Fairy Room

Xiong Quchen

The opening chapter is full of interrogations, the background foreshadowing is also fragmented, and the male and female characters are also Qiong Yao. I feel bitter, but I won't say it.

I just want to say that in May, when everyone is vying for the title, can my book reach 2 million words? 😭😭😭

The plot and imagination are quite good, but the dialogue between the characters is so annoying that I feel like there are some places where the preface and the follow-up are inconsistent.

I have read it and write a few lines to briefly talk about my feelings. It can be seen that the author has little experience in writing full-length novels, and his handling of rhythm is not very good. In addition, the emotions he wanted to convey were not handled properly. To put it simply, what the author wanted to convey and the reader's feelings after reading were not on the same channel. This resulted in the intense parts not being intense enough and the gentle parts not being so gentle. Although the overall reading was very good, from the reader's point of view there is still a certain gap between what the author wanted to write. This may be one of the differences between you and those masters with top writing skills. But the author should not be discouraged. These are very common problems. As you gain more experience, as long as you consciously improve them, you will make rapid progress. Therefore, I also hope that the author will not give up easily. Only in long-form writing can he develop the ability to control a complete long novel. If he simply gives up, he will never be able to improve his processing ability in the middle and later stages of the novel. In addition, although I have used a lot of words to describe the shortcomings, overall, this can be regarded as a good work. The author's writing is smooth, and in many places you can clearly see the author's penmanship in depicting subtle details. There is also a lot of aura in the text, and the upper limit is still relatively high. I still hope that the author will persevere even if the results are not good (I have seen many good authors give up due to early difficulties, which is a pity in my heart). Without the accumulation of readers, there are only a handful of people who can write very good results in one book, and If we can ensure the quality, write carefully, keep it updated, and work hard to make progress, I believe that with the author's ability, he will definitely be able to achieve very good results (believe me, among the seedlings I was optimistic about before, I either cut them early, and those who persisted without exception have achieved some results). That's all for now. The author may go through a rather torturous period, but please persevere as much as possible. Finally, I want to ask if this book has a single heroine or a harem. Can you reveal who the heroine is now? 🙂

It's well written, maybe it's a little more discouraging at the beginning.

After reading Chapter 36, the main character has no characteristics. The main reason is that there are too many other descriptions, and the protagonist does not play any role and has no initiative.

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What novel is it and what story is it telling?

Generally, there are so many tags in the introduction, so it is easy to get confused 🤭

It's a pity that in the fast-paced era, it is difficult for such a book to succeed (the more carefully you write it, the greater the frustration). I hope the author can find the joy of creation again in the future. It doesn't matter if the book is cut, the most important thing is that people can be happy. I wish the author all the best.

The writing is good and the writing style is comfortable. It is worth reading. I hope I can stick to it until it reaches two million words.

Nice! Come on! Although some parts are difficult to understand, it suddenly becomes clear after seeing the back.

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After reading the first chapter, I felt like the writing was interesting

I cast two recommendation votes, keep it up.

How about Zhao Yue'e

Whatever is flowing, others will run away after seeing it.

From the current point of view, the author is planning to go towards the twilight of the immortals. I don't know whether the battle to ascend to the sky is to establish the heaven or to fight for the Tao Fruit or the heaven? Alas, I can't find any fairy tales that end with a smooth ascension. The protagonists always have to do big things: either canonize the gods and establish heaven, or gain access to heaven and earth, or eliminate demons and save the world, or become transcendent, or even several of them together. Even the so-called daily fairy tales have to be written like this.

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Borrowing my precious treasure, I recommend a book that is decisive in killing, nonsensical and clever, and full of joy. "The old man picked up rags in time and made a living by making bad movies", which is hilarious...

Words are good words, but stories are not good stories 😴

Well written, good luck to the author, the writing is very good.

It's well written, but why are there no people there?

Come on, there are currently very few good books written in the style of Qidian. This book currently seems to have potential. If it is written well, it will have a bright future.

I like your original introduction better and can add it below.

Xiong Quchen