Immortality Starts with Fishing

There are too many descriptions, the plot is too slow, and it is very troublesome to watch. I was a little disappointed when I recommended it to my neighbor. 😥

Dig a small pool yourself, put the fish you caught in it, then fish it out again, put it in again, and you can farm endlessly.

I read it, and after three minutes, I understood why the author called him Brother Sandan 🙂

When telling a story, don't tell it in the middle. Is it okay to tell it after finishing the story?

Take off, introduce poison every day 🙂

To be honest, the author's paragraphing is a bit funny. Just follow it and read it, not just watch it, but it will be very funny.

This novel seems very long-winded. There is too much plot and content to explain this and that.

As for the paragraphing and punctuation, I just can't help it. Look, after reading three chapters, the irritability in my heart suddenly came up.

Can you please be more concise? There is too much nonsense. If you don't want to go to the palace to find a technique, you have to look for it yourself. I have searched for four chapters and still haven't found it. They are all described by the protagonist's own words. It's too watery.

The writing is so bad. I could write another book on psychological activities. I'm convinced and I'm about to give up.

Fishing is fishing, not catching fish

This book is confusing to listen to, and the narration in your explanation is too much. There is no dry material in one chapter, it is just water.

Lao Duan, I miss you😭😭😭

Psychological activities, talking too much to oneself, a little watery

The psychological description of a passerby takes more than a hundred words, and the psychological description of the protagonist himself is given in several consecutive chapters, and the development process of the exercise is described in large sections. This is just a setting in the novel, and we are not reading a paper. Is it necessary to describe it in such detail? The space left for the plot is much smaller. Just one chapter is enough to push the boundaries.

There's so much nonsense. Just read the title.

You have to leave some for readers to think about. The subject matter is really good, but the way you write it is like a running report. The first ten chapters really made me sleepy. I hope I can practice revising this book and work harder on the next book. After writing so much, it is unrealistic to make major revisions.

If I had this golden finger, I would directly buy a pond the size of four football fields, and put 10,000 copies of the same exercise into a box. There is a hook on the box, and my fishing tackle is also a hook. The pond is full of such boxes, and thousands of boxes are printed every day. There is no problem at all. It is equivalent to being able to master 10 million exercises in one day. Even if you are a pig, how difficult is it for you to survive the tribulation in one year 😡😡😡😏😏😏

If I were to write it, of course I would modify it based on your setting. The protagonist has not been stationed for ten years, but is still in a remote and mundane place. I will write that the protagonist has cultivated to the golden elixir stage with his golden finger, and then the ten-year period has arrived. He pretends that he, a disciple on the surface of the fourth level of Qi training, has encountered an accident, so as to break away from his identity as a disciple of the immortal sect. In the future, if your cultivation reaches the level of becoming a god, you can come back and leave some skills to the Immortal Sect as a reward. This kind of fairy sect that is full of humanistic feelings and sophistication has escaped early. Instead of enlightening Taoism and cultivating immortality every day, being carefree and at ease, it engages in humanistic sophistication every day. The disciples have to search for their souls when they encounter opportunities. The origin of huge wealth is unknown, and they have no big heart at all. In other words, in the golden elixir period ten years later, use this fairy gate to pave the way for a cool point. I will never report it like you, and then talk a lot in my heart, fearing this or that, and then follow you and so on. You will do no good by reporting it like this. Instead, you will expose yourself to danger. When the other party comes, will they doubt whether you have something that you have not reported, and will they suspect that you have embezzled it? Will they continue to monitor you or something like that? There is no benefit in reporting it, but it will put yourself in danger. I really can't figure it out.

Why did I catch the third level giant? Guess who I am 😍

Duan Ju, can you change this section?

It's another chatty book that talks to itself, asking questions and answering them all by itself, plus supporting evidence 😭

Is it a three-stage giant?🙂

Will it be over this month after Duan Ju eats it?

Write part-time, find a relaxing job like a library or museum, and have a guarantee.

Lao Duan, are you planning to end the rhythm of peppering and salting?

After reading more than ten chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. This writing level really needs to be improved. The inner drama explains a lot. I have to do several pictures of the matter of grinding and moaning.

Brother Ju, come back, I miss you 😍

I feel that the author prefers to listen to Peking Opera, and the rhythm of the article is similar to that of the opera.

It's a pity that it's finished. I could have hoped to become a god by millions.