Max-Level Comprehension: I Create the Path to Immortality in the Scripture Repository

The subject matter is good and the writing is good, but there is a problem. The reason why your title is very attractive is that after a hundred years of enlightenment, a dying old man began to practice spiritual practice. This can easily be understood as the image of a powerful hermit, but later he started to rejuvenate. I am not saying that cultivating immortals cannot be done, but this goes against the first impression you give readers. Secondly, if you want to write about the protagonist returning to old age and conquering the world, then this is the opposite of an old man who has seen through the world of mortals for a hundred years. Thirdly, your subject matter is suitable. For a gregarious portrait, don't focus on the protagonist, maintain the image of the protagonist as an old man, impart the method to Wudang disciples in an unobtrusive manner, and set off the protagonist from the side. It is no better than rejuvenating yourself and going around killing people. And a friendly reminder, once you start to rejuvenate, it is estimated that Readers will leave a lot, and there will be too much fighting and killing. The only thing that attracts readers is that the author is a hundred years old. Old man, he is about to start practicing spiritual practice. If you throw away all these, then your book may not be competitive, and readers will gradually run away. You are tired of aesthetics.

How to put it this way, if the protagonist doesn't practice, nothing will happen in Wudang. Once the protagonist starts practicing, everything will happen and it's hard to tell. After the protagonist starts practicing, he will be like a broom star, starting to spread bad luck and encounter everything. Nothing happened during the intervening 100 years of cultivation. You can appreciate it carefully for yourselves😊

Don't worry about touching your nose. Will the old man die if he touches his beard?

Don't keep hiding it too much. It's boring to write like this. It's almost time to reveal your identity. At least the few people at the core of the power should know. Otherwise, it's too frustrating to hide it all the time.

The whole story is basically the protagonist enjoying himself, and everyone else is just a tool to support the protagonist. The enemy doesn't even know the protagonist's level. People who keep coming are constantly being defeated, but they keep coming to send him off. Even if he is at his peak level, he doesn't need to give the dynasty any shame. There are still people coming to send him off. The protagonist also kept pretending and asked a child to act as an intermediary. Soon the child began to send secret books and created a dream where the immortal taught the Dharma and said that it had nothing to do with you, Senior Brother Gu. Do you believe it? Reveal as much as you need to. There's no point in keeping yourself entertained.

Garbage is very poisonous and entered by mistake

It is definitely produced by a studio and plays the same level as the game.

I can't stand the first few chapters. It's only been 100 years since I returned to my master's school. I have deep feelings and ended up hiding everything. I still have deep feelings after raising a dog.

Can you stop touching your nose? Isn't it more natural and pleasing to the eyes for older people to touch their beards? Besides, even young people, who would touch their nose all the time in daily life? Is it easy to be seen as picking your nose? 😅

Isn't this the idea behind a Tomato book? Now starting point has been reduced to copying tomatoes?