Who Hid My Body!

The first volume is very good, the second volume is readable, and the third volume is 💩. The more I read this female character, the more 💩 she looks like. The portrayal is too rubbish, completely broken. The main character is broken. You are an evil god. You have been turned into a Bodhisattva.

To be honest, it is difficult to describe the author's mentality when writing this book. The first volume is undoubtedly a masterpiece. The changes in the priest's mentality, the struggle of human nature, the bloody faith and the mockery of destiny undoubtedly set the tone of the book. It should be a theme of struggle and irony, and the core conflict is the battle between man and God and human nature. But in the second volume of Tianqin, the medieval cyberspace is indeed very interesting, but due to the problem of detailed description, the author wants to write about a great and upright character, completely ignoring the problem that light relies on the contrast of darkness, constantly highlighting how wronged and innocent the agent is, and how How to protect the people with such fearlessness, but the main contradiction is placed on the alien gods, as if everything is God's intervention, the alien gods forcefully reduce the meat content, which is bad, and the old gods are soon to be overtaken by the alien gods, which is good, reducing the agent from a human hero to a religious saint. So may I ask, what is the purpose of the cyber element? Shouldn't punk be the more prominent topic of cyberspace? ? The resistance of punk is a moral rebellion and a struggle of human nature, not a battle between gods and beliefs! ! The core conflict changed from mechanical ascension to who is the orthodox, so the second volume lost its human touch in terms of background, and the agent became a figure like a religious lunatic. As for the final epilogue, the family was forced to reunite and make dumplings. Yes, everything looks good, the protagonist has obtained the fragments, the main characters basically have their dreams come true, the agent even stood up to the old gods to make them stop completely, and the gods of power have been completely sent, but because of the conflict placement issue, the feeling is indescribably disgusting. In the third volume, there is no acting at all. It is clearly a large caste-based hive, and the main perspective is focused on the upper level. The lower level is almost described briefly, and it has almost nothing to do with the acting. Although the background of the acting is said to be stolen from the lower level, but if there is a small exposed branch at the end, I guess the author will not give any role to the lower level! What is your journey as an agent? No! Plot conflict? It's just a werewolf, and it's still a well-known one! Main description? It is all placed on top of the old men and there are even bigger old men, so the overall plot is as bland as water, with no plot tension or characters. When the end is quickly skipped, the seemingly absent logic forcibly wraps up the theme amidst the chaos. Even if the caste system is to be broken, there is no rationality in the method at all. In short, the third chapter gave me the feeling of: "Humanity conflict? Class conflict? To hell with them all, everything is just a slap in the head."

To give a brief review, the author tells the story well and has a good idea. The character creation is also changing in the development. Uru's self-salvation is a masterstroke in the first chapter. But the writing style is still a bit behind. In other words, the writing power is not enough, the plot development and character creation are not smooth enough, and sometimes the expression of emotions is too strong, such as when Uru takes action for the little boy and sacrifices for the little girl. Although there is foreshadowing of "seeing the past self and mother", but It felt to me that he only started to recall a wave of explosive emotions when he needed to advance the plot, but the fact is that the author had indeed laid out a plot before that, so in the final analysis, the writing skills were a bit poor, the plot concept was good, and the logic was smooth, but the details of the plot connection were still lacking and the meaning was not natural enough. Of course, it can be seen that the first chapter is quite difficult to write. In order for the character of Uru to change, it must not only reflect the complex contradictions of the character, but also not use a lot of psychological description, and the change must be completed in a short period of time under the guidance of the protagonist. It is difficult to grasp both the shaping of Uru and the shaping of the protagonist. In my opinion, I can give the first article a score of seventy-five points. The five points missing from the eighty-point mark are because what I said in the previous paragraph is that it is not smooth and natural enough. Of course, I believe that the author should be able to write better next time. After all, the subsequent host should not be a person with a huge change like Ulu, and it is relatively easy to control the plot. My suggestion is 1. The author can strengthen the description of the environment, firstly to use the scene to express emotions, and secondly to facilitate the reader to imagine the scene in the mind; 2. Secondly, the author can strengthen the description of the character's appearance, clothing, demeanor, and movements. The reason for the appearance, body shape, and clothing is because I read the whole article and was deeply impressed by Ulu's personality transformation, but if you ask me what he looks like, As for what the other supporting characters look like, I really have no idea; 3. Not to mention the facial expressions and movements, this is a classic description of details. What impressed me most was the pale face of the woman in the tavern coughing, and Ulu trembling at every turn. There is really nothing else to note about it. It relies too much on language description and ignores the details of facial expressions and movements, so the look and feel will look very white.

The part before it is put on the shelf is a complete story, which is worth reading. I have been short of books for a while, and this one has attracted me. There is nothing poisonous about it. As for some people who say that the plot is cliche, I don't feel it. At least the emotions are very natural and strong. This is the shining point of this book. In terms of setting, the supporting characters will have a bit of Nantong plot, which is to serve the plot and not affect the reading. After it was published, the author was a little hasty in writing because he did not save the manuscript. At present, it seems that the skills of some paragraphs are slightly lacking. In addition, the new story has not been fully developed yet, so it will be a little uncomfortable to follow up. The number of words and content of each chapter of the author vary greatly. If it can maintain the level of the first sixty chapters, this will be a good book.

Summary: More than 90% of online articles ① Plot: A weapon-spirit novel, which connects the entire story by collecting the body parts of the protagonist and shows the world in the book. Advantages: The plot is natural, the foreshadowing is well laid, it is obvious that there is an outline, and there are no obvious logical loopholes (at least I didn't find any) ：（）                                                                 ②：，                       ：，，，（）                       ③Characters:                           Advantages: The portrayal of Uru breaks out of the ordinary facial expression description. This kind of portrayal is a breath of fresh air in online articles, and Uru is not just a person, but the epitome of the lower class people under the rule of the entire Rhine Church. His portrayal Closely connected with the plot and very successful Disadvantages: Except for Uru, other characters are average. Personally, I think the character of the protagonist is somewhat different from the actual character. Compared to a time traveler, he looks more like Visas who has played the game (tentatively assuming that Visas is a good guy), so I was surprised when I saw the content about the past life. There is too little description of Corey. The portrayal of the famine-stricken refugees outside Thorne is too brief and casual. The author only writes that they have become numb, which is not consistent with reality. They feel that they should rob, riot, fight for a little food, or even eat people. Finally, let me talk about a few points. After all the foreshadowing and exaggeration, the battle with Corey should be the breaking point, but there is very little description, the explosion is insufficient, and there is a sense of hesitation. And the author's writing style is not very good. I personally hope that the author can add some more touching sentences, such as a self-introduction paragraph when the protagonist is possessed, and local famous quotes, etc. Overall, it is very good and worth reading, surpassing most online articles.

During this period, I can see many people saying at the end of chapters and in the comment area that the second volume is not as good as the first volume. However, after reading the second volume in full, my impression is that the second volume is the real group portrait. Perhaps the reason why everyone thinks the first volume is good is because it shows a contrast. Simply put, it is similar to the fact that selfish people die from dedication and betrayers die from loyalty. No matter how bad a person is, he still has a desire for light in his heart, and in the end he does it, and he feels sublimated. The overall plot setting is also very good, but in terms of characters, apart from Uru and the protagonist, in my impression, how many other supporting characters are left? There may be the aunt and the little girl in the hotel, and the little boy that Uru rescues. Apart from them, the rest are all villains. But in this chapter of Tianqin, besides Jellal, there are still many other flesh-and-blood people, such as Ian, Yongxin, Ina, Yuri, Weisen, Tachibana, captain and vice-captain, mechanics, etc. Perhaps their portrayal is not as three-dimensional as Uru, and is more idealistic and lacks descriptions of human weaknesses, because there is indeed not as much plot as Ulu. But in Tianqin, this is a group portrait volume, with so many characters appearing, and the overall setting is novel and substantial, the logic is complete, and the plot is compact, while the characters are not collapsed. I feel that the author should have prepared a very detailed outline in advance, so I think this is very rare. The author's writing skills and control of the entire plot are very impressive among newcomers. Many veteran authors cannot compare to them. You must keep it up! !

I said the first volume of your book is similar to Chinese studies. I subscribed to the second volume and read some and found that it is silk. Am I wrong? Of course I praise your book for its good writing. I spent money to read your book, but why don't you let me say that it's not good? ? ?

The writing is not bad, I can score 80 points. The plot and setting are relatively retro. It's not bad, but it's just a bit lower than what I expected at the beginning.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       are all written in this article. Don't waste your time in the book review section, there is too little valuable information.

The first volume can be said to be the redemption of mortals, the second volume is the end of the knight, and the third volume is the cry of the humble. I don't like the ones after the fourth volume, but I still recommend them.

Let me tell you something about myself. I have been reading novels for many years. The more I read, the more detailed I become in various aspects. I have now read Chapter 75 of this book, and two areas are detailed enough. One is the characterization of the characters, and the other is the characterization of the background. I don't want to read that kind of characterization. There is no novel like Tuo Shi. The most recent novels I read, Desperate Night and Fairy Gong Kaiwu, are the same. They have very detailed descriptions of the protagonists and a certain amount of resistance. It really made me irritated. What's so good about such a novel that looks like a running account? And the control of the plot is also very good. It's not that there are no better books than this one, but it seems that it is really difficult to write 70 chapters in a volume. It can be said to be first-rate. I have read all the good-looking ones with endings, and there are always stories. But there may be 75 chapters in this book, but after all, there are basically none now. Simply put, it has certain requirements for readers. I used to be able to read Douluo Daluo, but now I really can't stand it when I go back.

The third volume was abandoned. The protagonist, who is the driving force behind the scenes, is threatened by a childish acrostic poem? It's so weird. The description of Nia becomes flatter as it goes to the end. This is the first time I have seen the character become flatter as the writing progresses. It does not mean that the mastermind behind the scenes must control the overall situation and make all the chess pieces move according to the predetermined trajectory. But if you want to lose a high information position, shouldn't there be more plans? Can you win it with just an acrostic poem? It's too weird. It not only steps on Bai Wei, but also looks naive to Nia. It gives people a feeling of just this, it's so weird, only anticlimactic can perfectly describe it. Shouldn't the final chapter of Nia be like the previous volumes with a progression of emotions and a sudden explosion at the end? How could it be like this? The more you read, the lower you get. Is this just a movement that foreshadows a whole volume? It makes me so uncomfortable. The emotions I suppressed for dozens of chapters have not exploded at all. It's uncomfortable, uncomfortable

Recommended by a group of friends, I thought it was quite ordinary at first, with the old routine of parasitism and devouring the master, hypocrisy and betrayal. However, as I read it slowly, it really analyzed human nature, and Flowers and Insects profoundly demonstrated the charm of evil people. Later, the story about the corruption of the church and the uneven situation in the world raised the content of the book to a higher level. It can definitely be regarded as a good book. It's hard to say about the issue of Mizoko, because there is a prototype in reality, and because it is disgusting enough, it is easy to establish a villain image that is universally hated by readers. However, it is indeed mentioned a bit too much, and the description is too heavy, which leads to some physical discomfort. However, the author should correct it later. Overall, it is still very promising.

I feel that the first volume is the kind that directly leads people into the trap at the beginning. It is well written and very attractive. It makes me feel very interesting. Moreover, the subsequent writing will not kill the reader's interest, but makes people want to read more. The ending is a direct sublimation. If it is a short story, this must be a high score In the third volume, I personally feel that at the beginning of the third volume, although the heroine does not deal with the protagonist everywhere, she sometimes feels a little embarrassed. Yes, but if you continue to read and think about it, it has its own personality, especially the song for seeding at the end. It somehow made me happy and funny at the same time... In general, the author has a good grasp of writing this book. After reading online articles for ten years, there are not many people who can write to this level. There are even some books that everyone knows, and the sales volume is very high, just like that... Of course, it is purely a personal feeling. Finally, since this world view is so big, I think we can add some extras, or short stories, to enrich the book.

I originally thought the author was joking last night when he said he couldn't write battles well, but when this 5K chapter came out, I really was. . . To be honest, this chapter is really not very good. The plot is dragging, and what could have been explained in two or three paragraphs is reduced to one chapter. The content of this section is not even as interesting as the beginning of the episode where Uru kills Luji or the Tantric Cult. What was originally a refreshing battle turned into a house-style battle, and do these passers-by really need any character arcs? The portrayal of the professor and best friend is good, but too much is not enough. This best friend can be considered a mini-boss at best, and the supporting miscellaneous soldiers are 5K words long and have not been completed. The supporting leaders when fighting the principal (or others), the final boss, are not as easy to write as these few. A battle of this level between gangsters really does not require emotional rendering. I am also looking forward to the story of possession by the Secret Cult, and hope that the subsequent battles will be better.

It's a beautiful book, and the writing is very good. I feel like I can't get enough of it, but I always felt that the ending was a bit bland, and I'm getting more and more stuck in my mouth. It's a rare book that I like in recent years.

The author has some ideas for controlling emotions, and the plot development also has a sense of urgency one after another. Several characters are quite well-developed, and many volumes leave you with a sore nose and a stuck-in-your-throat feeling at the end of many volumes. To put it bluntly, the last time I had a similar experience was a few years ago. But this does not mean that this book does not have shortcomings. First of all, once it involves plots that aim to promote the development of the world view, taking Wildfire Volume as an example, it starts to trick people and pretend to be mysterious. The development of the world view is not shocking enough, and the original delicacy is lost. Then there is the similarity of the plots. I can understand that the information gap and the "interlocking" type of battle are useful and beautiful, but it is a bit boring to write like this in each volume. In the same way, sacrifice and dedication can indeed be tear-jerking, and the complex characters and group portraits are real and moving, but there are a bit too many. Personally, I think the first and second volumes are the best, the fourth volume is the worst, and the other volumes are still above the standard. Overall, it looks good and recommended😎.

Is this fourth note so outrageous? It's 100% contagious, it's spread by sound

I declare this is the best book I have read in the past few years. I really found a treasure.

The author is me 😭 don't stop

Let me tell you something, this author is not very good, and he cannot write as fast as I can read! Unlike most authors, I'm done before I even get to the point where I'm paying for them! Author, I hope you will improve humbly, rat tail juice!

This is the first time I have ordered the entire novel without finishing it. After just reading the second chapter of Tian Qin, I will not regret my decision. The author uses his extraordinary narrative talent to weave an exquisite network of stories. The plot progresses like a chain, nested layer by layer, and foreshadowing is dotted like grass and snakes. Until the end of the story, all the clues are like rivers returning to the sea, and the closed loop is completed with exquisite logic, making people marvel at the sudden realization. In the creation of group portraits, the author uses meticulous touches to give each character a unique character background, a tortuous growth story and an irresistible destiny trajectory. Whether it is the highlight moment of the protagonist or the surprising glimpse of the supporting character, they are all vividly and vividly portrayed. Together, these lifelike characters build an alien world full of vitality, where every breath, every sorrow and every joy seems to be real and tangible, making people immersed in it and unforgettable for a long time. This is a novel that is very suitable for animation. I can only say that it would be a pity if it was not discovered again.

Many people say that the second volume is not as good as the first volume, but I think the first volume and the second volume have different advantages and disadvantages Let me talk about the advantages first. These settings are really interesting. I rarely see such novel settings and plots. The plot logic is also reasonable. Although it is more invincible, it does not make me think that the villain is mentally retarded. This is a big plus. I also like the plot. In fact, I doubt whether the author is a reincarnation of the dirty land or an extraterrestrial demon The biggest shortcoming of the second volume is that it is not about combat. The fighting method is too simple. For example, fighting is to open the chain sword and then overload, and other things are basically not reflected. This is actually a waste of my own settings. It is a pity. I have been looking forward to a fist-to-bone battle in the second volume. According to the author's descriptions in the first two volumes, there are still a lot of pits that have not been filled. In the end, he should return to the first two countries. I hope the author will practice the description of the battle well before this, sort out his outline, and have the opportunity to attack it later.

Maintain the same quality as before it was put on the shelves. If I don't reach lv5 within 600 chapters, I will eat Thunder Shadow Thunder.

Each big chapter is really good to read and really novel, but it's really uncomfortable to follow chapter by chapter. Please update.

Very good, re-reading all the chapters before it was released. Fortunately, I did not subscribe to the later parts and retained a clear memory. The writing at the beginning is very exciting. It would be better to read the comments section if the rest of the story is unfinished. It would be better than adding an inexplicable character.

The main character knows the plot in advance and regains the invincibility, which are two popular plots in the past. It is almost a combination. Mainly because I have read a lot of these two separately before. This one directly combines them, and it feels like 1+1>3 It would be more exciting, but at the same time, the plot does not have that much feeling, because the male protagonist predicts the plot, so the reader's sense of initiative is weakened a lot, and then there is The point is that the plot is actually quite easy to guess, and there are no twists. Most of it explains the protagonist, story background and character background, so the plot loses a bit of flavor But the advantages are also obvious, that is, the description is very good, and there are many touching and refreshing points, which are very satisfying. The protagonist's character of both good and evil is also very interesting, and the human nature is fully described

6-Month ticket support A good writer is a writer who does not continue to follow the example.

Why did Hevinia have her middle finger attached? But now that I have read Chapter 3, Chapter 4 or 5, and looking back, I still don't understand why the middle finger was attached 😰. Did I miss something?

The second one, squatting with one hand, the first one

To be honest, I am still a little confused. I originally thought that the book that had hit the market suddenly had success, but some of the problems that followed also made me a little at a loss. I haven't written a book at Qidian for a long time, and I don't understand the rules here, so I can only explain a few recent problems before getting familiar with it. 1. Update issue. Before it is put on the shelves, it is 4,000 words per day. I will write more after it is put on the shelf (because the recommended time for this book is very late, and the number of words will exceed too many if it is updated) 2. Plot issue, everyone may hate Gouzi, I have also noticed it, Rhine It will not appear after the chapter is over, and the Rhine chapter will end before it is put on the shelves 3. Regarding the performance issue, I really don't know how to explain this. You can tell by reading what I posted in the previous chapter. Before I recommended it, I thought this book was going to be a hit, and I never thought that it would suddenly be on the list. But I really don't brush comments, nor do I brush comments as some people say. I wouldn't delete them if I didn't encounter some highly offensive comments. There is no need to use my results to ridicule some great masters. This is really flattering. I know my own level. I have read many suggestions and basically agree with them. For example, some words are wordy and the combat descriptions are not very good. These are indeed my shortcomings and I will work hard to correct them. Also, I am really not the reincarnation of a big boss. I have just written a few fan books in the past and achieved some success, but my originality has never been popular. I wrote a book at Qidian many years ago, and the average subscriptions were 70, 100, and 200 respectively. It was really the best of the best. So for this book, both the subject matter and the plot are completely unfamiliar to me. I really have no experience and can only write as I go. So there are really a lot of shortcomings, and I am really unsure about the current results and everyone's love for this book. I only slept for two hours on the day it was listed on the list. I would wake up from my dreams for fear of writing this book =-= Well... That's about it. Because I don't want to post it in the book and affect everyone's reading experience, I put it in the book review area. If there is anything else, I will wait until the day it is released.