Artificer's Adventure Guide

The writing was really good in the early stage, but since the end of the dungeon, it has really become more and more awkward. The plot is all over the place, the emotional scenes are messy, and many plot developments are inexplicable! The creation and upgrading of various items with pig's feet, which was quite exciting at the beginning, has become boring. It is originally a very interesting thing for time travelers to change the world by creating a different world without anything. Pigfoot used the academy to create "photography" and "movies", which were used to broadcast the academy competitions. It paved the way for several chapters, and then disappeared. . . The situation of the game is described in one stroke. In this case, what is the meaning of these things created by the protagonist! ! ! It's late at night and I'm getting more and more angry!

Because the protagonist is too young, the interaction with the surroundings will be very limited, and the sense of substitution will be much weaker (14 years old). And you can't write certain plots. In addition, we only escaped from the underground level in Chapter 70. There are too few people for the protagonist to interact with, and many texts describe wars that have nothing to do with the protagonist from a God's perspective, which makes it very disconnected. Hmm🤔You have to pay attention to the rhythm later, otherwise it will look like a fairy tale, but it is still a dnd novel that you can read.

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The writing is very good, except that the whole article is full of the humble psychology of this little virgin, which makes people sick 😅. And I feel like I have no sense of crisis. I am in the underground area. I feel uneasy and malicious. I mention it and then do what I should. It seems that I am not worried. Isn't the surrounding area investigated? Don't you observe the environment? The dangers I saw in the article include the illithid hidden in the mushroom forest, the bugbears keeping lizards in captivity, and who knows what was broken in the sword. These protagonists feel the signs, but they still know nothing about it, so they have zero ability to act and no sense of crisis.

Although, the strength of the magical weapons is still too humorous. The three-in-one sub-classes are not that strong. When I was a thief and a ranger, I couldn't even think of the magical weapons because they were too weak.

Pixel

I have read more than a hundred chapters. Let me talk about my experience. First of all, I really like western fantasy adventures and harem light novels. I don't know much about DND, but I also played through Baldur's Gate 3 for a week. I really liked the first copy. Although it was a bit too long, I still liked the process of the protagonist and Hope relying on each other and slowly becoming stronger. I'm not very satisfied with the academy chapter. On the one hand, there are more teachers, classmates, and parents, but most people probably still like the interaction between the protagonist and the heroines, at least I do. Also, there are too many protagonists who combine earth knowledge and magic to create things. This one relies on earth knowledge to invent new things, and it makes others shocked. I feel a bit outdated. Anyway, I don't feel happy, and I feel a bit embarrassed. On the contrary, the interaction with Nia is more interesting. I hope that the author will focus on adventure in the future, and use it as a buffer with beautiful girl posts. This is the reason why I am willing to spend money to subscribe. Of course the above is just my own point of view, the author can refer to it for reference

It's a pity that although it has a solid foundation based on DND, the second design is a bit stiff. In an extraordinary world where strength is status, the school does not focus on cultivating a spellcasting genius. He only has attributes but no level (the author sets up three elements for upgrade, 1 attribute, 2 expertise, and 3 experience). After following the protagonist for a few days, his level will rise rapidly. In the beginning and in the dungeon, the protagonist uses psychic organs transformed from multiple mind flayer larvae, and then dares to use psychic powers to fight against the mind flayers. When the potential enemy is a mind flayer, the detection method relies heavily on psychic powers (isn't this Luban playing with a big ax in front of the door?) The protagonist's experience in the dungeon is fake. Those life-and-death crises seem to have never happened at all. Later, there is no impact on career development and methods of conduct - armored props are colorful. Whistle (the armor has more arm blades, several more modes, and improved attributes. All of the above have been mentioned in one sentence. Then there are more flashy props, and they are even described in detail. As a result, when something happens, he complains in the article that the attack is not enough. The whole "Moon Spirit Essence Liquid" changes from one thing to another. When in battle, he describes it like a toy, without strengthening the layer of paper on his body). When encountering things, he can make waves (being attacked by a sneak attack, falling into a trap, trusting strangers, and walking into the trap with his body just because he is wearing armor).

It's the kind of classic protagonist, spiritual eunuch type. I am only interested in peeping, and I will never do it in real combat, and I will restrain myself not to do it. I didn't even dare to dream, and I was holding on to my dreams. The protagonist can have no desires and develop his career seriously. The protagonist can have light desires as an inconsequential adjustment. The protagonist can have serious desires, so he can be serious about it. But the protagonist cannot be obsessed with desire + being a eunuch. His mind is full of astringency while he desperately endures it. No matter what conditions are provided, endure it with all your strength.

Khorvaire

At first I thought it was an adventure novel and ordered some chapters, but it turns out that it seems to have become a territory management later on?

Emmm, the writing after coming out of the dungeon is indeed very boring The male channel writes fantasy, but the main point is actually upgrading, treasure hunting, adventure, etc. You made the college plot a bit too bland. Originally, the style of fantasy art is incompatible with traditional fantasy, and the interactive part is too Japanese-style, so if it is separated from the adventure plot, it will not be able to please fantasy readers.

Has the author died recently?

Mind Flayer: It's a DND protagonist who uses our larvae as psychic activators, right? It's really difficult for us (funny

There is a big problem with the character dialogue in this book. The early dungeons were okay, with few characters, and the dialogue was normal. After leaving the dungeon, the dialogue between the characters in the campus chapter began to deviate towards the martial arts novel. At this point, I just felt weird, so I read it normally. In Chapter 177, I was really confused about the beloved, so I turned to history again. Western fantasy novels do not seek to have a Western fantasy flavor, at least the sense of violation should be smaller.

The first three chapters were directly persuaded to quit. Let's talk about the poisonous points: 1. The starting time of the work is not the traditional start of Eberron in 998 but 1024, and the plot after time travel uses the mind flayer larvae in Baldur 3. 2. Even if NPC He is a war-type barbarian who also knows his level. He introduced himself as "I am x-level xxx" 3. In the world view, everyone has the ability to kill and upgrade, and it is not exclusive to the protagonist I was poisoned to death when I saw this third point and ran away.

This academy light novel is really interesting.

Pixel

Ah? Is it really over? After a while, it ended abruptly?

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To pass the time, I looked around randomly. It feels like it's much more boring than the online specialty professionals that I instinctively hate. Although there is no need to write online articles according to traditional ideas now, I really think it is better to give the protagonist group some main conflicts. After all, even road movies often have a purpose of travel unless the protagonist is a traveler passing by. Based on the current state of the protagonist, I think there are the following directions Psychic power: In Eberron, psychic power is strongly related to the dream clan. It is normal for the dream spirit to seek help from a good person with psychic powers like the protagonist, and it is also normal for the dream spirit to use the virtues of the nightmare to use the protagonist for their race transformation plan Dragon Mark: The omnipotent dragon mark, as part of the dragon prophecy, can attract the dragon clan to study the protagonist. Although the dragon clan has evaded the world since the giant empire committed suicide, and only the black dragon druid has taken action, there have never been fewer agents or individuals who turned into human beings and became spies Giant Legacy: After all, the five countries picked up the Final Furnace, which was mostly the legacy of the giants, and ran into industrialization with machine skills. The protagonist picked up the key and opened a big one. It is normal for the gift package to take off on the spot, not to mention that the last Titan Emperor is not dead yet, and it is good to battle wits and courage with the emperor who is afraid of being killed by the Dragon Clan if he shows his head. And these three can be combined into one. After all, the official hint is that it was probably the Giant Empire who wanted to arrest him or the Dream Clan led by the Heart of Light. So the protagonist used the key to open the giant's legacy. After touching the experimental product of the year, the dragon pattern changed into a psychic dragon pattern. The dragon and dream tribe came to the protagonist to ask for something. I think it is feasible. Then the protagonist's sub-job turned into an astral structure. Not to mention how powerful the plug-in was, he was also the founder of the sect.

Let me be clear in advance, I only represent myself. I really don't like to see any elements of second games in books, especially controversial second games. If it really happens multiple times, I will have no choice but to stop watching it.

The more I look at it, the less interesting it becomes. It started to be interesting. Now there is nothing exciting. Shouldn't an Artifact Master be able to instantly create any weapons and equipment as long as he has the materials? It's like an online game that uses wood to instantly create things, but there's nothing new about it now. The above are my personal suggestions and opinions.

The plot is a bit aimless and unclear.

What I wrote after it was released has deviated from the theme of the story. I plan to continue writing this book and start the second world line.

What is written? ? ? The more I look at it, the more something seems wrong. I booked it in vain.

It's been a day since the new chapter was released, and I still managed to reach 84 people after I updated it. Isn't there even a hundred people in one day? Author, have you been writing out of inspiration recently? Why don't you look for inspiration? The most attractive thing is the story in the dungeon.

I would like to ask how the professional level of the male protagonist is planned. I don't know much about the DND running group. I have seen that some famous character cards have many part-time jobs, but are the several warrior levels of the male protagonist a waste? Also, will the pure weapon master that the male protagonist, Teacher Moore, plans to take, be stronger at level 20? Can any book friends give an answer?

. . . . Is this gone? Outrageous

The brain of the protagonist, what happens when you poke it in?