When I Am Reborn, I Don't Want to Be a Scumbag

Overall, I would give it 9 points, 0.5 Because Tang Yao, the thread that runs through the entire text, was not well written and only played the role of a tool. The other 0.5 Is because many things were not properly explained in the end, including Xu's side, Ye's side, etc. It is also obvious that the plot was written in a hurry after the three of them met Ye while traveling. The climax of the plot in the world of reincarnation was not perfect enough. I don't know if it is due to the accumulation of writing power. In terms of characterization, Youwei is one, Zhang Yang is half, and the other characters can be said to be a bit thin. The highlight is that the reincarnation setting really adds to the content of the article. I don't know if it is a poisonous point when I first wake up from the dream. I think it is okay. I feel that this is the author's first time writing an article. It would be best to add an extra chapter if I have time. Looking forward to the next more detailed work.

I like Zhang Yang's temperament so much. I actually like the male protagonists more than the female protagonists. I'm fed up with the male protagonists in most harem novels who say they are submissive before rebirth, but then turn into a wretched and greasy man instantly after rebirth. Although Zhang Yang's behavior is due to psychological shadow, he did fulfill his duties to the female protagonists and did not deceive his feelings.

There are a lot of trolls in the comment area, I really thought it was a masterpiece, that's all. . .

After reading one hundred and seventeen chapters in one day, I thought it was too superficial. The interaction between men and women was very superficial, and there was no emotional exchange, nor mutual understanding and repentance as the author had written before. Instead, it was very superficial, and the plot was also very superficial.

The idea of ​​anti-system is very good, but there is a problem with the setting of the heroines. What attracts everyone after rebirth should be the heroine's twisted, violent, and Shura field-like revenge. It is a revenge that does not satisfy the anger of the common people without killing. As a result, the author just wrote it as an ordinary high school student's love story, which caused the attraction of the emotional line to be greatly reduced.

It's really uncomfortable to lead a gangster to sell barbecue. His father has millions in wealth and he won't continue to sell barbecue to you, so he has changed his ways.

It's not that the more you write, the more you write, but it just feels boring. It feels like the plot is obviously developing, but it just feels like the plot is not advancing at all (just like going to work day after day, doing the same thing every day, nothing changes, but time just passes like this, and then it gets old) And the system is also very invisible behind the scenes, with almost no sense of existence. . It can be said that there is no system. If you change the way of writing or saying it, it can be done without affecting the structure of the whole story (just a few directly important people are reborn together with memories) Now I have to think about whether to continue to subscribe. In short, my current feeling is that it is not attractive to watch.

I promote the main plot, but I always write boring side plots, and I often use retro pretense and slap-in-the-face routines. It's really embarrassing and boring.

The writing is average. To put it bluntly, it doesn't tell a story. It's a bit literary but it doesn't have the writing style to make people want to read it.

It's so slow. Hundreds of virgins are lost, committing crimes.

It's really good. If you write it carefully, it will be a new urban campus legend.

The business writing is very boring and I can't stand it. I give the heroine an interesting system setting, but it's just passed by. It's not interesting. I can only say that I have no motivation to follow after reading about a hundred chapters.

Here's a rough introduction to how to play. Just go through the plot. I'll give you a detailed description of how to play, but there's nothing exciting about it.

The writing is average and the plot is average.

Feel that casual sight.

Secretary.

How is this different from ordinary rebirth stories? I originally wanted to see the contrast between the system and the heroine, but after reading Chapter 50, I didn't see it at all, which was boring.

I have read 20 or 30 chapters recently, and the content discussed is basically around 160 chapters. If there is improvement in the future, I will kneel down I saw that some book friends prefer the image of the male protagonist to the female protagonist. In the early days, I had the same feeling. On the one hand, this character Sex itself has contradictions and growth. From a wasteful tycoon who doesn't pay attention to girls' inner feelings, to leading his younger brother to barbecue in this life. He cherishes Xu Qing and Youwei (the scene with Xu Qing in the water park is really amazing. I'm used to seeing tens of billions of rich people and they are still anxious. The character of the diaosi male protagonist who is not good enough. He maintains a polite distance from Qingqing but does not deliberately act or pretend to be aloof. He still has a sweetheart. The image of the male protagonist written in this paragraph is simply ideal.) This contradiction and growth will also form the main line of the book. As the author said in his acceptance speech, the essence is a story about a male protagonist growing up and reconciling with himself But later on, I felt that the image of a greasy and loser male protagonist began to slip from the traditional starting point to another concave surface, that is, the traditional Japanese Asashi male protagonist. I feel that the male protagonist is starting to be a little hesitant and hesitant. This has always been a minefield for me. I haven't figured out how to accept my feelings for the two girls yet. This is acceptable, but the male protagonist's inner attitude (and his attitude towards the girls) Attitude) In fact, it can be more firm and clear. This also caused my personal perception of Xu Qing and Tang Yao's characters to decline. The part where Xu Qing and the secretary came to make trouble on the male protagonist's birthday was relatively poor because of the male protagonist's inaction and silence. The language caused Xu Qing to essentially not understand how complicated and profound the bond between Youwei and the male protagonist was (from Qingqing's perspective, they were just together for a period of time, and she was still her first love). She had no idea how absurd the male protagonist's life would be later, and how well Youwei played the role. The character and the last two people died in love. It is essentially impossible for the male protagonist to be with her for the rest of his life. This is not a situation that can be fought for. But Xu Qing is obviously not to blame for this. It is the attitude of the male protagonist that caused the relatively large information gap)

Is the male protagonist in this book a dog-licker and reborn to atone for his sins? Reading the introduction, I feel like the theory of male original sin. Can anyone give me an answer?

When I see the two words "Youwei", I feel like they are talking about each other, they have similar personalities. . . Quite dramatic. .

Tongzi version Xiao Rongyu and Shen Youchu

Everyone has different opinions on whether a book is good or bad, but the author is an interesting soul, haha

The first part was nice, but the middle and later stages were boring, and the ending was not very satisfying.

The new chapter card has been reviewed, and no one has reviewed it after waiting for two hours. I guess I have to wait until tomorrow.

😡😡😡😡Two assistants, Tang is in the bright and Ye is in the dark

Very well written, definitely above the standard!

Know what I mean?