Age of Steam: I Became a God from the Fall

Either give it a golden finger. After reading twenty chapters, the protagonist is like being slipped away. There is no progress at all. One person can step on two feet.

The setting in this category can be considered very careful, and the plot can also feel clearly studied and designed, but the problems are also obvious: 1. The protagonist's characterization is messy, and the psychological description is scattered. If you want to create a three-dimensional character, you must use a lot of pen and ink to stack it, or focus on psychological activities in some chapters or use a coherent plot to highlight it. The author gives people a feeling that he wants both, but does not do any of them well. 2 The whole book is clearly in the third person, but it follows the perspective of the protagonist throughout and does not give anything beyond the perspective. The advantage of the third person is not used at all. Many plots are taken for granted without explaining the specific circumstances and the logic behind them. For example, the whole world knows about the protagonist, but every time a part of the truth is revealed, there is no foreshadowing and no explanation of the matter. 3 The climax is completely boring. The reason is not only a little problem with the writing power, but too little foreshadowing. , Your previous plots have not served your climax, so even the climax is very boring 4 The secondary characters are given little writing, and the plot is only given when they are getting along with the protagonist. It is still the same problem. The advantage of the third person is that it can cut out the perspective and give the reader information only from God's perspective, but you did not use it when shaping the supporting characters I can see this so far, I hope the author can work hard, I personally feel that this book is among the best in related themes.

Author, I want to ask a question. After the protagonist was tricked out, Dany had already started stabbing the protagonist with a knife. Although she didn't stab the protagonist, the protagonist was not cruel to Dany? Are you starting to care about each other? Logic? Novels require logic

The strange wind blew in front of me again, collect, collect

To mediocre people, we are mysterious and unpredictable. Fallen. Decay. It's chilling. You cannot understand where we came from or why we are what we are... Until you realize that we have not fallen, but have ascended. "

To be honest, it's okay but not as good as I imagined. It's a bit weak and indecisive for me.

To mediocre people, we are mysterious and unpredictable. Fallen. Decay. It's chilling. You cannot understand where we came from or why we are what we are... Until you realize that we have not fallen, but have ascended. "

I saw someone pushing a book and realized that this book has just started. I'll throw it on the shelf first and talk about it later.

Don't tell me, this princess Heidi is that female classmate Heiwei. This development is okay, but a bit old-fashioned. Support, support, support, come on💪💪💪,

The beginning is a bit slow. The atmosphere is well rendered, the characters are well-developed, and the text is quite delicate. Come on, I will get better and better as I write.

After reading three of them, I feel quite immersed in it. When did the author update it? I'll catch up on the third update, but 200 chapters is still a bit too little.

I have read a few of them and they are okay, but they are a little lacking. Please give me a monthly ticket to support them.

Very good setting, very interesting, looking forward to the development of the plot

I've been following it, and there have been a lot of updates recently. It's really fun to read, keep up the good work.

Buckle, poke, punch twice, spit out two to four chapters quickly (σ′▽‵)′▽‵)σ

The knife pulls the butt and opens the eyes. The content is rich enough, brothers!

The concept is quite clever, and the character creation is also good. Thank you to the author.