Move the Heavens with Force

First of all, I have only read about 200 chapters so far, so this is just my current impression. Disadvantage 1: At the beginning, I thought it was pretty good, I knew how to tolerate it, and there weren't that many messy things in the family. But as it went on, it became more and more chaotic, with the protagonist running around, looking for trouble, and then trouble came. I officially entered the chapter of fighting monsters and upgrading, and hunting for treasure on the map. I still prefer the feeling at the beginning, the mentality of only doing it when you are sure. It feels like the protagonist has expanded. Two points, I feel that the division of strength is not very clear. I saw that there is no difference between Xiantian and Taiyuan. There seems to be no use in that idea. Furthermore, when you break through Xiantian, you still have to rely on human luck. I'm dizzy. Why are you so special? If Xiantian in the main plane relies on human luck to break through, how can your small place have so much luck and produce so much Xiantian? Isn't breaking through Xiantian all based on accumulation and those breakthrough pills? In summary, this is still a good novel, and it is very sensible. It is much better than those of the losers. Anyway, I think the losers are just rubbish. They have no resources and no talent. They spend several times the resources of others to get half of the skills of others.

The main thing is that the world is set up according to the original version, but I just made it look different.

It's so well written that it doesn't feel out of place even if the fight is in the city!

It's too ugly, especially in the realm of martial arts. The peak of the early days of the day after tomorrow has come out. It's strange. Why don't you just divide it into a hundred levels? Just talk about the number of levels of the day after tomorrow.

Even if you want to write that the map is big, that's not how you write it. There are tens of millions of people in one town. You are too cruel.

After reading dozens of chapters, I felt like vomiting. Regardless of category. Don't you think it's disgusting to just change the name of Swordsman? The whole book is ruined.

Well! There are really thousands of things I want to say, Whether you create it yourself or not, first of all, you should briefly introduce the background and humanistic atmosphere of the world, and then briefly and clearly point out the main plot development of the world, and then describe the protagonist of the dungeon and describe the villain. I've just mentioned it in one stroke, basically killing it with one palm. Except when fighting with the main villain and the protagonist, describe the fighting scene, [The villain uses the evil sword technique to fight against you, you quickly use the Dacheng's Vajra Immortal Power to resist it, and at the same time, use the Eighteen Palms of the Fist Dragon, the dragon has regrets, hit it...], Don't write it so complicated! , The villain used a flat stabbing move. This move is not that simple. This is a move he has practiced for more than 20 years. Although it cannot be said to be the strongest blow, it is not that easy to catch. This move made me feel that the space was collapsing, and everything around me was imprisoned, as if there were billions of people around me. The star is exploding. What the hell is going on after the 100-word description? Can you have a good fight? Isn't your feeling a little too rich? It's so annoying. It's embarrassing to be forced to write a star-studded boss the day after tomorrow. It doesn't mean that you can't write like this. It's usually the best. After the last blow, prepare to decide life and death, write down the ultimate move, how powerful and dazzling it is, add special effects, etc..., You can see for yourself, a fight between a small dragon set and a small dragon set, originally it was a one-stroke description of who won and the reason, it is not a description of the space confinement type that you hit Big pile, tired or not, tired or not... There are no grades in martial arts, only realms, only appropriateness. Some people use the same moves like an antelope hanging its horns. There is no trace to be found when switching and moving. It is natural and full of spirituality, just because it is suitable.

In the film and television world, everyone loves to watch it and feels immersed in it. As a result, you create a parallel world that is paradoxical and paradoxical! I no longer have a sense of immersion, I can't stand it anymore. I hate magic modifications the most. Either be original or respect the original work.

A very good novel, the fighting scenes are well described, the vocabulary is not boring, it is very contagious, and it is a very standard way of writing fantasy novels. The author's writing is unspeakable. In addition, the postures of strong men in the novel are very appropriately described, unlike some novels where the top strong men are treated like little gangsters. The only thing is that the original world is not appropriate. It is not that the writing is not good, but that some readers will not have a sense of involvement. In this case, no matter how good the writing is at the end, it is useless for this part of the readers to not be able to read it at the beginning. I hope the author will think carefully about his next book. If the author's writing style is good, many people will read it.

I have read more than a hundred chapters. Even with my reading skills of more than ten years, I still feel that this book is obscure. The reason for the obscurity is that the plot transitions are abrupt and illogical. Other books look like flowing water, but reading this book is like swallowing thorns. To put it simply, the author has no outline and poor writing style. There is no need for new readers to try again.

All I can say is that if you write an original world for me on Infinite Stream, I am also speechless. When I watch Infinite Stream, I just watch all kinds of time-traveling fandoms. If I want to see originality, why don't I watch fantasy?

I can't read the table of contents just by looking at it, I'm trying to persuade you to quit because of my strength.

I thought that by changing the name, I was original. The damn thing is that the background of the story of Zhutian is also written, vaguely reflecting it, for fear that readers will not be able to guess which novel it is. What a show of manipulation you have.

It's awkward to watch, as the characters in the book seem to be familiar but not recognized at the same time! It's better not to write about these characters!

Infinite streaming has no familiar world, who watches. Even the most essence of Infinite Flow has been lost. How can we write about Infinite Flow😆

If you can read the first 5 chapters, you can say that you are a Shennong.

Just started watching! In the first copy, you can see the shadow of the characters in Swordsman! Author, you said that the copy you wrote does not contain all kinds of martial arts and fantasy on earth, why did Mao plagiarize again? Interesting? You might as well just write a martial arts fantasy that travels across the earth! What's the point of plagiarizing and making a half-assed effort?

The protagonist keeps showing off all the way, and in the middle and later stages, when he has grown up, small characters can be sent to slap him in the face.

I was addicted when I saw Chapter 10! Just copy it, I also like to randomly change the plot settings and add some poisonous plots

Low martial arts, high ambitions, ahddd

There are too many sub-world chapters, and the transitions are too stiff, making it confusing to read.

It's so wordy (when I'm showing off), I felt sleepy after reading it

Damn, you're so verbose, and you're pretending to slap someone in the face again

Water poisonous, wordy, and rubbish

I misunderstood and thought it was activating the kidney stones in the body, allowing me to travel through the heavens 🤤

Accepted, this is a very good book with a poisonous start. The question is whether the poison is fake or not. Could you let the author know?

I ran away after watching it for ten minutes. It was so different from what I imagined.

Follow your own path and don't be in the shadow of others

Is there no heroine

A good start, check it out before commenting