Is My Pet Sand Table a Secret Realm from Another World?

The premise is good, but it's a mess. It's neither realistic nor realistic, it's not really about boxes or cultivation worlds; it's all a jumbled mess. The plot often jumps abruptly without warning, creating a disjointed feel. It completely lacks any sense of sophistication. Each story segment is only partially presented before the story abruptly ends, and those fragmented parts feel really weak and incomplete.

How about you let the main character develop a few hundred cards first? You brought up the spiritual energy revival so early, making the protagonist look like a clown. There are many examples. The key point is that you didn't initially state that this was a world with superpowers. Adding that later would be deceiving the readers. The author who wrote about lizards before.

Stop writing about reality! Your writing style is so bad it makes me cringe. And can you please write about the cultivation world? Not mentioning it at all has completely confused me. The protagonist inexplicably gaining divinity is even more baffling. Please, please, write about the cultivation world, write about the miniature garden, stop with that stupid reality!

If a scorpion's venom is potent enough, it can kill a person. Even a small figure in the sandbox would be completely poisoned by a single sting. Both Foundation Establishment and Core Formation cultivators would die, otherwise the protagonist's combat power would collapse. A Foundation Establishment cultivator can kill a scorpion, a Nascent Soul cultivator can kill a rat, and a Tribulation Transcending cultivator can kill neutral animals. Above that level, they can kill the protagonist.

This book's premise is so illogical that you can't really analyze it closely. After reading dozens of chapters, I still don't understand the actual size of the boxes and the miniatures. At first, they said they were the size of ants, but then they had to cut spider silk with a sword, and later they could wear Lego hats.

Currently, the protagonist's sandbox is entirely manually deployed by the protagonist, with consumers being the main force behind the deployment. Furthermore, in recent chapters, the protagonist has become dissatisfied with deploying basic consumers and has started deploying second- and even third-level consumers.

The first problem is that the secret realms are starting too frequently, not on the protagonist's side, but on the cultivators' side. The injuries from the last secret realm haven't even healed, and they're already coming back again. I've never seen such a brainless person. Increase the time flow, change the start time of the secret realms in the cultivator world to ten or a hundred years.

This idea actually came about a while ago, but the author wrote it well and the main character was portrayed reasonably well. However, the portrayal of the cultivators was very average. There were a lot of people, but none of them were memorable.

It feels like the author is going off-track. They should either accelerate the transition in the smaller world's plot to help the protagonist acquire power faster, or guide the spiritual energy revival in the real world to expand the influence of the Mitian, impacting reality and showing off their power while slapping others in the face—that would make the story interesting.

Short, this book is doomed if it continues to focus on reality.