Becoming an Immortal Begins by Being Stationed in Dawan Village

Still out of body after more than 700 chapters? You must be crazy thinking about money, you are so watery

One-third are memoirs. If this continues, I'm going to give up.

I started reading online books in elementary school, and now I have almost hundreds of novels about cultivating immortals. I have also read the self-reports of some authors, saying that a person sits at a computer desk and types thousands of words every day, which in itself is a test of endurance. We also have more understanding. Most people who have spent money to read it are very optimistic about this book. This process also continuously enriches the fantasy and colorful world of immortality in my heart. Therefore, we also give the author a lot of encouragement and hope that the author can complete his work better, because he is also the world of immortality in your heart.

I regret subscribing to so many chapters at once. I just want my money back now. It was fine before it was put on the shelves, but it was filled with water after it was put on the shelves. It took 11 chapters to fight three brothers who have nothing to do with the main plot, from chapter 107 to 118. I wanted to spend money to support you in writing a novel, but you just wanted to swindle my money 😄😄😄

Did this apprentice have several apprenticeships? The protagonist is endlessly robbed, killed and provoked, and the sect is as if it has become invisible. And how do you keep reading? One big realm is divided into ninety small realms. There are more than 500 chapters that have just reached the second big realm, level 7. I still read it in one breath. I really don't feel like it is watery after reading it. The first chapter is about internal fighting within the family, and more than 500 chapters are still fighting within the family 👍. The key point is that the strongest member of the family was beaten by the protagonist's master, but the protagonist was endlessly robbed, killed and provoked. The master was as if he was dead and didn't dare to say a thing. Or is it that his master was really dead when I skipped to watch it?

This kind of little white book was very popular 20 years ago. Many low-end and brainless settings even the current low-level migrant workers think are insulting their own IQ. For example, in any mature family, there will be situations where servants can bully their master at will! ! ? ? There are still authors who can write this kind of mentally retarded plot 😁

Nowadays, these immortal cultivation novels really make people don't know how to evaluate them. It doesn't matter that the first realm of cultivation is divided into nine levels and twelve levels, but it can be divided into further levels? Early stage of the fourth level of the Qi refining stage? Early peak? Is there still a "strong man" at the level of a "great master" at the fifth level of Qi refining, which is the peak of Dzogchen at the fourth level of Qi refining and the half-step of Qi refining? Also, at the first level of cultivation, there are layers of bottlenecks. At every level, you have to be so awesome that you break the upper limit of your body and transcend the bottleneck. How can you be practicing? You fully explain the famous line of the second grade: To be strong, you have to defy the heavens and be arrogant!

This book tells the story of a poor boy who was always worried about what to do if he had high triglycerides when he couldn't even eat enough.

I've read Chapter 96, the peak of the early stage of Qi training at the sixth level. It turns out someone really wrote this. I always thought it was abstract.

In fact, I can't blame the author. The author started to put poison in the introduction. It is obviously a no-brainer. A small family actually stabbed the knife in the back. This author is still addicted to the previous waste flow, divorce breakup flow, and family fighting flow.

How can I fill this sea of ​​yours with my little money? Clear soup with little water cannot quench my hunger. The more I drink, the thinner I become.

Brothers, I have already tried Poison. The first part was okay and pretty good-looking. Let's forget about it after the fugue. It's too poisonous. I guess it was written by someone else. It's not the same style at all. There's poison in the shit 😅

More than two million words have only reached the third major realm (the wandering mind). The progress itself is already slow enough. Each major realm has 9 levels, and each level is divided into the early, middle and late stages. There are ridiculously many psychological descriptions and side descriptions. The plot itself is actually okay, but there are ten chapters of a fight and several chapters of various shocks. Forget these situations, you still have to write a copy of the clone? Should you prepare 5 million words for the mysterious elixir? Or six million words? Can 10 million words go above the mysterious elixir? Do you plan to eat a book for a lifetime?

The writing is neither fish nor fowl. Neither is farming. It's not fun to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger. You go to a remote place and then have a mess of things to do and still have a miserable sleep. What you are writing is not about cultivating immortals. This structure will be exactly the same if it is used to open a company in the city.

I could have read it, but the author seems to be a mystery about the value of materials, and I can't read it if I don't have enough brains.

Each chapter always writes a lot of nonsense, just like a primary school student's composition.

The patriarch of the Shen family was so ruined that he could still continue to be the leader. He is also a fairy family.

Without the word "Dawan", based on this introduction, title, table of contents, and beginning, I wouldn't be able to arouse the slightest interest in reading it.

I gave up the book, talking about long paragraphs of nonsense over and over again.

I have read his old book "Cultivation: Three Years of Time Travel" before. I thought it was okay in the first and middle stages, but it was a mess at the end. It should be written like this. A big realm has nine small realms, the early stage, the middle stage, the late stage, the peak stage, the small perfection stage, and the great perfection stage. Each small stage has three or four hundred chapters. Water He has 30 to 40 million words and earns six figures a month. He is so scared. What they scold you is just to praise you and they are afraid that you will earn more. Ignore them. They are just jealous of you. You drive a luxury car and have a few mistresses. From then on, you will reach the pinnacle of life and never have to write a book again 🤓🤓

I have read the author's previous book, Super Water King Zhang Qingyuan, and this one is probably another one of Boundless Water.

If we don't speed up the progress, we really won't be able to keep up. . You have to spend money to buy starting coins 😅

You have traveled through time and returned to your sister's earth. You go home every day. You are just a loser on earth. What is there to miss?

Chapter 54: Jiangzhi, just for Dan Yao to agree to fight against the Shen family. Such a high profile is completely inconsistent with the low profile in the early stage. Currently, he does not have the strength to be high profile.

It's boring and cliche. A setting with ten levels of realms shows how stupid this book is.

This book is written in the same way as Ai. Could it be that Qidian. Com's paid books are all misleading?

The author's first book, Cultivation, begins with a three-year time travel. The early stage is really about becoming a god. I was still in college at the time. When I saw it, I really felt like I had the urge to find a treasure. I also shared with many classmates around me some of the author's complaints about the vulgar plots of various previous novels. Alas, it was a pity that the later years were all mixed up. In the last two books, I wonder if it was because the first book was too full of water that my literary talent was lost?

If you write at this pace, no more than 10 million words will be considered unfinished.

The proficiency of the first book can actually be seen in the author's training system, and his combat description skills are pretty good. For the second book, to be honest, too many previous lives in the early stage really affected the reading experience. After getting through the first fifty years, the taste came back, but who among the current readers would give so many opportunities? So the results are not good. The third book here is about farming. I look forward to the author writing a new and good work.

When rescuing people, is it usually when they are about to die? When being beaten by others, do you still have to slowly wear it down? And they are all of a higher level than you and yet you are still slowly draining them? ? If you have a special move, kill it instantly! ! What's the combo👻! Those chapters of Blood Slaughter of Three Heroes are too poisonous