Helping Countless Versions of Myself

As a reader, you only need to read novels, but young literary authors need to consider many things.

，，，""：，？ ? He needs to add sugar, milk, stinky tofu and soy milk to his egg fried rice, and finally add two spoons of rice wine for seasoning. After it is out of the pot, put a layer of butter, a layer of lard, and a layer of brown sugar in the bowl The taste does seem rich, and it also reflects the chef's high-end innovation, but is this egg fried rice? ? ? How many people can eat it? ? ?

I feel like the content of Naruto has just started to get popular, so I switched to a new picture in Xiaoao. It feels uncomfortable to watch, and there is a feeling of being stuck. To be honest, if the writing style was not bad in all aspects, I would just give up. There are also those inexplicable memories in Naruto. You are writing a book, not a storyboard. If you want to write memories, you should write them in a more smooth, harmonious and unobtrusive style, instead of just recalling them with a dividing line. The key is that you have many memories.

This is the first time I saw someone saying that the Yondaime Raikage was a reckless man, 🙄🙄🙄. Technological ninjutsu started with him. How could it be possible without vision and courage?

In the author's second setting, Pepper Kagura's inner eye has the ability to observe random fragments of the future, in order to make up for the Naruto Nine-Tails Rebellion and die calmly. The secondary goal seems to be to reasonably dismantle the CP of the 4th generation couple But this ability is too buggy. The scene observed by Xiaojiao Zhenggu, who is still in elementary school, felt that there was no problem at first. But it was only in the later chapters that he discovered that the picture he observed had serious problems. 1. At that time, the protagonist of the Harry Potter world was watching videos and communicating with another self in the Goldfinger space. This ability could directly predict and hear the dialogue where some keywords were mosaic. 2. The premise of this picture is that ① the protagonist unlocks the golden finger, ② awakens the wooden escape and establishes a bond with Uzumaki Kushina three years later, and a series of small details related to the golden finger. ③The most buggy part is that the protagonist of the Harry Potter world modified Voldemort's black magic notebook and gave it to the Naruto protagonist who has poor learning ability. The Naruto protagonist devoured virtual knowledge through the wood escape bloodline and developed corresponding skills. Based on the chakra on the tray, he overheard the conversation between the third Hokage and Namikaze Minato in the Hokage Tower. The scene where the protagonist of the Naruto world stands in front of his parents' tombstones and communicates with Harry Potter's self will appear. To sum up, this ability has shown three obvious bugs. ①The established future of the time traveler and Goldfinger in this world. ② Before the Goldfinger space was opened, we had already observed in advance the performance of Goldfinger in this world and the exchanges between the two protagonists of the Harry Potter world in the Goldfinger space. ③The Harry Potter world that should not interact has been observed before Goldfinger was turned on. And he observed in advance what the protagonist of Harry Potter had not done three years ago - modifying Voldemort's notebook one by one. And presented the results.

Go ahead, Chapter 80 is a big deal. A chance to make a wish at the super-shadow level is used to change the breath of the soul. I bet Uchiha Madara won't kill him. I'm laughing.

The author doesn't watch the anime carefully. Villagers in the Naruto world are often attacked, robbed, and even massacred by bandits, bandits, ronin, and rebel ninjas. Otherwise, do you think there are so many low-level missions, who should the genin turn to for the bloody missions?

Classics last forever

Ignoring other flaws, the author's plot is too fragmented. It contains flashbacks and interludes. It takes up a lot of space. It's very tiring to read the fragments. The author loves to show off his writing ability and completely ignores the reading experience of the readers.

It is indeed a novel with 1.72 Million words and only 32 monthly tickets.