What? Fairy Zhengdao Wants to Abduct Me Again?

The writing is great, the male and female protagonists are well portrayed, each has their own cuteness, and the plot design is also very good. The content of the court is a bit weak, and the daily portrayal is also very good. The shortcomings are that the plot advances too fast, many things are too simple, and it is too fast-food. There is a lot of daily characterization in the early stage, but not in the later stage. The social structure is too simple. As a result, things that normally should take more than half a year to be done can be done in two or three months of writing. There is no branch plot, and many supporting characters are not energetic enough compared to the protagonist (many novels and even the protagonists are portrayed in a stereotyped manner and lack vitality).

No, buddy, you were just joking around and writing about daily life, not talking about anything else, but now it's time to fight among the various forces, why don't you show what happened to Prince Ning's forces? Prince Ning's palace is all rubbish, isn't it? The male protagonist was assassinated once, and there was no follow-up reaction. Also, there is no intelligence system under Prince Ning's power, right? The male protagonist has to ask the outside world if he doesn't do it himself. Is this Crown Prince Ning's background used to make a living? Brother, your protagonist has this background setting, can we make it a bit more upscale? And there is your intelligence agency. From what you wrote, I feel that there is a high probability that there may be a heroine or something, but they are all trying to get rid of Prince Ning. How can Prince Ning keep this thing next door to his house? If not, someday you will team up with others to get you. In the intelligence business, you either have a huge background. If you go out of your way to do this, others will not do it to you? I still need Prince Ning to do something useful. Now it seems like pure waste. He has come back once and done nothing. His son was almost killed. There is no follow-up.

This is the reincarnation of the bedding man who rebuilt it.

The writing is quite interesting. Although the background of the novel is quite common, this opening is really interesting. Others know one's identity at the beginning. This one directly regards oneself as the original protagonist. The writing is not bad, a bit like Lao Den.

One thing to say, I don't understand why the enemy always wants to assassinate the protagonist. It's better to capture the protagonist and use it for blackmail. The protagonist really died in their hands. King Ning probably really wants to die. Then the country's border security is not guaranteed 🙂. There is no chance that the emperor is opposite, so he just wants to cut down the vassal vassal.

Difficult, the author doesn't know how to write about bows and arrows. If you check the information, you won't write like this. God tested the bow by emptying it, and the bow was damaged by emptying it. This is not a slingshot. The bow and arrows rely not on the elasticity of the bow string, but on the energy storage of the bow arm. Moreover, when taking it out of the box, it should be strung first and then unstrung for normal storage to extend the life of the bow 😡

The emotional lines and daily routines in this book are good, but the plot is a mess. The most difficult thing at present is that the third prince is a woman. How did the boss of the intelligence agency manage such a big business? As the crown prince of Ning, he has to rely on outsiders to find information. What a joke. The author, if you don't know how to write about plot, you don't have to write about it. Let's just focus on daily life and emotional plots.

Author, please read the book reviews! Your tactics are really useless. If you don't know how to write, don't write. Why don't you interact with your book friends?

It was so baffling after it was released. The main plot was not written, the characters were not portrayed, it was just a plot. It was inexplicable that the male protagonist was the first time. I thought you could reincarnate, but I don't think about it now 😅

Author: How can you rest at your age? ! One or two chapters a day, do you still want to become a god? Do you want to get rich suddenly? Do you want to marry Bai Fumei?

Is there a Shennong? The introduction is quite interesting, but why are there so few comments?

Personal opinion, I'm wrong There are many problems, too many problems The role of the empress is full of problems, without any tricks or tactics. I really can't think of what qualifications this character has to counter-kill the regent and take the throne in the original plot. "Because the fact that she is the empress of an enemy country is enough for Daxia to kill her" Why should I kill you? Because you are the empress? Do you think you are an empress? Why do you think the Great Xia Congress has murderous intentions towards you, a puppet emperor who has been emptied out? What effect does killing you have besides putting the power of the enemy country completely in the hands of the regent and giving them the reputation of righteousness? You don't really think of yourself as a person, do you? The first blood was given so casually that the male protagonist didn't even know who had taken his first blood. It is estimated that the later part was a debt or something to advance the plot with the empress The male protagonist in the original work is really 🐶🐔8⃣️ No, he is so powerful and powerful as described above, he can accomplish whatever he wants, he is very lucky, and he is the one favored by heaven. The result? The sword spirit is dead with one strike. No, buddy, are you really just like this? Is this what the boastful "Heavenly Blessed One" looks like? Luo Ningshuang of Xiaoyao Sect is a celebrity in the world and an important collaborator this time. So she naturally knew the close relationship between Luo Ningshuang and Xiao Ze'an. She was a little surprised when Luo Ningshuang suddenly agreed. But forget it. Su Ronger smiled. It's not him who joined forces, so what does it matter if it feels strange? This intelligence building really makes people laugh. As the boss of an intelligence agency, he can actually say "What does it matter if it feels strange?" Such words, sister, have you forgotten what business you are in? Moreover, the Intelligence Building is an intelligence agency, and its spies can't even draw. They show their employers low-quality graffiti. They have no shame and even slap them. Do you not know who the employer in front of you is? Prince Ning's Mansion is really a mess, anyone can break in, and the people in charge of the mansion have no sense of presence. The male protagonist just calls Jiao Chenglong directly when he does anything. Also, when the male protagonist goes out, he doesn't have anyone to protect him. There is really no secret guard at all. There are really too many problems in this book. If you really want to finish the book, I hope you can pay more attention to the subsequent plot.

Rebellion is too child's play, not to mention that this is still a world of low martial arts. Normal palaces are assisted by masters. It's outrageous and cannot be used with brains.

Why isn't Ning Chen on the character card?

The moderator is on the run? Or change your mind?

When will the author publish a new book?

I was shocked, I thought it was cut.

It would be a pity if the eldest princess wanted to get married.

The emotional lines are well written, and there is basically no romance or thunder, but in order to promote the emotional lines of different characters, there is basically no plot rationality. . . Later, in order to promote the emotional line of the empress, there was a plot where the protagonist agreed to be used as a hostage to go to Zhu Zhenguo. The other various forces were not described at all. It can be watched if you lose your mind. I can only say that the plot must not be taken too seriously. . .

Congratulations on the completion! Are there any extras?

There are no big problems with the plot, the writing is not bad, and the characterization is pretty good. It's a good article, but it's a pity that it's not popular.

If you don't know how to write about Machiavellian tactics, just write less about it, okay?