Extracting Comic Skills, Starting With The Healer Who Was Banished From His Party

The author certainly has his own plans for his book, and since I am not the writer, I will not presume to make those decisions. I'll focus on my feelings from a reader's perspective. First, I can assure you that everyone who came in at the beginning was attracted by the name "Gun Yong," meaning that the readers of this book are essentially a group of people drawn in by "Gun Yong."

*Snap!* So fast! I clicked on the Healing Warlock as soon as I saw it. 😄

If you've extracted the so-called "Face Fruit" from the manga, then Shanks in your novel must also be a user of the "Face Fruit," otherwise there's a logical problem. I can only say that the writing is unappealing.

I'll withdraw first as a sign of respect. They changed the Super Saiyan boost from 50x to 10x; I can't even imagine how weak it was before the change. Suppressing the battle is pointless; even Shennong (a legendary Chinese physician) couldn't save it.

The "Face Fruit" is just the author playing with a reference, but the Super Saiyan bloodline ability is completely illogical. In Dragon Ball, the Saiyan concept hasn't even been introduced yet, and people are already exchanging for it. So if I draw a story about a child becoming a disciple and cultivating immortality, and then say that I set the child as the reincarnation of Pangu, can I just…

Clearly, this plot might fool young readers in recent years, but it's not quite up to par with veteran readers. There are some highlights, but not many, and the exciting moments feel awkward all the time. It's as if the author himself doesn't know what kind of person he wants to portray as the protagonist, or even what specific direction his career should take.

The protagonist is awesome because he's a transmigrator with a cheat code, but if he were an ordinary person, his life would be ruined. Someone ruins your life, yet you can handle it with ease and even laugh it off. Perhaps from the author's perspective, creating conflict to drive the plot is normal, but as readers, we're used to projecting our own experiences onto the protagonist—this is just too cruel!

At least three times the combat power was suppressed before the twenty cards.

Mom: Ling Xiaodong, aren't you very proud of yourself!

The "Face Fruit" trope was truly awful; it completely ruined my desire to continue reading. The thought that the rest of the plot would rely on this "Face Fruit" trope immediately pulled me out of the story. As the author said, you want to interfere with the spirit realm level, but for readers, there is no need to rely on memes to conceptualize and quantify skills.