Fortune and Misfortune: Starting with the Six-Line Tortoise Shell

In the middle of the third level of Qi training, when I saw this, I had no desire to continue reading.

Half-step to perfection in the middle stage of the third level of Qi training 🤭 What is the ancient poisonous point?

Cut it out, there is no sense of immersion at all, and the protagonist goes to this island and then to that island to do business. You, a famous power in the East China Sea cultivation world, look like a ravine. Each island in the sect may not be more than a mile in size. The protagonist, an ant at the beginning of Qi training, goes to these places just like a mortal going to a park a few hundred meters away to enjoy the cool. It is simply written in a mess.

Don't be thoughtful anymore, there are only a few chapters in total, so come here and think about it every now and then🔨

I've borrowed too much from it, it's completely following Wen Chao Gong's Qi Dao training route. . . .

This author doesn't even know what Liuyao is, so don't mess with the title of the book

This book must have been re-released after being replaced many times. 🤫 The plot is very familiar, and I feel like I have read it many times.

The protagonist has a lot of skills, and the opportunities he gets are also very good. I'm afraid that the protagonist will get too many opportunities later, but the combat power will not increase too much. So far, it is still very good, and there is no overwhelming combat power. I hope the author can make good plans for the future.

Cut it 🤭

Not bad, you can take a look. Work hard to update 💪(ง•̀_•́)ง.

The author is quite ambitious. With unlimited equipment, the protagonist encounters treasures that can turn disaster into good fortune. It looks like he is going to bring together all the protagonists from the past, Golden Finger. There are no training conditions for equipment.

Is he now a great monk in the foundation building stage?

It's pretty good among similar people. Come on.

? I think it's okay? I can't read other immortality writings. What's wrong with the overwhelming combat power? Just be reasonable! Just like having fun? Personally, I think the disadvantage is that I'm too lucky and it's not easy to be stubborn, and I still get attention from others.

I have read a similar novel, and I feel that your writing is not as attractive as that one. I can't say it is poisonous, but it feels bland and boring to read. There is nothing to attract me to read further.

Hmm, I didn't see enough, 🔪 speed update

You need to write more than 3,000 words per day.

Just passing by, I am the second one to post, and I follow the author, so I don't care about them.