it. Don't disgust readers like this.

This book is very exciting in the main plot of the collision between red and black, especially in the operation before and after rescuing Miyano Akemi. If more work is done on daily life, the protagonist's emotions, golden finger settings and related writing, it will definitely be a masterpiece that is difficult to surpass in the history of Conan fandom.

Ayako

The writing is dry and the pacing is poor. It is filled with a lot of the author's comments, complaints, popular science, self-speech, and reflections. Seriously disrupting the normal plot rhythm. I can't tell whether I'm reading the protagonist's story or the author's self-expression.

The heroine

Many people who write Conan fan fiction like to mess up the timeline, but confusing time will only make you feel that the world is not real, and then you will naturally not treat people as human beings.

Ten of them have been voted in. It feels so good to vote for multiple votes at once. Come on, the author. I have always wanted to see a novel about a civil servant in the world of famous detectives. Don't enter the palace and write it well.

There are Easter eggs at the back.

I can't follow it anymore. The plot has fallen into an infinite pattern and repeated itself. Will it really just keep repeating without ending Qingshan?

I voted for 10 monthly votes at once, hoping to add more 😍

Not bad, just skip the Ayako part, it has the greasy feeling of eating ten years expired tonkatsu (x

It's qualified as a fanfic, but the original plot makes people wonder if the author is from Earth? To put it bluntly, it's a bit like a middle school student suffering from hysteria. My suggestion is not to activate automatic subscription, and just jump to the original plot when you see it.

This book makes up for all Conan's early regrets, but there is one more disappointing thing: if the protagonist could travel back ten years in advance and save all four of the five members of the police academy, it would be perfect.

To be honest, Goldfinger didn't come out until chapter 18. If the author hadn't written it as a fan, I might not have read chapter 18. . .

Finished spreading flowers! Although I didn't read it in the middle, it's still a very good Conan fanfic based on the parts I've read! The author's progress is also visible to the naked eye, and the next book must be better!

Manager Matsumoto is the police officer. After the police officer, there is the police chief, and then the police chief. When Minister Odagiri appeared as the head of the criminal department, he was the police chief.

After even looking at the snake spirit disease, the corpse collector, the wizard, the performance department, the coroner, and the scientific researcher, I was completely convinced, and I came to write a big book! 🤭

As a time traveler, the protagonist knows the story and world view of Conan, but remains unknown, takes no action, and does not change. After the case occurs and the characters are dead, don't you find it disgusting to be able to reveal the story and solve the case from a high position like you are flying over the world? As you said, you obviously have the ability, but you have not fulfilled the responsibility that meets this ability.