Start from Xianyue Sanxing Cave

The writing is a bit petty, and the protagonist cultivates the Golden Elixir Avenue! But the behavior is the same as if you have never heard the scriptures or met the teacher. Unable to wake up, willful and willful, full of anger. Each of them circulates the ten evils, the outer edge of the dust mirror, disturbing the body and mind, and the six sense organs move rashly! Three disasters have not yet come, but nine difficulties will stop us! What he cultivates is the true teaching of Taoism, and his mentality is truly the end of the world. Tao Te Ching. Not a trace of insight. I don't know the true meaning of the Three Treasures of Taoism. What a pity

What did you write about the Three-Star Cave with the Setting Moon? Forced conflict. I personally feel that it is quite outrageous. If it is the Three-Star Cave with the Setting Moon in Journey to the West, I remember that many of the children in it were enlightened. After all, he opened this place just to wait for the monkeys, and he didn't care about the rest. , It's hard to imagine that he will accept a lot of outsiders. After all, he can directly turn into a bunch of outsiders. There is no need to accept outsiders. Moreover, he is not a sect. He opened a three-star cave just to wait for the monkeys. Your three-star cave has created a faction and started a fight. I am really speechless =_=

Hurry up and end the Sanxingdong plot. The more you write, the smaller it gets.

The title is very attractive and the ideas are very good, but it is a pity that the author is not good enough. He turned a journey to the west into a small calculation of ordinary people in the market. Various characters have too many embarrassing words without brains, which is commonly known as brainless wisdom. By the way, the protagonist also has a strange brain circuit. I wanted to yell, don't bully the poor young man, but it is a pity that the author is not able to write it, so he just said, ignore me...

Haha, I really have been in Sanxingdong all this time!

So impressed... Is this quality meant for others to see? ? ?

Kill this girl. He thinks you are a tree demon. Let him know that you killed a real tree demon. As far as his tenth life is concerned, he will definitely seek revenge on you for the tree demon. Let me see first. If you stay with me and marry her, you can just abandon the book. Let me see if you will poison me later.

Taimoji, the strength gap is so big, shouldn't Small World just push it equally? It doesn't make any sense at all.

The fight between the Three Pure Saints and the Two Saints is for the sake of the prosperity of the sect, and the internal fight among the three sects is for the luck of being on the list. You are in Xie Yue Sanxing Cave, what do you want to fight for? Will Patriarch Bodhi inherit the inheritance after his death? It's just a matter of family feuding in private companies. If you're in a state-owned company, whose legacy do you want to inherit?

I spent a monthly pass to complain. The beginning was okay, but it started to feel weird when I went down the mountain from Xianyue Sanxing Cave. 1. The path chosen by the senior sister deliberately let the protagonist see zombies. As a result, the senior sister didn't know anything related to zombies. I don't even understand senior sister. Why let the protagonist watch it Chapter 2 and Chapter 28: The zombie and his son duel, the senior sister bets with the protagonist, the zombie agrees to one condition of the senior sister if the zombie wins, if the son wins, the protagonist will not go to Jinshan Temple, then inexplicably, he screams, and then freezes The corpse and the son are no longer written. The protagonist inexplicably agreed to someone else to take care of his grandson Xu Renyuan, and then said that what he gave was too much. The bet with the senior sister also came to nothing. The senior sister was offline inexplicably. What the hell, the senior sister tortured the protagonist for nearly two years. The protagonist went down the mountain, and for some reason the protagonist went to take care of his grandson, and she walked away 3. The protagonist met Xu Renyuan. Xu Renyuan was 14 years old. The protagonist was 7 or 8 years old when he entered Sanxing Cave. He had been practicing for three years. When they met, Xu Renyuan's son said that the protagonist was as old as him? 4. In Chapter 30, Huang Liang Yimeng was used to teach Xu Renyuan's daughter to read. He said that the magic power is really useful. When did this magical power come? It was so sudden. Oh my god, there is no antecedent. 5. The protagonist only broke through the foundation before going down the mountain. He has not reached the Golden Core realm or other realms. He can use magical powers, kill demons and eliminate demons, and fight in the river. Monsters, according to the frequency of encountering monsters, it is impossible that there are no masters. It turns out that the protagonist has always been very powerful. At this time, the protagonist's basic magical power is an extraordinary mortal swordsmanship, plus breaking the delusion, plus the swordsmanship given by the senior brother that everything can be a sword. He knows a few basic five-element spells but doesn't practice much, and he knows basic talismans but doesn't practice much. , Is it so powerful? That's the world of Westward Journey. Yes, there is also the Karma Red Lotus. This one is really powerful. If you can't beat it, throw the red lotus. At present, no one can master this move. It's so good to start with such a powerful red lotus. You don't even need to hit it. The world of Westward Journey is just a ball 6. There are so many holes that have not been filled. What happened to the main world? After so many years, the protagonist is still 8 How old are you? Are you still playing the game of Beast Control? Are your parents still there? Why do you write that there are 6 opportunities for tickets to the Samsung Cave? I am very confused. In a place like Journey to the West, is it really good to write a low-level protagonist who is so invincible? He keeps pretending to be beer. He is really not afraid of death. The people around him are still cooperating. The martial arts value of the immortal circle and the demon circle is so low that it is ridiculous.

In the battle between the lich and the demon, the demon emperor refined the witch-slaying sword for Jun, and the human race was almost exterminated. You don't want to talk about the blood feud between the human race and the demon clan.

Doesn't the author feel that the pace is too tense? Reading experience is very poor

Which sect does this protagonist belong to? Which sect is like a cult, killing each other, good guys, the devil's way is also cruel competition. What you are doing here is all about sex.

Obviously, the writing in the Beast Control Sect was okay. Although Golden Finger is not new, the writing method is still OK But when I arrived in the world of the Patriarch, it started to be inexplicable, and the writing style was too low-level.

Isn't it natural for humans to kill demons? Now those idiotic madonnas are so funny. The fight between the human-male race. What's there to say about opposing each other? What does it mean to be a good demon or a bad demon?

Fahai? Wukong didn't even come, and Fahai came many years after Wukong. I don't know what you think. And Fa Hai has not become an immortal, right...

Um😑, the first three chapters could have been written directly after traveling to the Beast Control Sect. It's too slow. The processing of the scene space transition is too rough. I feel that the author wrote according to his feelings without reading it again, which is not polished.

The way to insert contradiction is too harsh

The whole book is about the protagonist wandering between good and evil, this is right, this is wrong, morality

Has the name of this book been changed? Got tricked again

What the hell is this writing about? I'm speechless. It's a forced villain, and it's not like the catastrophe is rising. The writing is so bad that it slipped away.