Xiuxian: I Have an Inventory

The author stayed up late last night to read your book, which gave me the feeling that I had no motivation to pursue it. Your golden finger setting is still interesting, but the development of the story line is really a mess. You are too old to deal with the emotions of female characters. You should be procrastinating about the entrance and exit of female characters because you are not very old. This book has strayed away from Goldfinger. In my opinion, you should focus the story line at the beginning on Goldfinger and how the protagonist uses his newly acquired abilities to gain wealth, or how to arrange unexpected battles or how to use Goldfinger to survive in the intrigue environment. Your excessive descriptions of the ex and the two sisters really ruined the good impression at the beginning. You are not following the dual cultivation system or the system of having many children and many blessings. Writing these things will completely lower your score. It should be that the author does not have enough experience to write. To give you some advice, my ex or two sisters can write it. For example, when the neighbor woman said she wanted something the night after she paid off the money, she didn't need to write anything and only wrote about her gold finger and surrounding items. Then after gaining a certain amount of power and reputation, you accidentally meet and arrange for a subordinate with reasonable reasons. The author has too little experience and is too obsessed with women.

After watching it in a jump setting, you can tell that the jump setting does not affect the viewing. It is a cool novel, but it is too cliched to be refreshing. The routines of urban novels are modified with the skin of Golden Finger Cultivation, and there is nothing special about it. Moderately poisonous, not fatal.

In the middle and lower parts, it is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. The subject matter is very good, the feeling of a country bumpkin driving a Ferrari makes people feel itchy to watch.

I am really convinced. I have been entangled with this woman endlessly. You are a time-travelling predecessor who was a licking dog. You also want to be a licking dog. Why don't you write about cultivating immortals? Why not write about the city? These nonsense happen every day.

After reading Chapter 20, the setting of this equipment is purely a gold finger. Once it is equipped, it cannot be replaced. Will this pile of junk be useful after building a gold elixir in the later stage? The cool thing about this golden finger is that you can prepare several sets of equipment, one for combat, one for training, and one for making money. You can also prepare some sets for exploration and travel. The cool thing is that you can't change the equipment when you come. There are already restrictions on equipment conditions. It's still stressful, isn't it?

I met a 30-year-old young woman online last year. We have been chatting very well for more than half a year. On May 20, she asked to meet. I hesitated. I said you have a family and it didn't feel good, but she said it was okay and we were just ordinary friends. So I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty. She left me. The city is not far away, so we made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop. We didn't choose to meet somewhere else for fear of meeting an acquaintance. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for several hours. While waiting, I looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have beauty functions, but when she got out of the Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. People compare to photos. It looked much better, and she was my favorite type. She also recognized me. She didn't know what to say. In order to break the awkwardness, she suggested hugging her. I said yes. She smelled very good. I jumped up and down. After sitting in the milk tea shop for a while, we went to eat. She basically didn't eat much. The whole process was... While she was peeling shrimps for me, picking out fish bones, and walking out of the restaurant after dinner, she held my hand and I didn't break away. She said she would take me home, and I said I would take a taxi back. She insisted on taking me back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag, which said: Update ten chapters to unlock subsequent content.

Have you ever thought that the protagonist's original girlfriend was actually quite pitiful. She had endured hardships with the original owner for more than ten years, and the result was endless suffering. When she was prosperous, she didn't have a share, but when she suffered, she was the one who suffered. Many ex-girlfriends of the protagonist are so miserable. One person said that this is actually a disease, and the disease is not serious. My opinion of female protagonists is actually mostly about gold diggers, and most of those protagonists can choose better ones. Tch, do you think the so-called heroine is really willing to accompany the protagonist to endure hardships? The villain story has already explained that the heroine will accompany you through hardships, which does not exist. Only the wronged ex who was slapped in the face will accompany the protagonist to endure hardships.

How did you read it? It's an inexplicable slap in the face plot. Isn't the protagonist just a gold-fingered person? He has no personality charm at all. No wonder so many people criticize this kind of article.

My evaluation is the ancient version of Urban Dragon King

More than half of the conflicts are caused by the use of beautiful women, especially most of them who have no close relationship with the protagonist. One woman can write fifty chapters, twenty women can write a thousand chapters, and my niece can also write it. Just change the name.

I don't understand why the author wants to take advantage of the setting? ? ? ? The front foot set can be removed, and the rear foot can be eaten immediately and cannot be replaced. . I can't figure out what's going on in your head.

I just saw that this guy is the heroine. The protagonist is really a bitch. I'm impressed!

You can always find something really cool at the market. If you boast about it, it's all at level one. There must be something at level five, six, seven, eight or nine when collecting junk. It's too hard for Goldfinger. 🤫🤫🤫🤫

This book really discouraged me from quitting in the early stages of the book. First of all, the preparation to create a pretense and slap in the face was too obvious, and it felt very boring. In order to give the protagonist a follow-up pretense and slap in the face, you inexplicably hooked up with a neighbor who has nothing to do with the protagonist, and also hooked up with a beautiful talisman master. Does he have anything to do with the protagonist? This is obviously to pretend that the protagonist is either shocked, misjudged, or curious, and is just prepared for its use. Then the protagonist's IQ does have problems. The golden finger protagonist does not realize its own value at all. He is stunned, surprised, and shocked after getting something that can be equipped. It is understandable that the golden finger appears for the first time, but the follow-up is inexplicable. Shouldn't the protagonist have the idea that this is really the case? Is it because the protagonist doesn't understand the use of the golden finger, or is it that the protagonist simply can't understand the meaning of the golden finger? From this, we can judge that the protagonist has a low IQ, and by arranging so many female characters in the early stage, I don't know if the author is planning to create a harem or something as a foreshadowing, but it feels very boring when I look at it, it's too watery!

I can't stand it, it's all bullshit gossip. Are you a housewife between the ages of 4 and 50? You have nothing to write except gossip. All day long, either the pig-footed wife ran away, or the next door divorced, or the pig-footed wife is stingy and prodigal. You are either writing gossip or talking about gossip.

Is this book written in the same way as I have an equipment column, but no one has good writing skills, and I can't even write cool articles.

To be honest, I think it's pretty good and I have the desire to read it, but brother, your update speed is worrisome and it doesn't update every time I watch it. .

Especially the former wife and the two surnamed Lin, they are very dissatisfied. The first wife and the filial woman are not bad at writing. What role do the two surnamed Lins have? In the current writing environment where you can't drive, they are simply useless. It's just disgusting. The rest is okay, and the level seems to be normal after there are no female characters MD, I even subscribed to it for evaluation.

I'm really convinced. I exchanged the spiritual stones for money, the world of cultivation into the city, the magic weapons into luxury goods, and the cave heaven into houses. Isn't this the ancient urban plot of pretending to be a slap in the face? Really disgusting

Just because you withstood the scolding and accepted the monthly tickets from the two sisters, I gave them to you. I can't stand those eunuchs. They are unhappy in reality and come to misogyny in the book.

Want a cum

I saw it before, tsk, the author ran away.

In fact, I am quite optimistic about the author's previous work on Entertainment: My Singing Can Increase Attributes, and I also understand why the author wrote that book with so many criticisms, which eventually led to the novel Eunuch. I thought that the author would understand some of the reasons for the violent death of his novel after the previous book. You think you are objective in many analyses, but that is just from your own perspective. The fact is that many of the analyzes you think are objective are actually quite subjective, and subjective analysis cannot convince the public. Subjective analysis can only make people with similar ideas agree. Unfortunately, your set of ideas is not consistent with most readers of Qidian. In addition to the limited understanding of most readers, another reason is the strong exclusivity in your writing and thinking, which is an important reason for arousing readers' resistance.

Your score on this book is good, and you can continue to update it later when you have time. It's not a bad idea to increase your income. After all, there are still not many people with financial freedom.

It's a pity that he's just such a eunuch!