Gao Wu: I Practiced My Liver Thousands of Times and Became a Martial Saint

There is nothing wrong with what you wrote, but you wrote the increase incorrectly. The first time, from over 500 kg to over 1,000 kg, the increase was 100% (double), not 50%. The second time, when 800 was increased to 1,600, you wrote 2 times again. Someone reminded me before, but you didn't change it. It's really affecting.

The downfall of this book is that the heroine is revealed in just a dozen chapters, and there is almost no desire to read it. The most taboo thing about the upgraded novel is that the heroine is described too much.

Why does the teacher write about high school students? To be honest, you might as well write about a young man who has been struggling in society for four or five years. Such a person's ability to survive is much better than that of high school students. How much ability can today's high school students survive in a chaotic order?

This book already has a 30,000-word outline and will continue to be written in the future. The overall style focuses on quick upgrades without ink stains! When I first conceived it, I wanted to write a more passionate and upright protagonist: he rose from a high school student to be able to turn the tide and save the world from fire and water... Brothers who think it is good can click and collect it! Then take the time to click in and refresh to the most recently updated chapter. Thank you!

The first one is as bland as water, and the second one is that the golden finger is too big, which loses the meaning of the novel. It is better to just announce that the protagonist has become a god and the whole drama is over.

This is very well written, why is the data so poor?

The author's writing is very supportive, and I would like to recommend a new book that has just been released Jidao's original world Zhutianliu. If you are interested, you can come in and take a look: Jidao Strange Demon