A Mortal's Journey to Immortality Begins with Being a Handyman in Alchemy.

With this golden finger, I feel that I should go to the secular world, practice martial arts, live a peaceful and happy life, and wait for the Nascent Soul to come out to cultivate in the immortal world.

After seeing the latest chapter, I couldn't help but make the same comment as others. Are you sure you are a fan of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality? It's almost 40,000 words, all original work? Since you are writing a fanfic, you should at least arrange for the original character to appear, not necessarily the protagonist, but at least let us know that you are a mortal fanfic, right? Otherwise, many people would come here for the Mortal fandom, and after reading more than 40,000 words, they would find that they are all original, which would definitely not be able to retain people.

Since you can build a foundation if you live to be a hundred years old, why should you become an immortal? Why don't you just go to the mortal world and become a free and easy emperor?

Since Golden Finger has to wait until he is a hundred years old before he can make a qualitative change, then your previous Qi training lacks highlights. Why not start before and after foundation building?

Great article, must order all, come on!

Is this a mortal worldview? Is there Old Mo Han behind?

It's almost enough to form a pill at a hundred years old, but to build a foundation at a hundred years old, it's better for the protagonist to cultivate on his own and find opportunities.

I've also read the author's Immortal Room, and it's of a certain standard. I wanted to write a good plot. The book is not always good, just my humble opinion. The decline in follow-up reading must be because the subsequent plot has not attracted readers. The old Dengqiu has a routine of first writing a big scene and laying out the overall view of the world first, and secondly, focusing on the scenes of showing off in front of others or pretending to be a slap in the face. Most Qidian readers like to watch this. Your current writing method is slow to get started, but you want to achieve results immediately, which is the opposite. One more thing I would like to say is that your book, using Qidian's terminology, does not have a "fairy" flavor. It is too market-oriented, and even the fairy tales are boring. It is more like martial arts. It is not inconsistent at all to replace all the monks in it with martial arts, and it can be considered a lightning point. That's pretty much what I want to say. In fact, I'm not a mainstream reader. I've never been able to read cool articles, so it's up to you how much you want to listen to. See you soon.

The subject matter is actually interesting. What other trolls said about going to the mortal world has been explained in the article, and they also talked about practicing martial arts. 😅 What achievements can a useless person achieve by practicing martial arts! The textbooks are all the same, so how come so few people get into Tsinghua and Peking University? They just sprayed there without looking and were speechless. But it is true that living happily is actually the correct answer. We should write about how to live happily in daily life. Come on, author, it's still very interesting!

Let's see if this symbol meets everyone's expectations.

Pharmacist Sun is here

Well written, updates are a bit slow

Don't look at the detailed plots about Qi training and the formation of the elixir after the foundation is established. I don't want to read too much about the eunuch after the elixir is formed.

It feels pretty good for a 15-year-old bookworm. . . What a pity