Immortal Yuan of All Heavens: Become Qu Feiyan's Brother at the Beginning

A rubbish novel. In the first thirty chapters, she was seriously injured twice and fell into coma. After half a year of recovery, she inexplicably forcefully kissed Ren Yingying.

I thought I was Qu Feiyan at the beginning, but when I clicked on it, I turned out to be her brother. . . It's boring. Having a sister is poisonous and vulgar.

Start as Qu Feiyan, don't add an extra population for no reason 😁.

Such a rubbish novel, I'm speechless

Beware of poison. There is a new idea in the beginning, the identity of the Demon Cult is accepted in Huashan. Lu Dayou is nicknamed Six Monkeys because of his unconventional behavior, not his vicious words. Every time he speaks to the protagonist, he is full of malice. If you want to write a different plot, don't write a plot that robs the protagonist of opportunities. When Feng Qingyang passes on his skills, there are several different kinds of Qi in his body, and Ren Yingying is the heroine. This was all Linghu Chong's treatment, but you completely cut it off.

The routine is too poisonous, and the poison is gone: The remnant of the Demon Cult has a sister. Apprentice to Lao Yue.

What I wrote before is pretty good, but when I go back to the building to wash my hands in the golden basin, it's a little bit poisonous. Everyone knows that the plot still follows the plot.

It's so cruel to the master, he's seriously injured and falls into coma at every turn, I can't stand it!

Previously, he boasted about his family's martial arts skills, but was instantly wiped out by the elders of the demon sect. With Elder Qu here, he didn't even know that Yang Lianting was in power. Too wise

After reading Chapter 88, I felt that this book was a bit interesting, but not much. What disgusted me was that the author was too lazy and the basic plot would not change. It was like copying the outline of Swordsman without changing every word. The protagonist generally follows a tragic path, because the plot cannot be changed, the people who should be killed cannot be killed in advance, and what should happen will definitely happen. Basically, the character of the original Linghu Chong is divided into two, and the protagonist is divided into half, and then the protagonist's strength is improved a little, that's it. He said he wanted to become an immortal through martial arts, but in the end he just created a Tianyuan by combining the inner strength training of Zixia and evil spirits, and combined it with the swordsmanship of the Five Mountains. It's still a martial arts revenge novel, but the revenge is still unclear. To the east is a head, and to the west is a stick. Who should torture himself or not?

Damn it, if you look at it briefly, it's just a sand sculpture of flowing water with seeds planted everywhere.

The protagonist is not good, he has some brains but not much. Double standards also reflect too much of the author's personal feelings. The ten-year-old Lao Yue needs to be more careful with him. A good genius must confront Lao Yue. At the beginning of Swordsman, Huashan was in a precarious state and was about to be wiped out. The second son of the spy Lauderot is still the spy that Lao Yue has always known but dare not say or do anything.

The remnants of the Demon Cult join Huashan? Is Yue Buqun crazy? Don't talk about the difference between good and evil? You can call Yue Buqun a bad person, but he has never interacted with anyone from the Demon Cult.

I would like to ask first if this book contains the kind of giant poison that takes people through time travel?

My own feelings have nothing to do with you. Why do all the people who traveled through Xiaoao have an unclear relationship with Ren Yingying? While they despise Yue Buqun and Linghu Chong, who are villains, for their irresponsibility, association with the demon sect, and other shortcomings, they also have trouble with Ren Yingying. . . Anyway, I think it's all about illness and mental illness. . .

His whole family was killed just a few minutes after he crossed over, and he still had deep feelings for his native relatives. His whole family was killed just a few minutes after he crossed over, and he was crying over there because his parents and relatives were killed. Is this kind of writing a revenge genre from ten years ago? A revenge story about an abusive master?